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Post by luby2534 on Jan 10, 2007 7:38:37 GMT 10
OMG....That was just beautiful. ;D
Luka is just the best lover ever!!!
Please update soon !
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Post by eriluby on Jan 10, 2007 7:41:33 GMT 10
OMG! OMG! That was sooo... perfect!!!! I want your Luka for me... Can I steal him? pleeeease...?
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Post by lubbylover1 on Jan 10, 2007 9:35:34 GMT 10
your fics, all them, are just perfects.....
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Post by erfan228 on Jan 10, 2007 11:30:10 GMT 10
Great update! Can't wait for more!
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Post by maggie on Jan 10, 2007 19:50:49 GMT 10
Abby
It’s only as we unwind, lying together on the sofa, that I can think again. When it’s so intense as it just was, I can’t think. My mind burns. Everything about this, making love, his weight on top of me, spending our day just being together, feels right. I can’t find a flaw. For the first time I can’t find a single thing wrong with the present, and it scares me as much as it delights me. I can’t find a reason not to want this to continue indefinitely. Why I can’t admit that out loud, I don’t know. Perhaps it’s the fear that if I say it, it will become reality, and fall apart. Perhaps I don’t trust it. Perhaps I don’t trust that he feels the same way, because I still feel the nagging sensation that I’ll never be enough for him. He’s such a good man, better than I deserve. Tall, dark, handsome, and mysterious. The first impression I had of him was dead on, and I don’t know how I’ve managed to hang onto him. I know I’m beyond lucky, that any woman would kill to be in my position, pinned under perhaps the most incredibly gorgeous, kindest, sexiest man in existence. I almost laugh out loud to think I’ve just made love with every woman’s fantasy. The thick accent, brooding European disposition, the handsome doctor, and I somehow call him my own. Me, a recovering alcoholic, a moody, twisted brunette with a marginally insane track record and a tobacco-and-caffeine addiction to boot. Lovely. I must have done something incredible in a past life to deserve this.
I feel him kiss my neck and I can’t help smiling. How is it possible for him to love me? He should have some leggy blonde with a big chest and a trust fund. His hand grazes my cheek and he kisses my forehead. Is this really my life? Am I just dreaming this? He seems to read my mind, and reassures me as only he can. “I love you, Abby.”
I rarely say it back, usually just answer by kissing him, but something inside me screams that, for once, I should just swallow my inhibitions and say it. For god sakes, I have something far beyond what I deserve. I swallow hard and turn my head to look him dead in the eye, those impossibly deep grey eyes. “I love you, too.” It comes out a whisper, but, goddamn it, I said it. He seems a little shocked, and blinks a few times before kissing me. We’ve sealed the deal. He loves me. I love him. All is right with my life, which means for sure that hell has frozen over. I wrap my arms around his neck and hang on for dear life, sure that the world will fall off its axis with my admission. He presses his face into my neck and his lips touch my skin as the world stays surprisingly still.
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Post by ERFanRach on Jan 10, 2007 22:36:12 GMT 10
Great Update!!!!!
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Post by eriluby on Jan 11, 2007 0:00:05 GMT 10
Yeah! She's right! She just made love with every woman’s fantasy!!! Great update! !
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Post by kia on Jan 11, 2007 5:01:33 GMT 10
Yeah! She's right! She just made love with every woman’s fantasy!!! Great update! ! I agree with you, Eriluby!!!
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Post by daniella on Jan 11, 2007 5:58:39 GMT 10
Totally... Good work, Maggie Dani
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Post by erfan228 on Jan 11, 2007 7:11:21 GMT 10
Great update!!
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Post by *Natalie* on Jan 11, 2007 7:15:59 GMT 10
Great update! Glad she told him, she loves him too natalie x
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Post by zelda on Jan 11, 2007 7:32:19 GMT 10
Maggie, These were the most erotic and romantic lines about the wonderful chemistry between Abby and Luka! And it's sexual as well as psychological! It's not hot, it's simply beautiful and I don't know how to express myself but these words, YOUR WORDS simply show me how strong you are connected with each of them! I love the perfect balance between the " Abby lines " and the " Luka ones ". It's like you were PART of them! Sorry if you think I'm rambling too much, but I wanted to share this exceptional writing moment with you! And like Luka says: VOLIM TE!
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Post by luby2534 on Jan 11, 2007 7:39:32 GMT 10
I know I’m beyond lucky, that any woman would kill to be in my position, pinned under perhaps the most incredibly gorgeous, kindest, sexiest man in existence. I almost laugh out loud to think I’ve just made love with every woman’s fantasy. |
Well it is definatly my fantasy !!!! ;D It was a lovely update.
Please update soon Maggie !!!
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Post by zelda on Jan 11, 2007 8:16:04 GMT 10
MAGGIE, I was so much deep in your fic, with your amazing words and my Luby scenery that I forgot the most important thing! AN IMMEDIATE KARMA!
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Post by steffi1986 on Jan 12, 2007 4:56:05 GMT 10
wow this was really good please update soon
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