pili
Junior Luby
just perfect
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Post by pili on Apr 21, 2007 15:53:39 GMT 10
dang, I hate spanish! No me gusta espanol! Let me tell you that you're not the one. I only like how the 'bad words' sound, so passionate (?) P.S. Rory, i know you're here, update please!!
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Post by rorygilmore on Apr 21, 2007 18:07:15 GMT 10
But Holly you're good in spanish...Don't worry, I know I make huge mistakes too, that's why, I've decided to make this our: 'Spanglish' thread (Anyone: don't worry to make a mistake!) 'cause 'Spanglish' is the brand new language the world will be speaking soon!!!...Spanglish (mix them both: english and spanish!)!!! Get your 'Spanglish' Dictionary for free!!! Call: (0800-Rorythemaniac-spanglish) Anyway, before someone kills me better post this new chap... ____________________ CHAPTER 2: "…BE THE MOTHER…"
“This is so good… scrumptious” Abby shoved a big spoon of stew into her mouth and closed her eyes feeling the appetizing taste of the poach Luka prepared. “Haven’t had…af defcent dinner fsince I waf fourf” She chomped. Luka chuckled as he sat at the table with her. “It shows” He nodded towards a fresh spot of stew on Abby’s blouse. “I don’t care” She shrugged “I don’t care about anything right now, the world can blow up and I won’t care…and you know why? ….Because I’m sick of being stressed” She left her fork on the plate, feeling indeed that the world was falling apart around her. “Dammit…what I’m I going to do?” She groaned and rested her forehead on her palms. “Hey, it’s not that bad” Luka leaned his head, looking for her eyes. “At least you’re having my stew” They chuckled. “And you know I’ll be here for anything you need” He said, sincerely, taking one of her hands.
Abby raised her head a little to look at him and smiled, picking up her fork again. At least she had his support. “So; let’s talk about you” She asked, brushing a lock of hair behind her ear “How are you feeling?” “About?” He picked up his fork to eat. “You know, Sam” She mumbled, with her mouth full of stew. “I thought youf werf going tof wearf …tulle and taffeta in a couple of months” “Me? Tulle and Taffeta?” He chuckled. “Yeah, you know…” She laughed “White doves, wedding bells…” He leaned his back on the chair a little uncomfortable. But not because of having to recall his lasts moments with Sam; because of the proposal he had in his mind for Abby. Abby nodded “Still heartbroken, huh?” He sighed. “Not that much…not after the support I received from some friend” “Some girl…” She smiled, knowing he was referring to her and the night weeks ago, when she stayed the night with him, talking, trying to comfort him. “Some girl” He nodded, smiling at her.
…And for just a few seconds their eyes met …and it seemed they reconnected, until apprehensively, they broke their gazes. It was an awkward moment. Luka wasn’t sure if he should ask her or not…maybe he shouldn’t, after all, she was under a lot of pressure… But then, he could help her to lessen that weight…. “Look Abby…there’s something really important I want to discuss with you” “The business thing?” “Yes, the business thing…” “Well, whatever brings out money is welcome” She smiled. “But first…” He stood up, feeling a little tense “You must promise me you won’t freak out” “Freak Out?” Abby folded her arms across her chest and frowned “What’s this business about?” “I don’t think people should be alone for the rests of their lives, do you?” He asked, looking as if he was choking with a watermelon and she noticed he was a bit anxious. “Ooookay, what’s going on?” She sat straight. “You know how difficult has been for me to…have a serious… stable relationship for more than a year…” He sighed “And…and I don’t want to be alone for the rest of my life, Abby” He said in almost a whisper. “Ah, Luka come on; you’re not alone, you have your friends; you have me…” “I want a woman” He cut her off . “I need a woman…”
What? A little concerned, Abby pursed her lips looking at him as if he had gone completely nuts. “And that woman is you…” Her mouth dropped. Was he declaring his love for her? And what the hell was she suppose to say? Shut up, Abby, just shut up; let him say it…oh great he’s gonna declare himself and I have a big spot of stew on my blouse… “We’ve known each other for years…and we’ve been friends for a long time… good friends. We’ve been through a lot together…” “Of course we have” She gave him an affectionate look. Now, she was a little tense too. “Abby…” “Yes?” “I need you to… I’m asking you to…be the surrogate mother of my…baby”_______________ Okay, I'm not sure about this chapter. I feel like there's something missing but I'm not sure what it is... Just, be honest if you feel there's smth you don't like. Hugs, RoRy
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Post by Maryna on Apr 21, 2007 18:28:58 GMT 10
OMG!!! Rory you are the best! It becomes a certain thing that in your stories Luka and Abby bring children on the world in the most weird situations...first they have two daughers with different parteners (at least this was in the beggining), after that they have a daughter they gave for adoption and now...this!
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Post by charlieluby on Apr 21, 2007 20:23:47 GMT 10
Surrogate mother! Holy jesus! !!!!
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Post by Rach :) on Apr 21, 2007 23:13:29 GMT 10
Surrogate mother! Holy jesus! !!!! exactly what i was thinking!!! update!!!
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Post by smile90 on Apr 22, 2007 0:00:30 GMT 10
Surrogate mother! Holy jesus! !!!! exactly what i was thinking!!! update!!! Me too!! What a ... question, Luka!!
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Post by Real Dream on Apr 22, 2007 0:57:07 GMT 10
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Post by LuBByFaNatiC [ThAiSsa] on Apr 22, 2007 1:15:10 GMT 10
exactly what i was thinking!!! update!!! Me too!! What a ... question, Luka!! yeah... me too update soon Rory...
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Post by Bah on Apr 22, 2007 1:21:47 GMT 10
OMG RORY!
update ASAP please!
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Post by hollygirl on Apr 22, 2007 1:39:43 GMT 10
muy bien!!! I loved it!!! I can just imagnie the look on her face when he asked her to be the surrogate!! This is going to be one really good crazy fic!! Update soon hun!
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Post by ERFanRach on Apr 22, 2007 2:10:57 GMT 10
Update Soon!!
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Post by jacobsmommy on Apr 22, 2007 2:46:46 GMT 10
I agree with everybody about the surrogate mother thing.
Great updat as usual Rory.
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Post by ladylockhart on Apr 22, 2007 2:49:09 GMT 10
lol, I'm from south texas, and our "official" language is "spanglish."
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Post by strizzy on Apr 22, 2007 2:57:02 GMT 10
Surrogate mother! ;D Ok then! ;D
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Post by luby2534 on Apr 22, 2007 5:00:38 GMT 10
Rory your CRAZY....but i love ya.
Great update.
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