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Post by LuBByFaNatiC [ThAiSsa] on Apr 17, 2007 7:30:53 GMT 10
Another amazing Rory-story!!! Loved it!! Great start... keep going and... update right now!!! ;**
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Post by hollygirl on Apr 17, 2007 9:18:45 GMT 10
ba-da-ba-ba-ba, I'm lovin' it!
I was starting to wonder when you were going to post your new fic! I saw the title and how you used upper and lower case and KNEW it was your fic! This is an intresting start hun, I can not wait for a new update!!!
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Post by Caffy on Apr 17, 2007 9:46:33 GMT 10
YAYAYAYYAAY!!! I LOVE Rory world!! ANYTHING can happen. If possible get Carter drunk in a snowsuit, then roll him down a hill or get him to have a gay love affair with erm. Romano. Or let him grow a handlebar mustache. I'm getting carried away. Sounds TRES interestant Mrs. I loveth you and your wacky ways.
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Post by Real Dream on Apr 17, 2007 9:48:44 GMT 10
A gun?? she's gonna kill her father??? what an expeditious girl but the father is not luka is he? let her kill carter, but don't touch to luka!! pleaaaaaaaaaae, updaaaaaaate!!!
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Post by Melimelo on Apr 17, 2007 11:29:16 GMT 10
Okay I am not sure if I get yet ;D Meg and Mattie are twins and I think their parents are Luka and Abby. It seems they are not happy with Luka and it that they want to go live with their mother What awful reason could there be for their parents not to be together..what happened twelve years ago Is Abby an alcoholic? Did Carter brainwash her and she is now a stepford wife? Why can't Luka cook anymore and how did the girl get hold of a gun?RORY..you are scaring the crap out of me...this alternate Lubyverse doesn't sound very happy.....but I trust you and I will wait for your next update
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Post by charlieluby on Apr 18, 2007 2:33:45 GMT 10
I'm hooked! And already asking a 1001 questions! hehe! update really soon...you know you want to! x
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Post by luby2534 on Apr 18, 2007 4:35:21 GMT 10
Well Rory you have done it again one chapter and we are all begging for more. Now come back here you have left us hanging long enough. Your sooooo EVIL
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Post by zelda on Apr 18, 2007 7:36:37 GMT 10
RORY, Tu es une VRAIE PETITE SORCIERE!!! Am a bit SCARED of your overactive imagination! ( have ALREADY seen what you are capable of doing! ) So, no speculations, missus, you'd be too happy! ONLY A STANDING OVATION FOR MEL ! Nobody can do any better, Melimelo!
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Post by Ninolino on Apr 18, 2007 16:46:32 GMT 10
I won't say anything... Because even though I have something on my mind, I am COMPLETELY sure that RORY thought of something no one can figure out! So, I am not going to say anything! RORY, pleeeeease update! Hm, i'm thinking... thinking... This is not your BEACH WEEK, or WEEKEND, is it?? Pretty pwease?? Guess I said sth after all... Da**, i always talk to much. P.S. I loooove the name of your new fic! hehehe... Mutant Croatian Seed! I never realized why all croatians were so weird. Now I do. Hehehe, it's the MUTANT CROATIAN SEED!!! heehee Maybe I should mail this fic to our embassy... Or, parliament! Or that science center where they discover how genes influence our personality! I mean, we found the reason.. it's MUTATION!!! WOHO!! Anyways, rambling again... love it
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Post by charlieluby on Apr 18, 2007 18:52:29 GMT 10
Rory like i said im addicted! UPDATE! x
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Post by mags on Apr 18, 2007 21:55:40 GMT 10
Rorrrrrryyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Give me an update...pretty pretty please?
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Post by strausser on Apr 18, 2007 22:56:02 GMT 10
dun make me beg.... remember the stapler i used long long ago?
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Post by Ergirl on Apr 19, 2007 1:58:29 GMT 10
OOO...was veeeeeeeery excited when i saw your new fic up...and the first chapter was much the awesomeness... it's left me with NOT A CLUE what's happened/going to happen...and i love it!!!!! Can't wait for the next chapter xxxxx
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Post by rorygilmore on Apr 19, 2007 15:48:00 GMT 10
New update and don't worry; I've been watching 'Without a Trace' and CSI ' Las Vegas' a lot, to instruct me, so there's nothing to worry about . I'll try to post next update sooner, having too much homework... Nina; yep this weekend is my final 'Beach weekend' . Autumn has begun and sun is going away ...so sad, love summer; I'm gonna miss it so much... THANKS EVERYONE , for your replies _________________________ CHAPTER 1: "DANCE HULA ON MY COUNTER"
12 YEARS EARLIER…
There’s a time when every single man, realizes how lonely he is and that time came for reserved Dr Kovac. It was hard for him to admit it but if he didn’t do anything to stop it, whether he liked it or not; he was going to be one of those wretched bachelors for the rest of his miserable life. He gave a big sigh before leaving the last chart on admit desk. It wasn’t fair. He leaned on the counter and rubbed his face. He was ready to do it again; ready to love a woman, to have a child; to share his life with them...but it seemed destiny had other plans for him…Doomed to be alone.
The end of his relationship with Sam put him on the verge of the cliff. Why couldn’t she gave him a baby? He wished for a little one, more than anything else; a child of his own; someone to love and who will love him back without conditions; a new reason to live for; someone who would remind him that after all, life wasn’t that appalling…but then, she kicked him out of her life.
And there he was again, all alone… but not for too long. He took a deep breath and stood straight; determined. He had decided to take extreme measures to fill the empty space in his heart and after thinking about it one, twice; even dreamt with it, he was going to take that path. Yes, he was. He only needed a woman. He looked around him... But not any woman, it had to be someone he could trust, someone who would take his proposal seriously, someone who would understand him, someone that will match his criteria... and he already had someone in mind, but wasn’t sure about it, what if she said: “No”
Lost in her own turmoil of problems and looking like a zombie, Abby approached admit… and he saw her coming. Her image was like a lightning bolt striking Luka's head and like a male peacock, he opened his ‘extravagant tail’ to call her attention: “Hey” He greeted her with that big Croatian melting grin.
..And any other woman would have smiled back or probably giggle, but Abby, well she was Abby. She just raised her eyebrows at him; giving him a ‘Go to hell’ face… and by that he knew it, because, he knew her better than anyone; she was upset. “What’s wrong?” He whispered, leaning his head a little. “Wrong?” Abby stared at the ceiling and then looked at him, edgy “Wrong? Ha! I’ll tell you what’s wrong” She bit her lower lip and exploded “I don’t have enough money to afford my med school tuition, not even to pay my rent. I failed my boards and if I fail again I won’t match County; that’s what’s wrong” She looked at him, with those intimidating, big chocolate eyes, waiting for him to say anything…and it seemed she was going to hit him if he didn’t …
“Is there anything I can do to…” “A coffee would be good” She tilted her head to one side “Or a couple of beers…” “Coffee’s better” Luka chuckled, touching her shoulder with his hand, like reassuring her. It was a good thing they were still friends. He smiled. Their friendship had grown over the years and it was nice …Yes, he could trust her anything, including his plan and he was going to ask her tonight “Coffee and a little chat.” He added “We need to talk about business” “Business?” She arched her eyebrows, puzzled. “Yep, Coffee and business…and if you’re nice, maybe a little dinner” He smiled. Abby smiled too “Coffee, business and dinner? Wow, what are we celebrating?” “Seven years of our break up” He smiled…but Abby’s smile faded. “I’m joking Abby” He chuckled “I just…” he placed his hands nervously in his pockets “I have something to propose you” Abby blinked a couple of times, her eyes fixed on him, trying to read what was going on in his head. She frowned. “What do you have in mind?” “Take you to my place, seduce you and…well, make you dance hula on my counter wearing just my neon stethoscope” Abby chuckled. One of the things she loved about him, were those little sparks of sense of humor that would blow up any time without warning. “That sounds great…” She kept chuckling “As long as we have a Neanderthal ballet prelude, with you performing in pinkie tights.” He laughed, he couldn’t deny it, she was amazing “So? At what time you're off?”
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Post by strausser on Apr 19, 2007 17:32:39 GMT 10
hmmmmm looks like next chapter will be juicy ;D
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