Post by kia on Mar 30, 2009 0:18:50 GMT 10
This is just a short one-shot.
It's set during season 14, after Abby's confession but before The Chicago Way.
I know it's not a great fiction, but I'd like to know what you think about it.
Parts in italics are from i carry your heart with me by e.e. cummings.
Anothr warning: It contains angst and a little reference to a sexual situation.
I carry your heart (I carry it in my heart)
That there was. Their poem.
She was so beautiful during thet wedding.
Five perfect days but then...
All falling down.
His father getting ill.
Joe's accident.
Abby, who started drinking again.
Moretti.
The merely thought of the other man made him sick.
I am never without it (anywhere I go you go, my dear)
That was the thing that was killing him. Anywhere I go you go. Anywhere? Even in Moretti's bed?
He started shuddering. Fear, disdain, fury.
He violated her, she let him violate her.
His wife.
He grabbed the page and tore it.
It would never stop hurting.
It's set during season 14, after Abby's confession but before The Chicago Way.
I know it's not a great fiction, but I'd like to know what you think about it.
Parts in italics are from i carry your heart with me by e.e. cummings.
Anothr warning: It contains angst and a little reference to a sexual situation.
I carry your heart (I carry it in my heart)
That there was. Their poem.
She was so beautiful during thet wedding.
Five perfect days but then...
All falling down.
His father getting ill.
Joe's accident.
Abby, who started drinking again.
Moretti.
The merely thought of the other man made him sick.
I am never without it (anywhere I go you go, my dear)
That was the thing that was killing him. Anywhere I go you go. Anywhere? Even in Moretti's bed?
He started shuddering. Fear, disdain, fury.
He violated her, she let him violate her.
His wife.
He grabbed the page and tore it.
It would never stop hurting.
I'll have time to catch up eventually 