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Post by hollygirl on Oct 3, 2006 3:01:26 GMT 10
Luka Kovac made his way across the street to a small diner that opened a few weeks ago. He shook of the snow, that had piled on his broad shoulders, and opened the door. it was dead inside..there was a an old man sitting at the counter..and some teens at a booth..he looked around and then sat at the counter..when he saw her he couldn't believe his eyes..he had seen this woman 3 times today.
He saw her at the jumbo mart...when he was waiting for an ambulance he saw her standing outside leaning against the wall...just staring up at the sky, watching the snow fall...there eyes met at that moment..and they smiled at eachother...and this morning..he had sat next to her on the EL...this wasn't quincidence...this had to be a sign...
When she looked over at him, she looked just as surprised, and smiled slightly. "Whose that?" Luka heard an older woman ask the young brunette..."I don't know..but this is the 4th time I've seen him today.."
"Thats gotta be a sign hunny..go talk to him."
"No..."
"You have to....because its just you and me here..I'm off..and your closing."
"No..no..Deb...please don't leave me here..."
"Go take his order... now." She said putting her coat on and quickly leaving. Luka watched the young woman take a deep breath and then make her way over to the counter. Her dark hair was up in a clip..with pieces falling out around her face...her eyes were big and brown..and Luka couldn't look away from them.
"Hi, I'm Abby, what can I get you?"
I know this a little different.......Keep going?
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Post by jadestar on Oct 3, 2006 3:02:50 GMT 10
yay definitely - sounds great!!!
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Post by loopyallie on Oct 3, 2006 3:26:57 GMT 10
Great start  Keeping on going...  |
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Post by Rach :) on Oct 3, 2006 3:32:01 GMT 10
definetely keep going its so different
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Post by ERFanRach on Oct 3, 2006 6:10:40 GMT 10
Great start. Keep going
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Post by hollygirl on Oct 5, 2006 11:25:00 GMT 10
"uhh..just a coffee." Luka said looking up at this beautiful woman..who now had a name..Abby..and Abby was beautiful..even if she was all messy and dirty from working...She gave him a quick smile, and then walked over to a counter. oh my god...he is so gorgeous. she thought to herself.
She came back and set a mug in front of him pouring the last of the coffee in it. "It might be a little cold..I could make a new pot if you'd like?"
"No..this is fine thank you."
"Cream? Sugar?"
"No thanks...I like it black." She nodded, and walked back into the kitchen. When she came back out, she noticed he was wearing a white lab coat..and had a stethoscope around his neck. "So...you..um..work at that hospital?" She asked starting to wipe down the counters.
"Yeah."
"What do you do?"
"I'm an emergency physcian...I'm Luka by the way..Luka Kovac."'
"Are you...like an attending..or resident..or.."
"Attending.."
"I always wanted to do that." Abby said jumping up, and sitting on the counter.
"What?"
"Be a doctor..work in the ER...I went to med school...but..never graduated."
"Why..What happened?"
Just as Abby was about to answer..she saw a few kids standing outside the door...her kids.."They happened." Luka turned around, and became a little disappointed when he saw the 4 kids standing outside...one of them holding another one..making it 5 kids..she was married...why wouldn't she be...shes beautiful...She hopped of the counter, and greeted the children that walked in...as Luka thought about it..he didn't see a ring on her finger..
"What are you guys doing here? Its almost 11...how did you even get here?"
"We took the EL."
"The EL? Danielle...you can't just take your sisters and brother on the EL..and walk around Chicago at 11 o'clock at night."
"It wasn't even my idea..they all wanted to come down here..."
"Well..its your job, to be the responsible one...and say no."
"I shouldn't have to take care of them at all...their your kids...your the parent.."
"Ok...we'll talk about this later." Abby turned around and noticed the other 3 kids sitting at the bar...all talking to Luka...
"Guys..how about you go with Danielle in the kitchen..and all help yourselves to ice cream or whatever...'
"Ok.." they all shrugged, and slid off the seats.
"Wait..gimme Ty." Abby took the small boy into her arms, and walked over to a booth laying him on the seat. She walked back over to Luka and sat next to him.."So, your married?"
"No.."
"Divorced?"
"No....uh...thats probably the biggest reason..why I didn't graduate....My husband..past away...last year...."
"I'm sorry.."
"...he was diagnosed with Cancer...and I had to drop out of school..to pay for treatment...and with him gone...theres just no way I could go back......but..um..I don't want talk about that anymore....so..tell me about you...obviously..someone wanted us to talk today..or we wouldn't of seen each other 4 times."
"OK...well...um..I'm from Croatia....you already know I'm a doctor."
"What about your family..are you married? do you have kids?"
"I have 3 children...My wife was killed in a bombing during the war...and after she died...I came here....with my son Marko, and daughters Jasna and Gabby."
"Oh..god, I'm so sorry...."
"What are your kids names..and how old are they?" He said changing the subject.
"Uh..the little guy over there is Tyler..hes 3...the one who was holding him was Danielle..shes 15...then theres Grace..shes 10...Jayla is 8 and Ella just turned 6....how old are your kids?"
"Jasna is also 15 ... Marko is 5 and Gabby is 7 is " Abby looked down when she felt Tyler pulling on her pant leg..."Hey buddy..." She said picking him up. He wrapped his legs around her waist and rested his head on her shoulder, sucking on his thumb.
"We should do this again sometime...only...instead of me serving you cold coffee..some else could be serving us warm coffee...and there will be no children."
"I'd like that." Luka said, smiling at Abby. She smiled back, and there eyes met...they couldn't look away....His eyes are amazing.. she thought to herself...and we have some things in common...we both have kids..hes a doctor...I wanted to be a doctor...we both lost our spouses....we both like black coffee....and there has to be more.... He just might make me start believing in signs..and fate...and everything happens for a reason....love at first site....stuff like that.....maybe...just maybe this could turn into something more.....
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Post by <3 LubyII <3 on Oct 5, 2006 11:33:05 GMT 10
Great update!
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Post by maggie on Oct 5, 2006 11:43:03 GMT 10
oh, good lord, eight children between the two of them? yikes. but either way, i'm enjoying this fic. the whole "love at first sight" thing is so sweet.
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Post by Little Amy on Oct 5, 2006 12:12:05 GMT 10
umhhh great fic.... I just don't think I can see Abby with five kids...or letting one of them talk to her the way Danielle did.... well it's just a thought.... but I wanna see where are you going with this |
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Post by erfan228 on Oct 5, 2006 12:35:29 GMT 10
I love this fic. It's very different than all the others! I hope you update soon!
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Post by rorygilmore on Oct 5, 2006 16:15:18 GMT 10
OMG!!! This is gonna be like the real 'Yours, Mine & Ours' movie. Full of kids driving their parents crazy! BTW-love the name Danielle, we've got the same exquisite taste in picking names ...lol .  UPDATE SOON!!! Can't wait to read when the 2 bunches meet each other..chaos is coming! |
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Post by ERFanRach on Oct 5, 2006 19:31:23 GMT 10
Great Update
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Post by Lubyfanatic316 on Oct 5, 2006 20:41:13 GMT 10
Great Update!
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Post by steffi1986 on Oct 6, 2006 5:12:14 GMT 10
wow this is really great, please update soon   |
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Post by hollygirl on Oct 6, 2006 6:38:07 GMT 10
Ok, I know this is fic is pretty different...5 kids is a lot...but I was thinking of some new ideas..and this crazy one just popped into mind....Abby and Richard were happily married before his death...and..I added a kid to Luka's family...because I wanted to... I like the name Gabby...and wanted to add it.. heres the next update...and thanks for all the comments..glad you guys are liking this so far.
As Abby walked up the stairs she could hear music blasting..and she knew it was coming from her apartment...When she opened the door, the girls were all dancing around the living room..singing as loudly as possible..she looked around at the mess, and sighed..this place was not big enough for the 6 of them..but it was all she could afford. The girls all said hi, and continued to sing and dance..Abby walked into the kitchen and put the groceries on the table..and underneath the table was Tyler..with a bottle of chocolate syrup. He smiled at her, and waved, giving her his innocent look.
"Hi mommy!"
"Hi...do you want to come out from under there?"
"No!" he said shaking his head...Abby squatted down, and pulled the chair out of the way..he was covered..and as she looked aruond..so was most of the apartment..
"Baby...give mommy the chocolate." He shook his head, and squeezed some onto the floor.."Ty..why did you do that?" He didn't answer he wiped his hand over it, and then licked his hand up and down."
"Ugh....don't do that honey..the floor is dirty.." She pulled him from under the table, and walked into the bathroom. She started the bath, and then undressed him. He took off running, and the girls all laughed, when they saw him running through the living room butt-naked.
As Abby was chasing him, there was a few loud knocks on the door, and she walked over and opened it. Her mouth dropped when she saw who it was. The music turned off, and the girls all walked over to the door....their smiles faded.."Aren't you going to invite me in Abby?" Beth asked. She was Richards unbearable mother..the minute Abby met her..she didn't like her.
"Sure..come on it Beth." Abby swung the door open..and Beth walked in. Her face looked disgusted..and when she saw Tyler jumping on the couch naked, she looked at Abby annoyed.
"Its good to see you still know how to keep a good home."
"Yeah..I just got back from the store...it wasn't like this when I left."
"You just left the kids here? oh wait..you leave them here all the time..."
"Look..Beth...did you come here to tell me what a bad mother I am? Because if you did...you wasted your time...I don't want to hear it...I don't need to hear it...I've heard it before..thats all you ever tell me...and you know what..you have no room to talk...you think you were a good mother?" Beth's face looked horrified..all these years..Abby had never spoken to her like this.
"YOU WEREN'T! you were not a good mother..and your not a good grandmother either."
"At least I kept my home clean..and I never left my son home alone.."
"They're not alone...Danielle is in highschool..shes responsible..my 15 year old daughter doesn't need a babysitter.."
"Oh...yes..I see how responsible she is..I can tell by looking around."
"They made a mess..they'll clean it up."
"I'm sure they will...you really should think about finding a bigger place....this tiny 2 bedroom apartment isn't big enough for the 6 of you..I mean all 4 girls are in one room...Tyler's bed is in your room...Rich-"
"Get out." Abby said cutting her off..Beth looked even more shocked. "What did you say?"
"You heard me! I said get out....just leave ok!?"
"Abby...I came here to talk to you.."
"We talked..now get the hell out!"
short update another will be up later.
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