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Post by LuBByFaNatiC [ThAiSsa] on Apr 3, 2007 9:00:42 GMT 10
you think its boring?!?! NO WAY! Never boring! Nothing you write is ever boring! totally agree with Holly... nice and funny update Rory... and.... update soon pleasee!!!!! ;**
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Post by Lubyfanatic316 on Apr 3, 2007 11:48:59 GMT 10
Great Update!
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Post by smile90 on Apr 3, 2007 22:11:51 GMT 10
you really want to end it?? That's sad!!! I love this fic so much!!
But I'm glad you wanna start a new one!!Crazy ideas are great!! I like them!! Whatever you wanna write about, It'll be great. cause everything you write is excellent!!! Lukas talk about their chidren.. I loved it!! I can perfectly imagine the womans face!!
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Post by charlieluby on Apr 4, 2007 1:32:27 GMT 10
End it? But if you aren't enjoyin it so much anymore then stop and start a new CRAZY one! Cant wait! I love all ur fanfics!!! x
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Post by jacobsmommy on Apr 4, 2007 2:51:53 GMT 10
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Post by rorygilmore on Apr 4, 2007 4:55:47 GMT 10
ohhhh.. and Rory... be careful with that drama.. you know what they say about payback.. *GULPS* ok. but don't try anything against the 'It's gonna be love' baby!...or I'll call ROry The MaNiaC... Here's a new update, the one before the last one. __________________________ CHAPTER 26: “LOVE ME OR LEAVE ME”
Luka drove back home in silence. No word has been crossed between him and Abby, since they left Coburn’s practice. There was a new life growing inside her and he wasn’t able to absorb it yet. He was feeling exactly the way he felt years ago; unsure of himself.
Lost in her thoughts, Abby glanced at their building as Luka parked the car. It was happening again, all over again. She could see it in his eyes, the way he was behaving. “I’m going to pick up Clarisse from Carter’s” He said, never looking at her. His eyes fixed on the pane in front of him. Abby didn’t looked at him either. It’ was a weird moment “Carter was going to bring her” “I want her home earlier” He looked away, clearing his throat. Silent, Abby nodded and opened the door of the car. He wanted a little time for himself, she knew it. So; without saying a word, she closed the door and walked into the building.
“Daddyyyyyy!!!” Clarisse ran out from Carter’s house and jumped into her father’s arms. He scooped her up in the air, content of seeing her again. “Hey, did you have a good time?” He smiled broadly. “Yeah!..and guess what? My Fairy godfather talked with my old nanny and she says she’s going to love to baby-sit me while you and mommy are at work” Luka’s smile faded at the sound of the word ‘mommy’. “You look gloomy daddy, what’s wrong?” Clarisse stared at him a little bit concerned. “I…” He placed her back on the floor “I think you and I need to have a little talk” He took her hand. “Did you say goodbye to your Fairy godfather?” She nodded. “Let’s go, then”
He took her to the lake. The sun was setting and the golden rays were painting the evening in beautiful colors. “It’s beautiful daddy…but what are we doing here?” Clarisse sat on a bench and rocked her legs back and forth as he sat next to her. He took out his wallet and opened it to show her a picture. “This was my family…” He gave it to her. “The family I had before I met your mom”. Confused, Clarisse looked at the woman and the girl in the picture. “I had a son too, a baby son” He looked sadly at the lake, the gentle breeze brushing their hairs. “I lost them, in the war. The Croatian war…” Clarisse turned to look at him. He had a family before them? Before she and her mom?
“One morning, while I went out, my apartment building was hit by a bombard…” He sighed, feeling a familiar grief in his heart “...and they were all gone” It was hard to evoke it but she had to know...
It was the saddest story ever. Clarisse was shocked to hear such terrible way to loose the ones you love. She couldn’t believe someone so good and kind like her daddy had experience that. “I’m sorry” She spoke softly. “But then…” Luka pulled her onto his lap “I came to America and I met your mother…” He kissed her on top of the head “And she was a glow in the darkness…though I didn’t knew it yet and …” “...and then, you had me?” Clarisse completed the sentence.
Luka nodded “And I was so afraid to loose you the way I lost them” He glimpsed again at the picture. “I was terrified that everything would repeat all over again, that I wasn’t going to be able to protect you. That I was going to fail you the way I failed to my family…” He felt a knot in his throat “I’m sorry for giving you away, Clarisse” Tears were filling his eyes. “I’m sorry for not being strong enough to take care of you… for not being the best father…” “You’re the best, daddy” Clarisse wrapped her arms around him “You’re the best dad ever” She hugged him with all her strength and he held her close, feeling a big sense of relief….
Hours later, Clarisse walked into the dark apartment and closed the door behind her, after leaving the keys on the table, she went to look out the window. She rested her forehead on the glass watching as Luka started the car again and left. A soft touch on the shoulder brought her out of her thoughts, she knew it was her mom; she turned around to hug her. “Hey” Abby smiled faintly and kissed her on top of the head “Where did he go?” “He said he had important things to do”
Abby nodded. He was doing it again and it wasn’t fair. Not for her, not for Clarisse, not for the baby... Okay! If he wanted it to be that way; then she wasn’t going to stop him but she was going to take Clarisse and the baby with her. This time she was feeling stable and strong enough to do it. “Are you okay mommy?’” Abby nodded a little hesitant. Massive emotions swirling in her stomach. “Yes, baby” She took her hand “Come on, let’s get ready for bed”
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Post by Maryna on Apr 4, 2007 5:04:12 GMT 10
wonderful update! wonderful story! you can't end it!!!!!!!
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Post by Bah on Apr 4, 2007 5:15:58 GMT 10
Great update Rory! hope Luka will change his mind. update soon please! :* you can't end the fic Rory!
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Post by Ninolino on Apr 4, 2007 5:16:25 GMT 10
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Post by hollygirl on Apr 4, 2007 6:26:03 GMT 10
Abby is talking crazy! she can't leave! What is Luka up to?? hmm, miss poppins? You better update soon!
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Post by maggie on Apr 4, 2007 7:14:59 GMT 10
I know! I know! Oh, my psychic powers tell me Luka has an important "errand" to run...like one that has something to do with making up for being such a JERK. And may I just say, if I'm wrong, he's going to receive an e-kick in the e-groin!
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chaos1982
Marquise of Luby
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Post by chaos1982 on Apr 4, 2007 7:23:48 GMT 10
Rory do you know the song from the band Queen "to much love will kill you"? The theme for us after this chapter is "To much drama will kill us"! So please I am begging you on my knees let them make up!
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Post by Ergirl on Apr 4, 2007 7:38:15 GMT 10
Loved your last two updates, and i can't believe you're ending it But since you are, i can't wait to read your next fic I really really hope Luka will come back and they can work it all out... please Looking forwards to your last update xxxx
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Post by strausser on Apr 4, 2007 7:42:56 GMT 10
once again, rory, i will die if you dun come back and update soon.
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Post by *Natalie* on Apr 4, 2007 7:56:57 GMT 10
Noo!!! Where's Luka gone? Bring him back!
natalie x
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