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Post by shelby on Feb 13, 2009 12:09:10 GMT 10
This is so good, it's like being a 3rd person there! Update soon!
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Post by blinkoide on Feb 13, 2009 15:16:23 GMT 10
oh come on!! you have to make longer updates is taking forever to know what will happen...please!!
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Post by suzanne on Feb 13, 2009 19:37:20 GMT 10
Thanks you guys, hers's the next chapter!! Chapter 25 He pulled away at the sound of soft tears. “Ab’s?” Concerned, Luka searched her face and waited for Abby to open her eyes. What was wrong? She wanted him, needed him so badly and after all this, after they had finally made it here, she was crying? Abby cursed herself for her inability to wear her heart on anything but her sleeve. “Ab… if- If this is about… him-“ He loved her enough to say the name. “If it’s too soon since Carter I under-“ Her eyes opened at the sound of his name and immediately she regretted letting him think that these were anything but tears of happiness. Her eyes searched his and she shook her head vehemently. “Luka…” The significance of what she had to say made her voice crack a little, but she promised herself she would get through this, if nothing else because he deserved it. “This is about how you called me Dr. Beautiful…” She saw the confusion in his eyes, so she continued. “And how I was the first person you trusted enough to open up to.” He felt her hand resting on his heart, making it flitter with nerves. “This is about our first date…” She cracks a small smile and he looks away, blushing from embarrassment. “And how you were nervous to kiss me...” Luka looks at her and quietly attempts to protest. “But would never admit it.” Abby leans against his chest, bringing her face close to his and slipping off her shoes. “This is about wishing on eyelashes…” She smiles and begins to push him slowly toward the bed. “And kisses on barstools, that leave permanent butterflies in my stomach, whenever I even glance at you.” He opens his mouth again but she doesn’t give him room to speak. Slowly, she brings his shirt up over his head and lets it fall softly to his side. Then she takes his hands in hers and guides them to the top button of her jeans. He begins to unbutton but keeps his eyes on hers. She steadies herself by gliding her hands up and down his arms and shoulders and toying with the curls on the back of his neck as she speaks.
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Post by baboune51 on Feb 14, 2009 8:40:26 GMT 10
I like very much the emotions which you make in your story , thank you ! really nice udapte !
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Post by shelby on Feb 14, 2009 12:13:18 GMT 10
I love how Abby flashes back to their first date! Nice update as always!
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Post by Martine on Feb 15, 2009 0:22:44 GMT 10
oh come on!! you have to make longer updates is taking forever to know what will happen...please!! You got to be patient, Suzanne knows how to keep us hooked to her story
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Post by suzanne on Feb 15, 2009 8:32:09 GMT 10
Thanks guys!! Appriciate the comments!! Chapter 26 “This is about you understanding when I tolld you I wasn’t ready…” Stepping out of her jeans, Abby unbuttons the top of his pants and lets them fall, watching him kick them to the side and melting into his embrace. Their hands relish in their discovery of newly exposed skin. Every touch brings flashes of their past together. His hand becomes entangled in her hair as they kiss and then falls to her shoulder, catching the strap of her shirt and revealing her bare skin, which he replaces with a soft kiss. Abby sighs deeply. “You waited for me Luka.” He brings his eyes back to meet hers, the intensity of their contact almost too much to take. She lifts her arms up, persuading him to slide his hands underneath her shirt and pull it up over her head. Once off, he cups her face and notices she still has one more thing to say. He feels her hands move from his waist up to where his hands rest on her neck. She allows the cool skin of her palms to touch his warm bare chest, her eyes flutter quickly from the acknowledgement of how greatly she missed the feel of his heartbeat. “You were there when no one else was. You found a way to comfort me Luka…” She looks deep into his eyes and places a soft but meaningful kiss next to his ear. “When I needed someone the most, when I felt lonelier and more lost than I’ve ever felt…” His arms automatically began to surround her as if to protect her from any harmful memories, but she continued to whisper in his ear. “You found me Luka, and brought me back to life.” She pulls back and sees his face begin to fight back tears. Bringing her hands up to gently frame his face, she covers his eyelashes with light kisses. Looking deep into him, Abby smiles, hoping it will hide her tears. “It’s always been you.” Luka let Abby’s words feed the hunger for her deep inside him, but her final utterance set him over the edge. He knew he’d break down and start crying if he didn’t grab her right now and kiss her. So he did just that.
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Countess of Luby
Penny for your thoughts...
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Post by justcala on Feb 15, 2009 9:00:45 GMT 10
wow!
I'm ... speechless. Great story!
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Post by shelby on Feb 15, 2009 10:26:04 GMT 10
Wow, their mood has changed so much throughout the story! Within the first couple of chapters, they hated eachother! Now, they just want to fall into eachothers arms and make love! Great update!
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Post by baboune51 on Feb 16, 2009 4:13:24 GMT 10
Ilike the way they communicates ! really great udapte
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Post by suzanne on Feb 17, 2009 4:14:56 GMT 10
Chapter 27 His mouth opened to take her in fully, once and for all. His arms moved rapidly across her body, grabbing her legs and throwing them around his waist. She rested her upper arms on his shoulders and clutched the back of his head, pulling lightly at his hair but never breaking contact with his mouth. He spins her quickly as she hits the bed, her toes hooking into his boxers and sending them to the floor. She brings her arms under his as he kisses her neck eagerly, unhooking her bra and throwing it to the bedside. She climbs backwards onto the bed as he trails warm kisses down her neckline to her belly button and then to the last article of clothing left between them. He looks up at her seductively, causing Abby to exhale with laughter and run her hands through his messy hair once more. She couldn't get enough. He willingly frees Abby of her last garment, running both hands up and down the length of her soft legs and trailing them up with the rest of his body to grasp her breasts. Abby’s head drops back in pleasure and anticipation. She brings her lips back to meet his, giving him hot kisses. God she missed him and the way he touched her. He was so amazing at… everything. Her hands meander down his chest to stroke him but his length causes another wave of exhilaration to surge through her body and she hooks her right leg over his hips, rolling him on top of her. Luka smiles down at her, kissing her hard and roaming his right hand down in between her thighs. He inserts three fingers and is not surprised to discover she is more than ready. He knew he’d been ready since he first laid eyes on her earlier this evening. Foreplay with Abby was different than with any other woman, especially after tonight, but it had been too long for both of them. He couldn’t wait any longer and judging by her ravenous kisses and whimpering, she couldn’t either. He pulled his fingers out of her and positioned himself to enter her. Before entering, he noticed her breathing slow with anticipation. He brought his left hand up to brush a stray hair from her face. He wanted to take her and this moment in. It was now that he realized why sex with her had always been different for him. It wasn’t just sex. With Abby, it would never be just sex. For the first time in his life, Luka had found the woman he could only make love with. It was why he never let go in the past and how he knew he'd always continue to hold on in the future. Planting one more kiss on her trembling lips, Luka whispers the words effortlessly. “I love you Abby.”
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Post by baboune51 on Feb 17, 2009 8:12:51 GMT 10
For them to make love is a pure moment of pleasure ! really nice udapte !
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Post by suzanne on Feb 18, 2009 21:13:20 GMT 10
Thanks guys!! This chapter has some sexual references, nothing to bad!! Just telling ya!! Chapter 28 Abby looks back at him with equal love and adoration. Intertwining her hands with his, she responds whole-heartedly. “I love you too.” She gasps as she feels him enter her for the first time in so long. Small moan turns to deep ones as he glides slowly in and out of her, covering her neck and face with his stimulatingly warm breathe and adoring kisses. He kept returning back to meet her ecstatic gaze. She grips his upper arms as his speed increases. He kept it slow as long as he could, but it felt too good to be inside her once more. As his pace quickened, her moans turned to screams and his name was breathless on her lips, enticing him to thrust harder and harder. She could feel herself begin to tremble everywhere and tighten around him. “Luka…” He covered her moan with his mouth, pulling back to see and feel her on the very edge. He quickened his pace even more let his kisses mirror his body's intensity. Feeling her go uncontrollably underneath him, he let everything within him go with one last thrust, coming deep inside her and meeting her loud moan with a stifled grunt. Sorry it's so short, got interrupted, will have more later!!
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Post by baboune51 on Feb 19, 2009 20:43:55 GMT 10
simply magnificent ! Nice udapte !
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Post by suzanne on Feb 19, 2009 21:53:45 GMT 10
Thanks guys for all the comments!! This story has come to an end and hopefully I'll start a new one in the next few days!! Here's the last chapter!! Chapter 29 Abby felt like she was shaking for endless minutes and everything around her became blurry and faint. Finally she opened her eyes at the sensation of Luka’s heavy breathing on her neck. She attempts to catch her own and nuzzles his face with her nose until their lips meet in satisfied exhaustion. Their breathing is both quick and unsteady. “My… God.” Abby smiles, kissing him blissfully. Luka laughs and rolls to his side, bringing Abby with him to rest on his chest, comfortably... naturally. “That… was well worth the wait.” He looks down at her and kisses the top of her head, still waiting to catch his breath. She laughs breathlessly, nestling as close as possible to him. “It certainly was.” The sweat from their heaving bodies seemed to glow by the light of the moon outside the window. And all words seemed understatements to describe the feeling of wholeness shared between the two lovers. So they were both content with falling asleep in each other’s arms. The reassurance that they had found each other once more was enough. And this time, something existed between them that acknowledged they were in it for the long haul. Something that suggested maybe they always had been, since the day they first met in the cold hospital lobby of County General. Something real… an indescribable chemistry and desire that would one day transform into something much more. And no matter what obstacles life threw them, from that point on, the bond wasn’t going anywhere. He knew it. She knew it. They would fight whatever the future brought them together now. And if love torn them apart once more, the irreplaceable connection they shared would help them find each other once more. Destiny? You could say that. Some might just call it faith and persistence and the absence of fear. The End
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