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Post by lulu on Mar 20, 2006 0:17:04 GMT 10
Disclaimer: I don't own anything that you recognise. Anything new is mine - simple.
She placed her hand on the latch and rested her forehead against the cold door. She breathed deeply and swallowed back a few tears. Using her free hand she tugged her bag onto her shoulder and looked down at her feet. She turned round and looked up to meet his gaze. This was it. As quickly as she could, she blurted out her words: "I'm sorry...it's over" Then she clicked the latch open to slip out the door and out of his life. He drowns in his dreams, An exquisite extreme I know He’s as damned as he seems, And more heaven than a heart could hold And if I try to save him, My whole world could cave in It just ain't right...It just ain't right What was he going to do now? How could he live knowing that the love of his life was out there with another man? Even though she is carrying his child... But he couldn't move to stop her from leaving. He didn't understand this and knew he never would. Abi*Lulu
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Post by Real Dream on Mar 20, 2006 0:32:25 GMT 10
nice beginning! keep writing!!
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Post by PiperxoxLeo on Mar 20, 2006 0:58:20 GMT 10
i like this and I love the song. Very good.
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Post by Luby14 on Mar 20, 2006 1:14:01 GMT 10
continue please it's a good beginning. ps : thanks again for your comments.
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Post by lubyfan on Mar 20, 2006 1:38:42 GMT 10
good start. Write more please.
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Post by loopyallie on Mar 20, 2006 1:43:39 GMT 10
Lovely start! So who's that song belong to?
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Post by lulu on Mar 20, 2006 1:52:08 GMT 10
Thanks guys - you're all so nice! It's a Kelly Clarkson song - her's have so much emotion and meaning - i love them Abi*Lulu
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Post by lubbybaby on Mar 20, 2006 8:20:06 GMT 10
;)Please, please go on, God I'm curious!!
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Post by lulu on Mar 24, 2006 1:11:44 GMT 10
It had been sixth months since she'd left him. And he'd not moved from this place. His job, his life, his friends...all gone now. No-one would understand because no-one knew why he felt this way. Then a face from the past finally helped to uncover the truth. The trouble with love is, It can tear you up inside Make your heart believe a lie, It's stronger than your pride The trouble with love is, It doesn't care how fast you fall And you can't refuse the call, See, you got no say at all Luka opened the door to see Susan Lewis. God it had been so long since they'd last spoke. "Luka, everyone is so worried about you." He just stared at her. "You quit County?" She asked but she already knew the answer. "Luka, come on. What happened?" "You better come in." Luka spoke softly. He knew now was the time to explain.
Abby awoke with a start. She gasped as the pain hit her again. She grasped her stomach as the wave of pain slowly left. She was in labour: today was the day.
Luka and Susan had been talking for over an hour when the truth finally emerged. "...so, Abby and I were sleeping together. She'd come round here after work and we'd spend evenings just in each other's arms. Then she'd leave again. When that happened I felt empty and that was when I knew I loved her. Then she announced she was pregnant. I was so excited but she was scared. I told her I loved her but that just drove her further away. She said we couldn't do this anymore and then she left." "I don't understand Luka. Why couldn't you be together? Didn't she want the baby?" "You haven't been to the ER?" Susan shook her head. "Then you don't know. Abby is married...to Carter. We were...it was...we were having an affair." Susan looked shocked. "Did she keep the baby?" "She told me it was Carter's but I know they weren't intimate that way during that time. She just convinced herself that it would be better that way. But I loved her more than Carter ever had or ever would." With that Luka got up and turned away to the window. Does he love you like I never could? Hold you tender tell you everything's good? Would he hurt you? Cos I never could Does he hold your body tight all night baby?
I'm talking bout a whole lotta history I can't find a way to show what you mean to me I've fallen all around when you miss me I don't know what to do so tell me baby
Abby, with Carter by her side, was being wheeled into the ER. Everything was happeneing so fast and Abby was so excited yet nervous. She couldn't shake this feeling and she knew why. All she could think about was...Luka.
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Post by lubyfan on Mar 24, 2006 7:44:03 GMT 10
Update soon, I want to know what Abby is going to do!
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Post by Lubyfanatic316 on Mar 24, 2006 10:10:24 GMT 10
can't wait for the next part!
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Post by Noora on Mar 25, 2006 22:09:02 GMT 10
This is so good, different and lovely!! UPDATE SOON!! ^^
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Post by cheryl on Mar 25, 2006 22:55:57 GMT 10
This fic is soo orginal.I'm dying for the next part!!Oh i can't wait for your next update.Your update better be soon because this fic is awesome!!
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Post by <3 LubyII <3 on Mar 25, 2006 23:58:40 GMT 10
That was great, can't wait for the next part!!!
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Post by Natalie on Mar 27, 2006 9:16:04 GMT 10
Lulu, I will hop the next flight to Bristol and strap you to the computer until you update. And I mean that in the nicest possible way.
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