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Post by ERFanRach on Oct 8, 2006 8:35:05 GMT 10
Great Update!!!
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Post by Lubyfanatic316 on Oct 8, 2006 9:25:01 GMT 10
Update soon!
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Post by rorygilmore on Oct 8, 2006 21:01:19 GMT 10
Loved Danielle and Abby's conversation. Liked the way how she encouraged her mom to move on, really nice. Most kids have problems with their parents dating new people. This kids really love their mom, they wanna make her happy. Beautiful! Awww...and loved the way little Tyler talked...he's so cute!!!
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Post by jadestar on Oct 8, 2006 23:38:11 GMT 10
a really wonderful update - Danielle is a great girl
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Post by strausser on Oct 9, 2006 0:38:52 GMT 10
danielle is so cool!
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Post by hollygirl on Oct 9, 2006 2:09:20 GMT 10
Luka is sitting on the couch, 2 kids on either side of him. They are all staring at him. When he sees Danielle and Abby walk out, he stands up. The kids also stand up and follow Danielle into their room. Except Tyler..he walks over to Luka and pulls the stethoscope from his pocket. "Tyler...did you just take that from Luka's pocket?" Abby asks looking down at him, listening to the floor with the stethoscope. "Yeth, I did." he says looking up at her. "Baby, thats steeling."
"I wasth gonna give it back." Abby and Luka both laugh. Tyler takes it out of his ears and reaches his arm out handing it back to Luka. "Sowwy."
"Do you want to keep that?"
"Luka...you don't have to do that."
"No..its fine, I have another one."
"Can, I keep it mommy? pwease?"
"Yeah, now...what do you say?"
"Tank you."
"You're welcome."
"Danielle." Abby shouts.
"Yeah?" She asks walking out into the living room, followed by the rest of the girls.
"I'm leaving...now, you are all going to be good..and listen to Dani right?"
"Yes mommy."
"And..Tyler..you are going to go to bed, when she says right?"
"Wight!"
"Ok...and Ella..did you eat your vegetables?"
"No.." She mumbles looking down at her feet.
"Eat them." Abby walks over and kisses them each on the cheek before her and Luka head out of the apartment. "I just got out from work..so I was thinking we could stop by my place..you could meet my kids..and I could change."
"Thats fine."
They walk out of the building and the first thing Abby sees is a porch.."dammmnnn." Abby thought to herself. Luka opened the door, and she was about to sit down when Jayla stuck her head out the window of the apartment. "MOM!" Abby sighed and walked back closer to the building. "WHAT?!" She yelled back.
"BETH IS ON THE PHONE!" Abby rolled her eyes..."I'M NOT HOME!" Jayla nodded, and turned back to the phone..after a few seconds she looked back down at Abby. "SHE SAID ITS IMPORTANT!"
"I bet it is.." Abby mumbled to herself..."I'LL CALL HER TOMORROW."
"BYE MOM!" She closed the window, and Abby turned back to Luka. "Sorry about that ..."
"Its ok..I'm sure no one heard you." he said jokingly. Abby laughed..and blushed a little. "Beth..is my mother-in-law...shes a real bitch.."
"Oh....I'm lucky..I don't have to deal with mine..she lives in Croatia.."
"You are lucky." Abby said, before Luka closed the door.
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Post by steffi1986 on Oct 9, 2006 2:24:47 GMT 10
that was great please update soon
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Post by erfan228 on Oct 9, 2006 4:31:08 GMT 10
Great update!
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Post by jadestar on Oct 9, 2006 4:53:55 GMT 10
update soon - want to read some more 'action'
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Post by ERFanRach on Oct 9, 2006 7:31:17 GMT 10
Update Soon!!!
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Post by <3 LubyII <3 on Oct 9, 2006 11:45:24 GMT 10
Awesome update!
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Post by Lubyfanatic316 on Oct 9, 2006 11:47:45 GMT 10
Great Update!
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Post by hollygirl on Oct 9, 2006 11:50:13 GMT 10
The car ride was quiet. Abby and Luka would glance over at the other every now and then..but they didn't really say anything...finally Luka spoke.. "Tell me everything about you...I want to know everything there is to know."
"Everything?" Abby asked.
"Everything."
"That could take a while."
"I'm a good listener."
"Ok...you asked for it...My mom is bi-polar...my brother is too...my dad left us when I was about 10...I could go on and on about them..and my crappy childhood..but I'm not... thats all I'm going to say about them...This is the first date I've has been on in almost 20 years...I met Richard in highschool..sophmore year...he asked me to homecoming...we started going out...we were the cutest couple in our grade. Richard was a jock...I was quiet...I was smart...but I wasn't a nerd.. Richard always told me I was prettier than any blond cheer leader..We weren't like regular teenage couples...when we said I love you..we meant it..most kids just say it..to say it."
"Keep going.."
"Ok...we lost our virginity together...it was the end of senior year...our 3 year anniversry...we did it in Richard's father's truck...9 months later, Danielle was born....5 months after that we were married, and living in an apartment near the college...Richard had daytime classes, I had night...so someone would always be with the baby....we graduated, moved...and had Grace....we moved again, this time to Chicago closer to Richards parents...His father gave him a job in his construction business.. I started going to med school.. in between all that Jayla, Ella, and Tyler were all born."
"You conceived your daughter in his fathers truck?"
"Yeah...he never found out.." Luka laughed..and Abby blushed.."Is that it?"
"No..there's more..shall I keep going?"
"If you don't mind.."
"Ok then... When Tyler was almost a year old...Richard collapsed at work....he blamed it on not eating...not sleeping..not taking care of himself...he took time off work...he got better and went back...he left early almost everyday..from being too tired....finally he told his dad he was quitting...I didn't know this...every week he would have a "paycheck" that was just a regular check from his dad...Richard would stay home and sleep...I would get home, and he would be on the couch...I knew something was wrong..something just wasn't right. He stopped eating..never had an appetite..never had energy to play with his kids..."
She was starting to get choked up, and Luka could see the tears forming in her eyes.."You can stop.."
"No..its fine...I never talked about this..and I think I need to..."
"Ok..if you're sure.."
"He..uhhh... kept getting worse....he collapsed on the stairs one day...it was him and the kids...they all freaked out...Danielle called 911..and then me...thats when I found out Richard had quit his job...they did blood work..it didn't come back so great...then they did a bone marrow biopsy...he was diagnosed with cancer..and moved to oncology...he went though the Chemo...and..I just..hated seeing him go through that...and the kids..it was just really hard on them...the doctors all told him..you beat Richard..you did it...that happiness only lasted so long....we did the chemo again...and a bone marrow transplant....that didn't work...he said he didn't want to do chemo anymore..that he was fighting a lost battle.....that everything happens for a reason..that is was his time to go...that..."
her voice trailed off, and the tears were pouring from her eyes now..."I'm sorry.." She said wiping her eyes. Luka reached his hand out, and placed it on top of hers.."Its ok." Abby looked down at their hands..hers fit perfectly in his..."Would you like a tissue?" Abby laughed a little, and nodded looking up at Luka.."Thank you.." She flipped the mirror down, and wiped the running make up from her cheeks. when she closed it, she saw a big iron gate opening....
"You know...you're going to have to tell me you're life story later on right."
"Will you think less of me, if I happen to cry too?"
"No..not at all...in fact, I might cry with you..it breaks my heart to see a grown man cry." Luka smiled and looked back at the drive way..which to Abby looked like a small road.."Why was this road, blocked by a gate?"
"This isn't a road..this is a driveway.."
"One big ass drive way..."
"Yeah..I know..I like my privacy.." Luka parked the car, and Abby's mouth dropped..."This is your house?"
"Yeah.." Luka got out of the car, and walked around to Abby's side. He opened it and held out his hand..She didn't even notice..she was staring at the mansion before her. "Abby?" She snapped out of it and turned to him. She smiled and took his hand. Luka closed the door, and they walked down a small pathway leading to two big doors. Luka opened them , and Abby stepped inside.
Her mouth dropped even more as she looked around. above her was the most beautiful chandelier she had ever seen in her life...and in front of her was a staircase....it went up leading to double doors..and then the stairs went to the right and left..leading to different hallways. "Good evening Dr. Kovac..and who is this beautiful young woman?"
"This is Abby....Abby..this is my butler James."
"You have a butler?" Abby asked quietly. Luka nodded. "Can I take your coat?"
"Oh, we're not staying...I just stopped home, to change..and introduce Abby and the kids."
"Ohh..would you like me to get them?"
"Yes, thank you." James walked up the stairs and to the left...while Abby followed Luka through the double doors...inside was his bedroom...."Holy shit...this is bigger than my whole apartment....do you..uh..want me to wait outside so you can change?"
"I can change in the closet..its pretty big.."
"Right..." Abby sat in a chair by the window, looking down at a garden.. Luka came out and they both walked back downstairs..in the living room sat 3 children..when they saw their father they all stood up and walked over to Luka and Abby.
"Abby, these are my kids, Jasna..Marko..and Gabrielija.....guys this is Abby."
"Its nice to meet you." Jasna said.
"You too."
"Daddy, can I go to Lexi's tomorrow?" Gabby asked.
"Gabby, we'll talk about it tomorrow..alright? We're going to get going....and its a school night, so just because I'm not home, doesn't mean you don't have to go to bed."
"Ok..."
"Ok..I'll be home later.." Luka and Abby walked back out to the car..again he opened the door for her..not even Richard did that....When he was in, Abby looked at him shocked. "You live there?"
"Yeah..."
"All the time?"
"Yeah.."
"God..your house is amazing..and your kids are really sweet...seemed well behaved."
"Oh, trust me..they're not."
"Well...Luka..its your turn to tell me your life story....I am all ears."
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Post by erfan228 on Oct 9, 2006 13:04:51 GMT 10
I loved that chapter. It was so sweet and sad. Please update soon!
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Post by jadestar on Oct 9, 2006 19:31:59 GMT 10
great chapter, wow
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