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Post by daniella on Mar 31, 2007 7:07:22 GMT 10
Cool update Rory... but please, can someone explain to me the pie on the ground ?
Dani
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Post by hollygirl on Mar 31, 2007 7:16:05 GMT 10
love it! it was great like always! please updat soon.
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Post by mags on Mar 31, 2007 10:03:19 GMT 10
UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE PLEASE
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Post by Tannii on Mar 31, 2007 19:26:14 GMT 10
Yay! Niice update Rory. It's been forever since i replied here, sorry. But i still loove your Fanfic, its amazing and i have no idea where you come up with all thiis crazy things
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Post by Ergirl on Mar 31, 2007 22:56:51 GMT 10
Loved the update. Clarisse and Abby's conversation was very sweet. Update soon! xxxx
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Post by LuBByFaNatiC [ThAiSsa] on Mar 31, 2007 23:19:02 GMT 10
cool update!!! update soon!!!
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Post by *Natalie* on Apr 1, 2007 0:39:00 GMT 10
Great update nataliex
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Post by Lubyfanatic316 on Apr 2, 2007 23:17:08 GMT 10
Great Update!
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Post by rorygilmore on Apr 3, 2007 7:24:04 GMT 10
Dani: because of Luka's cravings Abby hid the pie under the table before he could 'swallow' it ... Okay, I think too much happiness is making me sick...I need drama...don't you? Maybe a little of drama in the next updates will be a good prelude to the end of the story. (Yep, I'm planning to end it in 3 updates or less...'cause it's getting a little boring. I'm planning to start a new fic...I've got another crazy...but really crazy new idea in mind ... Anyway, next update will be up tomorrow...and the last one, on wednesday..yep, I'm writting, writting and writting...hope you like it. BIG HUGE HUGS TO EVERYONE; RORY _________________________________________ CHAPTER 25: "LUKA MEETS 'BUG'"
AT COBURNS PRACTICE …
Waiting in the crowded 'waiting room' was making Luka anxious. His right leg was trembling frenetically and he was looking nervously, everywhere and everyone around him. Pregnant women here, pregnant women there…it seemed that the entire globe was pregnant. There were toddlers playing on the carpet and babies sitting on their mothers lap. The only men in the room were him, a guy who seemed to be accompaning his wife and the janitor.
“Here, very dark coffee” Abby sat next to him and gave him a cup. “Though, I don’t think it’s going to be good for the baby” She chuckled. “Yeah, the baby... keep laughing” He sipped the hot liquid.
A woman with a huge baby belly sat next to them. Apprehensive Luka eyed her. “9 months. I’m about to blow up”. She told them. Luka and Abby smiled. (though Luka's smile was more a forced one) “How far along you are?” She asked Abby. “Oh...” Abby shook her head, chuckling. “I…” “She’s going to blow up in 5 or 6 months” Luka interrupted her “It’s our six kid. We had twins the last time” He patted Abby’s knee. Abby raised her eyebrows, surprised. Hormones were definitely driving him nuts. “...And we plan to adopt two vietnamese kids” He continued “My wife love kids" He leaned to kiss Abby on the cheek "She’s like a mix between Mother Theresa and Lady Di…” He stood up to get more coffee. “Excuse me” The woman just looked at him as if he was some sort of maniac.
...and Abby bit her lip, trying hard not to laugh “He’s been a little moody lately…” She shrugged. “Couvade Syndrome?” “Sort of...” Abby stood up to follow him. “Hey, Luka”
But he pretended he wasn’t listening. He walked out to the street. It felt wonderful, he felt like he was choking in that place.
“Hey” Abby frowned following him “What's going on?” She took his arm and he turned around to face her. “I can’t do this…it’s ridiculous” He shook his head “Let’s just go home with our kid…I’ll get better…I promise” “Oh Luka, come on! This is important” “No, it isn’t. It’s just psychological” He ran his hand through his hair “It’ll pass and..” “It’s important for me” She cut him off and sighed “For us…” “Abby, you’re making a big deal about nothing!” He complained. “It’s not a big deal…it’s…” Abby sighed and looked around her. "It's what?" He asked.
Okay, it wasn’t the perfect time to tell him, not the perfect place or even the perfect way but what else she could do? “I think I’m going to have a baby”
That’s it, she said it. Neat and fast, just like the first time. She looked into his eyes waiting for an answer, but he stayed in silence, his eyes looking at her but his thoughts, lost somewhere else. Slowly, but avoiding to look into her eyes, he took her hand and walked back into the building.
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Post by hollygirl on Apr 3, 2007 7:33:53 GMT 10
you think its boring?!?! NO WAY! Never boring! Nothing you write is ever boring! Loved when Luka was telling the pregnant lady about their 6 kids.. hehe I love new crazy ideas!!! Its hard to guess what you think in your mind. I will deffinately be looking forward to that. ohhhh.. and Rory... be careful with that drama.. you know what they say about payback..
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Post by Bah on Apr 3, 2007 8:02:10 GMT 10
i can't belive you will end it so soon Rory! this fic is so great! you must know that is not getting boring! but, if it is what you want... update soon please! :*
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Post by lubbylover1 on Apr 3, 2007 8:15:57 GMT 10
Amazing, as always, Rory
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Post by Tannii on Apr 3, 2007 8:19:08 GMT 10
Aw, no pretty please Rory. Don't end it It's not getting boring and I totally agree with h.o.l.l.y.g.i.r.l, nothing you write is boring!
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Post by strausser on Apr 3, 2007 8:32:00 GMT 10
roryyyyyyyyyyy don't stop thereeeeee come back and update quickkkkkkk i nedeed tooooo knooooooow!!!
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Post by daniella on Apr 3, 2007 9:00:14 GMT 10
Dani: because of Luka's cravings Abby hid the pie under the table before he could 'swallow' it ... Ah, ok... I didn't understand when you said... it was a good idea... I loved the update, great work Rory... Dani
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