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Post by suzanne on Feb 1, 2009 5:45:12 GMT 10
Thanks guys!!Chapter 17 She looked up in frustration. “I said, I’m sorry okay?!” She screamed at him, making him back up a couple small steps. What was his problem? She had finally given him what he wanted. “What do you want from me Luka? What do you want?!” She began moving into him until they were almost chest to chest. “You can move on now, alright!” The tears began to fall down her cheeks and were lost in the rain that continued to pour down on them. “I’m sorry for holding on so long…” Her gaze, still intertwined with his, began to soften. “I’m sorry for selfishly making you wait…” Her tears threatened to turn into sobs but she was able to keep steady eye contact with him. “I’m sorry for breaking you and Sam apart and… and for fighting with you…” the sobs took a hold of her and she began to shake violently. “I’m so sorry Luka…” She wanted to let him go, so he could be happy, but for some reason all she wanted at this moment was his forgiveness. Even with the resentful emotions that continued to pulse through his veins, the sight of a woman crying… and in this circumstance, having that woman be the woman he loved, made him want to do nothing but protect her from whoever was making her hurt. And in the realization that he was that person, a new wave of raw awareness swept through his body. He wanted to touch her, to console her, to kiss her. But the magnitude of the emotions made him scared he might hurt her and he needed to let her know. She had to know what he had been so scared to admit to himself this entire time. But looking at her, weeping silently in the rain, he knew she was everything he wasn’t scared of anymore. The commitment, the responsibility, the devotion; all the things that had seemed so absurd to him the past began to fit together in perfect sense before his very eyes. Abby was the absence of this fear. And she had to know that no matter how hard he tried, there could never be anyone else.
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Post by lylee on Feb 1, 2009 6:31:50 GMT 10
I can't believe you just stopped here! Update soon please!
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Post by baboune51 on Feb 2, 2009 2:03:14 GMT 10
I want to know the continuation !!! nice udapte ! , udapte soon please
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Post by shelby on Feb 2, 2009 4:13:44 GMT 10
They are in love with eachother so much! Nice update as always!
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Post by suzanne on Feb 2, 2009 6:17:32 GMT 10
Thanks guys! Chapter 18 “Stop apologizing.” His voice was low and grave and something hidden deep within it caused Abby to stop crying abruptly. She stared intently back at him. She couldn’t believe her eyes as she began to see the slightest hint of tears well up behind his eyes. His voice was still deep with sincerity. “You didn’t break us up, Ab’s.” He looked away briefly to regain even an ounce of the innate confidence that had only this once decided to spring from his being. “I tried… but I couldn’t.” He noticed that she had taken a step away from the wall and their faces were now inches apart. “Abby…” his voice was now a deep whisper that sent the most remarkable sensations through her body. Was this really happening? She waited for him to finish… “Damn it Ab’s… you know I can’t move on from you. I’ve tried so hard but I just,” he softly shook his head as she tenderly laid one hand upon his chest. He brought his gaze back to hers and finally allowed the desire and adoration he found in them to reflect upon him and consume him. He brought one hand up to the side of her face and watched the droplets of rain fall silently onto her light skin. Looking deeper into her eyes than he imagined was possible, he let the words flow fearlessly from his lips. “I love you.”
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Post by shelby on Feb 2, 2009 10:40:04 GMT 10
He finally told her the truth! Update again soon! I want to see how she reacts!
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Post by baboune51 on Feb 3, 2009 2:15:03 GMT 10
yeah , me too , I want to see how she reacts ! nice udapte !
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Post by suzanne on Feb 3, 2009 6:37:23 GMT 10
Chapter 19 Abby let the words break open the recesses of her heart that had been reserved for him all this time. Luka flooded through her entire being. He loved her. He still loved her. After all she’d put him through, he had found a way to hold on. She wanted to marvel in the miracle of it all but she couldn’t. Right now, with him looking at her, like he saw everything she was made out of; her past, present and future. How the hell did he do that? She didn’t care. All she knew was she needed him. God, did she need him now more than anything she had never needed in her life. Without hesitation, she brought her hands up, framing his face, she let her lips gently meet his. She wanted to embrace him so much more, but she also didn’t want to rush this. It had been so long and his lips were so much softer than she remembered. She let the sensation wash over her, and for a second, she swore her heart stopped beating. Luka let his eyes flutter closed as he felt the familiar taste of her on his lips. Abby, he never thought he’d get the chance to taste her again. He brought his other hand up to rest on the side of her face and let the sweeter emotions, all of the tenderness that both had been unable to convey through all the rage, spill into what felt like blissful hours. Who knew they weren’t lying about time standing still? The memories replayed in one magnificent flash of disbelief. Part of him was convinced he was dreaming… he didn’t want to pull away. But he needed to make sure he wasn’t, and…he needed air. Her eyes remained closed for awhile, until she could balance herself by clutching to his waist. She could still feel the warmth of his hands on her face and it reassured her that she could open her eyes and he’d still be there. And he was. This was all so surreal. How could they go from yelling at the top of their lungs to this in a matter of seconds? That was always how they were though. And she realized it was why she loved being with him in the first place. “Luka…” She wanted to tell him how much she still loved him, but as she opened her mouth to get the words out, she felt his lips on hers once more and that’s all it took for her to surrender to him completely. If he needed her just as badly, there was no way she was postponing it any longer.
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Post by shelby on Feb 3, 2009 9:50:04 GMT 10
They kissed!! Can't wait to see what happens next!
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Post by blinkoide on Feb 3, 2009 15:21:13 GMT 10
you have to make longer updates!! please its very interesting I can't wait to see what happen next! it's so good how you tell the story and the way you handle the characters! very good
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Post by baboune51 on Feb 4, 2009 3:24:18 GMT 10
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Post by suzanne on Feb 4, 2009 8:50:13 GMT 10
Thanks guys!! Bit of kissing but nothing to bad!! Just tought I'd say incase!!Chapter 20 Abby deepened the kiss, quickly finding the back of his neck with her hand and pulling him closer to her. He responded by opening his mouth to explore hers more appropriately. He recognized in her kiss that she needed this as much as he did and he passionately allowed his chest to force her backwards until she hit the wall, with one of his hands finding the back of her head to make sure she didn’t hurt herself, not that she would have noticed, and the other quickly finding the wall for support. As his tongue danced with hers, exploring forgotten territory hungrily, he savoured in the familiar way their bodies began to melt together. Her hands aggressively rediscovering his back and the tensing of his shoulder muscles. She broke the kiss and let out a soft but needy moan as she felt the warm sensation of his breathe and kisses on her neck. “Luka…” She forgot he knew every right place to touch… to kiss… She grabbed gently at his hair and attempted to pull him away to look into his eyes once more, but the kisses… his hungry lips sucking so tenderly… so skill fully, were too much. She arched against him and titled her head back to allow him more access. Her eyes slipped closed and she clutched at the sides of his shirt drenched in rain, letting one hand instinctively slip underneath and behind roaming his bare skin. He heard her moan his name and felt a familiar bulge begin to form between his legs. She began to grind against him as he searched franticly for her hands. He found one underneath his shirt and smiled to himself. Once he gained control of the other hand, he pulled away from Abby’s neck and heard her sigh in slight frustration. With his body still pressed against hers, he let their hands intertwine as he firmly pushed against her palms until they were pinned up against the wall. Mischievously smirking at the way her eyes responded to his control over her, he brought his mouth to meet hers once again. He felt her retaliation in the kiss and it only edged him on. He guided their arms down until he realized somewhere he had lost control and he broke the kiss to moan into her mouth with a mixture of pleasure and submission
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Post by shelby on Feb 4, 2009 10:26:01 GMT 10
The big kiss! Nice chapter! Very romantic!
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Post by kia on Feb 4, 2009 19:23:17 GMT 10
Oh... wow... last two chapters were perfect. The first one was romantic and sweet, I liked how she didn't need to say a thing because he knows how much she loves him. The second one was so hot... Great writing!
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Post by baboune51 on Feb 5, 2009 2:28:06 GMT 10
it's a big kiss nice udapte , you're a fantastic writer !
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