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Post by jadestar on Jan 10, 2007 9:43:38 GMT 10
okay, I think I have a clue... great story, Rory (hey a rhyme and poor Clarisse with all that names and that mother... I hope she feels better soon
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Post by Real Dream on Jan 10, 2007 15:32:44 GMT 10
hehe, I think I know what's going on And luka..what is he doing in bare foot and pyjama in the rain? Is he drunk???
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Post by rorygilmore on Jan 10, 2007 19:18:45 GMT 10
Hehehe, that was funny Real Dream! Rory, I HATE you: being at the beach........... and maybe drinking a Tequila Sunrise??? Hehe…yes and naked Goran is pouring some Suntan lotion on my bare back…with those huge, hot croatian hands...Hey Zelda! Can I be part of the Goran’s Dream Team too? Okie…this update is going to leave pretty obvious clues (and it's very long so grab some caffeine and your chips …and if you still don’t get it, well maybe you’ll get it on the next update. ___________________________________________ CHAPTER 3: "A JULY 14TH SECRET"
“Okay, let me guess” Abby said, walking with Luka into her apartment, both completely soaked . “Sam went to your apartment, kicked you out and locked herself inside” Luka chuckled “You’re not going to believe it…” Abby walked into her bathroom to get a couple of towels “Okay, let me guess again" She smiled "Martha Stewart set your apartment on fire after she learnt you’re her biggest fan” She handed him a towel. Luka chuckled, drying his face with the towel and explained “I went to take out the trash when suddenly my door closed…and I got locked out of my place” He smiled. “…Forgot the keys inside” “Your door closed?” She looked at him trying not to laugh “ And you walked all the way here under the rain, in your pajamas?” Luka nodded, looking at her like a little, embarrased kid. Abby smiled “You know? After the way you kicked me out of Trauma today, I should be doing the same right now..” Luka’s eyes opened wide “You…you wouldn’t..” “Wanna bet?” She bit her lower lip trying hard not to smile. “Abby…” He said a little worried. “Say you’re sorry and beg to stay…” She cocked an eyebrow. “Oh no...” Luka shook his head “No way” “Then, get out of here” She went to open the door. “Abby!” Luka rolled his eyes “You know why I…” “…OUT!” She pointed towards the rainy street. “Okay, okay…” Luka raised his hands “I’m sorry about kicking you out of Trauma today and I…beg you to let me stay in your place” Abby smiled “Beg a little more…” “ABBY!!” She laughed softly as she closed the door “Okay, you can stay…what…what are you doing?” She asked when she saw him pulling out his wet pajamas’ shirt. “Don’t want to catch a cold” He smiled. Abby looked at him…(well, at his muscled, wet chest) “Oo…kay” She turned to walk away, trying to ignore him...his nicely sculptured chest. “Where can I put this shirt…and my pants?” He asked. “What?” Abby stopped walking and without turning to look at him, she asked in desbelief “Did you just take out your pants, too?” “Oh Come on Abby! It’s not like you’ve never seen me before without any…” Luka bursted in laugher. “OF COURSE NOT!!!” She turned around and yes, he was still wearing his wet pants…too bad. “Oh my god! You look disappointed!” He chuckled. “Oh shut up!” She walked away, all blushed. “Do you have anything I can wear?” He asked, following her into her room. “What? Something like…panties? Or a bra?” Abby opened her drawers to look for something to get change. “Well, I can always take out my pants” He smiled. “Okay, you know what? I think I still got something yours, that I used when I was pre…” She suddenly stopped. Luka’s smile faded. He immediately knew what she was about to say; a feeling of sadness suddenly took him over. “I’ll just…” She looked away “I’ll go… to look something for you outside... in the closet” She stormed out of the room.
Luka just stayed standing there. It had been a long time since he had felt that way; sad, disappointed about himself... He swallowed hard when his gaze landed on a calendar that was hanging on the wall. He walked close to see it clear. The date; July 14th had a tiny dot on one side made with a marker. Abby had surely made that dot and he knew why. It was funny, he had marked that date too in his calendar...He, was pulled out of his thoughts when he heard Abby walking back into the room.
“Do you think they have ever told her about us?” He suddenly asked, still staring at the date in the calendar. “What?” Abby eyed him and then at the calendar on the wall. Her face went pale. “Her birthday...is in a week” He whispered, nodding towards the calendar. “Who’s birthday? ” She asked pretending she didn’t get it. Oh, but she knew well what he was talking about. “Never mind” Luka shook his head, he didn’t want to make her feel uncomfortable. It was better not to touch the subject. “Here” She sighed, giving him an old t-shirt and a couple of pants that belonged to him. “They have a little musty smell, but is the only thing I’ve got” Luka smiled “Can’t believe you still have them” Abby shrugged “They’re comfortable” She handed him a quilt too. “Well…Good night” He smiled walking out of the room to the living room, he was going to sleep on the couch. “Night” Abby smiled when she recalled… “Hey!” Luka scratched his head, staring at the living room “Where’s your couch?” “Threw it away” Abby went to stand next to him. “And where am I suppose to sleep?” He looked at her. Abby nodded towards to rug on the floor “Night” She smiled and went back to her room. Luka just stayed staring at the rug on the floor. Seconds later, Abby walked out of her room laughing “Come on, rain man” She took his hand and pulled him into her room. “But this is the last time I let you sleep in my bed…”
BACK IN NEW YORK…
“I don’t wanna have breakfast with the Mayers tomorrow!” Clarisse complained, putting on her pretty nightgown, while her nanny began to comb her beautiful hair. “But you must or…” Her nanny replied. “...or I can write to my Godfather and tell him to tell my mother that I don’t wanna go” Clarisse smiled “I bet mother will do as he says, she always does” Her nanny frowned “I don’t like that godfather of yours…never shows his face…and sometimes seems to manipulate your parents ” “He’s nice” Clarisse smiled “And he knows about their secret…” Her nanny stopped combing her hair and softly turned Clarisse to face her. “Clarisse ?” Clarisse smiled and jumped into her bed “Ah!…you know…the secret they try to hide from the High Society” She said the last words in a funny tone “Clarisse…what do you know?” “Did I tell you that my 'Fairy' Godfather said he was going to send me a beautiful present, for my birthday next week?” “Clarisse, I’m not sure how much you know about that secret or what’s going on in your mind...” Clarisse pulled the covers up to her chest. “I just think I know a little about that secret” Her little face turned serious. “My Godfather promised me he was going to tell me everything on my 10th birthday” “Oh, that godfather again!” Her nanny rolled her eyes. “Good to know that you’ll have to wait 2 more years, to learn everything” “One year and a week” Clarisse corrected her.“You know the secret too, right?” “Good night” Her nanny turned off the night lamp and walked out of the room, running away from the question. "Oh, yes she does" Clarisse closed her eyes, thinking about the wonderful presents her godfather was going to send her on her birthday, July 14th. "Hope it's not a pony...already got 3."
Next Morning...
Breakfast with the Mayers was always a living hell. As typical socialités; Clarisse’s mother and Mrs Mayer would gossip about everything and anything: about how terrible was to have new rags-to-riches living in the neighbourhood, about the latest Chanel, Prada, Louis Vuitton, Jimmy Choo collections…and Clarisse would have to stand being sat at a table on the garden with the Mayers' kids: Trevor, who at a young age was a real jerk and Victoria, who was nice...if you were rich enough to build her a Disneyland all for herself.
“Clarisse? Why is your hair brown if your parents are blonde?” Trevor Mayer asked. Callie shrugged. There he goes..Ignore him, just ignore him “Why is it brown? The color is disgusting, just like the mud..” He gave her a mean smile. Clarisse shrugged again, the best thing she could do was to ignore him. The best thing for his heath. “Why are your eyes brown if your parents have got’em blue?” Trevor asked again, he had a point and Callie knew it: make her life impossible. She just tried to listen to the birds in the garden. Ignore him... “Maybe it’s because you’re a bastard” Trevor nodded, an evil smile plastered on his face. “Excuse me?” Clarisse began to lose her temper. “Yeah, maybe your mother slept with the gardener or the pool guy” Trevor kept smiling.
Clarisse began to burn inside. She stood up with elegance and then looked at him with fire in her eyes “I thought your mother was the one who was sleeping with the all the gardeners and the Pool guys” She retorted (…and that was true.) “MY MOTHER IS A SAINT!” Trevor stood up too “YOU’RE NOTHING MORE THAN A FILTHY BASTARD!! “NEXT TIME YOU REFER TO ME AS A BASTARD AGAIN ... I WILL SLAP YOU SILLY WITH THIS CHAIR!!!” Clarisse yelled pointing at her chair. “BASTARD!!!” Trevor yelled again... ...and seconds later, Trevor was lying on the floor; wearing Clarisse’s chair as a hat._______________________________________ ...Got it now? Maybe not? Any Ideas? What do you think? Hated it?...
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Post by maggie on Jan 10, 2007 19:39:03 GMT 10
you sneaky, sneaky little devil you. but i was right...i always am.
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Post by strausser on Jan 10, 2007 22:15:11 GMT 10
oh my god!!!!!!!!! you have to update, this story has had me totally hooked up, and luka and abby has to get back together!
ok, that sound really really stupid, but this is what i really want
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Post by <3 Luby II 2 <3 on Jan 10, 2007 22:18:42 GMT 10
Great update!
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Post by Maryna on Jan 10, 2007 22:42:38 GMT 10
Sherlock Rory your are great and your story too!
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Post by Little Amy on Jan 11, 2007 0:17:31 GMT 10
yeah... I think I got it(was about time ) ... but I'm curious to know why Luka and Abby did that...
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Post by jaana on Jan 11, 2007 0:30:25 GMT 10
Great update! Now I know. Update soon!!
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Post by Rach :) on Jan 11, 2007 2:37:38 GMT 10
wow yay i am really enjoying this fic please please update!
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Post by lubylover123 on Jan 11, 2007 2:54:09 GMT 10
Ok, I now have a vague idea what's going on. Update soon!
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Post by Lubyfanatic316 on Jan 11, 2007 4:14:01 GMT 10
Great Update!
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Post by Real Dream on Jan 11, 2007 4:39:44 GMT 10
I knewwwwww!!! And I can't wait to read more!!
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Post by lubyfreaky on Jan 11, 2007 6:07:55 GMT 10
I know now.... I got it... *i´m slooooow* Great Upadte!
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Post by *Natalie* on Jan 11, 2007 7:29:34 GMT 10
OMG!!! Can't believe the twist!!
Update soon
natalie x
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