micoop
Junior Luby
i didn't make it myself
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Post by micoop on Mar 11, 2009 5:12:41 GMT 10
Hello, everybody! I'm the new one here and i'm trying to write something for the very first time.
Here we go: The beginning of this fic takes place in early 8th season. Some events are changed but i tried not to change the characters.
Special thanks to Daniella and Shelby for their help.
Sometimes the end is only beginnig...Prolog
In the silence of a midnight street they walk away from each other knowing that none of them want to be apart from another, knowing that they can't be together.
"I can't keep going like this" she said. "I love you all the same" ha answered.
They walk away in opposite directions. "I'll never see him again." "At least I'll be able to see her at work every day."
2 and half years later…
Outside the window there were noisy cars and rushing people. Inside her apartment there was calmness and quietness. She woke up 2 minutes before the alarm went off. She wasn't feeling like herself this morning. Something was off... Something will happen today.
As usual in the morning she took a shower, put on some fresh clothes, drank her favorite black liquid and went to work. She lived in Boston for some time over 2 years now, worked in The General Hospital. She wasn't a nurse anymore, nowadays she works as an intern and in some 6 months her dream will come true, she'll be Dr. Abby Lockhart.
Hope you like it. tomorrow I'll post the first chapter.
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Post by baboune51 on Mar 11, 2009 6:08:33 GMT 10
great start ! udapte soon !
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Post by shelby on Mar 11, 2009 6:47:08 GMT 10
Your welcome! It's a really great start! Can't wait to read more!
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Post by suzanne on Mar 11, 2009 8:58:23 GMT 10
Very good start!! Update soon!!
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micoop
Junior Luby
i didn't make it myself
Posts: 12
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Post by micoop on Mar 11, 2009 14:19:51 GMT 10
Thank you, girls Here is chapter 1. Chapter 1Half an hour before the beginning of day shift Abby entered ER of Boston General Hospital. She truly liked to live and work in Boston. There weren’t any complicate relationships with colleagues here, there weren’t ex-husbands here. It was some good fresh start for her.
She made some good friends here and that nice surgeon Dr. Nick Frost seemed to be interested in her not in just friendly way. He was handsome, tall with dark hair. Kind, supportive, interesting guy who loves animals, he was that Mr. Right who any teenage girl sees as her husband. She doesn’t need any romantic adventures now. She has her dream. And she graduated med school as best student of the group and in some 6 months she will be a damn good doctor she was sure of it.
She said “Hi!” to Mike passing the admit desk and went straight to the locker room to change for work. Mike was Jerry of Boston General Hospital. He was friendly with everybody, liked to joke and always knew what to say to cheer you up.
In the locker room Abby saw Dr. Susan Lewis. Dr. Lewis came to work here about the same time as Abby and they build strong bond. They liked to hang out together after shifts and helped each other whenever it was necessary.
“Oh! Hey, Abby! You’re early as always. Want Some?” Susan greeted her, holding a cup of coffee.
“Hi, Susan. Yeah, I hope it’s fresh”
“Not only it’s fresh, it’s Mike’s special sort that he hide from everyone but us. I really love this guy. He knows right coffee.”
“Oh yeah. Mike and his coffee… We’re really lucky to have him as a friend” said Abby inhaling aroma of freshly brewed coffee.
“So, what’s new?” asked Susan sitting on the coach.
“Hm… Nick came by yesterday, we watched some movie together”
“And?”
Abby shrugged “And what? You know that he’s just a friend. I don’t want to have a relationship now.”
“Maybe he is just a friend for you, but it’s obvious for everyone around this hospital that he wants much more. And what is your problem, Abby? You didn’t have dates since you came here. And now you have this perfect guy all over you and won’t even consider him as possibility. What’s wrong with you?”
“Nothing’s wrong with me. I have my job and it is enough for me. For now at least. I’m not ready to forget Luka.”
“Oh, Luka! Ok, I’ll remind you of your love life tomorrow again. We’ll see what you say.”
“You do that. Now patients are waiting.”
“Yeah, this great job with lots of screaming crazy people waiting for us to help them.”
“I know you love it” smiled Abby.
“You too. That’s why we are friends. Nobody else will understand this crazy love.”
Susan went out of the lounge room and Abby delayed a bit. “Two crazy loves of my life…” She thought.
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Post by baboune51 on Mar 11, 2009 19:21:54 GMT 10
she always in love with Luka ! nice udapte !
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Post by suzanne on Mar 11, 2009 20:32:04 GMT 10
Nice update!! Glad you have Susan in the fic too, I love her and Abby's friendship!! Update soon!!
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Post by shelby on Mar 11, 2009 23:41:52 GMT 10
Great update! It's nice to see Susan! Can't wait til the next chapter!
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micoop
Junior Luby
i didn't make it myself
Posts: 12
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Post by micoop on Mar 12, 2009 22:25:30 GMT 10
Chapter 2
In the middle of the shift new trauma arrived. It was a young man with GSW to his chest. Abby worked on him along with Susan.
The door flung open and Dr. Frost came in.
“What a nice view! My favorite doctor and scalpel!”
At this remark Susan looked up and shook smiling.
“Nick! Enough with your jokes. This guy needs your help and he needs it now” Abby replied. “OK, ok. Your call and I obey” said Nick with charming smile on his face.
Abby smiled and shook her head thinking why can’t she just fall in love with this man. And instantly she knew the answer. She already was in love but with another man, one mysterious tall and gorgeous Croat.
“Ok, he’s all set. Let’s move on to the OR” Nick began to roll the gurney but suddenly turned backwards “Are we still on for drinks tonight?” “Sure. You, me, Susan and Mike will have a blast!” Abby agreed. “Great! Then it’s 8 p.m. in our favorite bar” “Yeah”
“Poor guy” said Susan when Dr. Frost and his patient were out of sight. Abby just glared at her.
******* Luby ******* Luby *******
That night they were celebrating the triumph of Red Sox on the field. They were laughing and dancing a lot. Everybody except Abby were pretty buzzed by the middle of the night due to the fact that she didn’t drink alcoholic dinks.
Some nice song started to play “Will you dance with me, Abby?” asked Nick with his charming smile reserved only for his favorite friend. “Sure”
They started to move slowly to the rhythm of the music. It felt nice to be held by a strong man again but it wasn’t THAT man. As that thought crossed her mind Nick felt someone tapping his shoulder. “May I split your pair?” Her head snapped upward the second she heard that all too familiar accent. “Ok” answered Nick reluctantly stepping aside from Abby.
Their eyes met and everything stood still. There weren’t any sounds but her rapid heart bit. She didn’t see anything beyond his beautiful eyes and that boyish smile of him she adore.
He couldn’t believe his happiness. That really was his Abby. That horrible morning over two years ago he woke up alone and learned that she left Chicago for good. He thought he would never see her again. He was miserable this two years. There wasn’t anything left for him besides his work and new apartment without her in it.
And now here she is standing in flesh right in front of him. He must have done something good in his past life if he was presented with the second chance to love her. He can see her again, he can touch her again. He hoped he can kiss her and hold her in his arms.
“Luka” she breathed. “Abby, it’s really you” he closed his eyes, took one little step and instantly enveloped her in bear hug breathing in his favorite scent. Scent of the woman he loves.
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Post by suzanne on Mar 12, 2009 23:03:29 GMT 10
Nice update!! Glad they bumped into each other again!! Update soon!!
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Post by shelby on Mar 12, 2009 23:43:16 GMT 10
Great update! Luka's there! Can't wait to see what happens next!
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Post by daniella on Mar 13, 2009 3:35:09 GMT 10
Micoop, it's a very good story... I loved it...
Please, keep going...
I loved to sse Luka and Abby reunited...
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micoop
Junior Luby
i didn't make it myself
Posts: 12
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Post by micoop on Mar 14, 2009 3:49:25 GMT 10
Here is the third chapter. It's not big. Chapter 3
Nick went back to their table.
“Who’s that guy hugging with Abby?” Mike asked him.
In a second Nick turned his head backwards and saw Luka and Abby holding each other with her head lying on his chest. He looked on his friends with sad look on the face and just shook his head not knowing what to say about that special man.
Susan watched the whole scene a while longer and then
“That ought to be Luka!” she exclaimed.
“Who?” Mike responded.
“That super man she loved for the past three or something years!” answered Susan.
“Wow” Mike and Nick said at the same moment.
“Yeah. I told her that she could try to come back in the game with you, Nick, but she only said that you’re only a friendly figure to her and that she loves this guy Luka. Sorry, but now I see why she was so determined.” Susan smirked seeing Abby heading towards them and Luka waiting by the exit door.
“I think she will leave us.”
Nick turned and saw Abby.
“Sorry, guys, but now I’ll leave you to have fun by yourselves. That guy is an old friend of mine, we didn’t see each other for a very long time. See you all tomorrow. Bye!”
Nick was the one to answer her
“Bye, but it won’t be that fun without you”
She waved and was gone.
They walked side by side not saying a word. The night was nice and none of them knew what to say. They just knew that they wanted to be near each other.
Luka was the first to break the silence.
“I missed you a lot.”
“Me too.”
“Then why did you leave?”
She stopped and sighed heavily.
“I knew that it will be a torture to see you day by day and not be able to kiss you.”
At that very moment he knew he’s not the only one feeling the same way it was two years ago. He cut the space separating them in one swift motion and kissed her with every emotion rushing through his body. And she fully gave it back. Now they knew for sure that their feelings were mutual.
Slowly they released one another and looked in the eyes of the person in front of them.
“I’ll never let you go again.”
“God, I love you so much.”
Sorry for any mistakes. And thanks a lot for reading it. I really appreciate this
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Post by suzanne on Mar 14, 2009 7:05:59 GMT 10
So sweet!! Poor Nick tho!! They kissed WOOHOO!! Update soon!!
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Post by baboune51 on Mar 14, 2009 19:52:07 GMT 10
I love it they kissed yeahhhhhhhhh !!!!!!!!! nice udapte !
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