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Post by *Natalie* on Apr 22, 2007 6:58:54 GMT 10
Wooh!! Never seen that coming, you know how to surprise an audience. Can't wait for Abby's responce
natalie x
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Post by strausser on Apr 22, 2007 7:18:43 GMT 10
OH MY GOD! not that i m surprised - given this is a rory story... please update soon ))
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Post by zelda on Apr 22, 2007 7:38:01 GMT 10
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Post by lubyworld on Apr 23, 2007 3:31:00 GMT 10
OMG need an update please update as soon as possible.... hope she is going to say yes
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Post by crazylubyfan on Apr 23, 2007 7:27:34 GMT 10
Okay that was super crazy Rory, but i loved it! Need an update soon!!!
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Post by kia on Apr 23, 2007 19:13:49 GMT 10
Rory, update now!!!
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Post by Melimelo on Apr 24, 2007 14:14:41 GMT 10
So are we going with...... A. Turkey Baster? B. Old fashioned nookies? C. Sterile fertility clinic? Or Croatian seduction ritual of love To get Abby pregnant that is....she will say yes won't she?
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Post by maggie on Apr 24, 2007 14:43:33 GMT 10
A. Turkey Baster? B. Old fashioned nookies? C. Sterile fertility clinic? Or Croatian seduction ritual of love Mel, you forget that he doesn't need to bother with that. His verility is such that he simply has to look in the general direction of her womb and she'll be pregnant within moments. Speaking of which, I heard some of the most interesting things from a certain person last evening regarding erotic Balkan rituals. Made me giggle like a little dork and nearly fall off my bed laughing.
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Post by Melimelo on Apr 24, 2007 17:30:22 GMT 10
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Post by Ninolino on Apr 25, 2007 0:06:37 GMT 10
Speaking of which, I heard some of the most interesting things from a certain person last evening regarding erotic Balkan rituals. Made me giggle like a little dork and nearly fall off my bed laughing. Can I please hear that... and: RORY?! This is seriously by far MOST INTENSE FIC, and I would really like for you to GET YOUR SWEET LITTLE AS* HERE, AND UPDATE!!!
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Post by rorygilmore on Apr 25, 2007 15:17:43 GMT 10
A. Turkey Baster? B. Old fashioned nookies? C. Sterile fertility clinic? Or Croatian seduction ritual of love Mel, you forget that he doesn't need to bother with that. His verility is such that he simply has to look in the general direction of her womb and she'll be pregnant within moments. Speaking of which, I heard some of the most interesting things from a certain person last evening regarding erotic Balkan rituals. Made me giggle like a little dork and nearly fall off my bed laughing. Hahahaha! Dirty little minds. Gosh, you've made me laugh like crazy ...Hmm, but I like the options...I had something in mind, but I think I'm going to change it ...erotic balkan rituals...sound GREAT! ___________________________ CHAPTER 3: "OBLIGED TO HAVE SEX WITH YOU?"
Abby blinked a couple of times, trying to process what Luka has just said. Maybe her elfish ears had fooled her. “Surrogate…Mother?” She asked him, in disbelief. ..and he just nodded shyly, avoiding to look at her. It was a joke; yeah, it was surely one of his bizarre Croatian jokes…but he looked so serious… She smiled a little, still unsure about the truthness of his proposal “Did you knock your head with an anvil while…” “I’m serious, Abby” He interrupted her.
Hell, he was serious. Her eyes opened wide and she bit her lip, trying to find the right words ...“Wow…that’s something…” She played with the buttons of her blouse “…flattering…I think” Unexpectedly she felt the urge of running out of the place as fast as she could. “I…I want to be a father, again and…” Abby blushed “And you want me to…” She looked at him. “…carry my baby” He completed the sentence for her.
The sole idea of having a baby made Abby shudder from head to toe. She was definitely not meant to be a mother. “It’s nice…” She looked down, all blushed. It was nice he thought about her for this but… “But this isn’t exactly the kind of …business I was expecting, Luka” She rose from the table and went to pick up her coat and purse. “You know what? I forgot I have a lot of stuff to do” Yep, she wanted to get out of the place as fast as she could.
...And Luka noticed it. Great, you scared her. “Abby…” He followed her. “No, really a LOT of stuff to do; laundry…vacuuming…walk the dog…” She held her purse close, apprehensively. “You don’t have a dog” “I think I should buy one,don’t you?...Terrier, Husky...maybe a sheepdog with little sparkling antennas” Luka stared at her as if she had gone nuts. "What?" "Bye Luka" She grinned and turned around. “Abby, I know it sounds…crazy, but this is important to me and I need your help” He tried to stop her. “Uh-uh. Wrong number” She shook her head as she put on her coat. “Why?...Why not?” “Luka, I bet there are plenty of women…and men outside who would be thrilled to carry your baby… Bye!” She walked towards the door but he stood in front before she could reach the doorknob.
Abby, wait…” He closed his eyes. He screwed everything “I’m sorry. I …shouldn’t have asked you this way. I’m sorry…it’s just…” He rubbed his face.
She just stared at him. “Why me?” He went to sank in the coach. “You’re the only one in the world; I would ask to do this” “It’s crazy, Luka” She followed him and sat on the coffee table, in front of him. “I want to be a father again” Luka sighed “I really do…and people do this everyday” Abby sighed “You’re a wonderful guy” She stroked his arm “I’m sure you’re going to find someone special…” “I found someone special” He stared down at his hands “…but she doesn’t want to do it” He looked at her. Abby stood up “Luka, I can’t be a mother right now…” “You don’t have to be the mother” She glanced away. “You only have to carry the baby for 9 months” He explained “…I’ll pay you, we’ll make a contract. You won’t have any responsibility.”
Abby shook her head, unsure “It’s too freaking weird…” It was tempting; she needed the money desperately and he was there; offering what she needed. “I don’t know…” She looked away. She knew he was a good man; that he won’t ever ask her to do something that might harm her or a baby… “After the baby is born, he’ll come with me…and you won’t have to do anything with him... or her” He explained. Abby took a deep breath; she couldn’t believe she was letting him talk her into this. “Have you got the woman who’s going to be the donor?” She asked, walking back to the door with him. He bit his lip and avoided to look at her. “I thought…that you would probably …” “Oh my god…” She looked at him in disbelief “You want me to…Luka there are banks for that!” “I know! But I don’t want any woman to be the donor…” “I can’t, Luka” She shook her head vehemently. “It’ would be like giving away my own baby” “…with the difference that you’re going to know where it’s going to be and who’s going to take care of him…or her” “No way” She slid her hand under his arm to grab the doorknob “Sorry…”
“I’ll pay your med school tuition!” He blurted out and she suddenly stopped turning the handle.“I’ll pay your rent; I’ll pay all your expenses; your food, clothes…cravings. I’ll pay you everything. We’ll make a contract… You won’t have to pay anything for months” It was too much for her; too alluring…too creepy. “See you at work, Luka” She didn’t know why she did it but she felt the impulse of kissing him on the cheek… and she did. …and he felt a spark in his heart “Please, think about it” She shrugged. “Won’t promise anything” He opened the door for her but she stayed there, thinking…then she turned to look at him. “I’m I going to be obliged to have sex with you?”
His face was indescribable, he had never thought about it before. “Only if that make you say ‘yes’” He gave her a naughty smile.
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Post by smile90 on Apr 25, 2007 17:07:04 GMT 10
that's creepy!!! haha.. omg.. If someone ever ask me to do this, I would think he's completely crazy!!! loved your update!!!
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Post by strausser on Apr 25, 2007 18:52:06 GMT 10
that's almost like the very traditional lhusband wife situation
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Post by ERFanRach on Apr 25, 2007 20:17:12 GMT 10
Great Update!!!!
Update Soon!!!!
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