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Post by jacobsmommy on May 19, 2008 6:33:27 GMT 10
Update soon please Great update.
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Post by debsxx2006xx on May 20, 2008 18:35:17 GMT 10
Part 26 Luka
"Ok you need to keep him talking as long as you can?" He hands me my phone it needs to show up my name for the plan to work "what if the name pisses him off more and he hurts her?" I should never have let her go alone I promised to look after her. "It's a risk but if what you said is true i'll think he will answer you." I nod my head he does hate the fact Abby and I are so close "ok i'll do it what ever it takes" I walk towards the window and dial the phone. "Kovac!" He answer's quickly he sounds angry "Richard please just tell me where Abby is and all this is over" the inspector waves his hand tell me to go on. "The whore that's my business, she's my wife." Yeah but doesn't give any man the right to do what he was "Don't hurt her Richard please" I try to keep him going without making him more angry. "I'll do what I want to her she's my wife." I know it I know he's already hurt her he must have "Richard just tell me what you want anything" I plead with him now. "I want my wife and my daughter and I want you to die!" I look up and see the inspector he's waves to cut the line he must have a trace on the call "not going to happen Richard Katie is save and i swear to god if you have touched one hair on head i'll kill yo..." the line goes dead. "We got him he's 100 miles south of farmers walk." I grab my coat and run out the door i'm sure there is a bunch of cabins up there he could have her in one of them.
Abby.
He covers me his breath warm on my face as he try's to kiss me rubbing his hands up my legs acting like wee some loved up married couple "Richard I won't let you" I tell him i've become someone new i'm brave and strong and I won't let him conrol me again. "You will do what I say Abby your my wife remember?" I get a sudden rush of joy I can hear police cars coming turning my head I can se a mix of blue and red lights flashing up the main path. "The bastard he traced my call!" He jumps up and reaches for the gun "just give up Richard it's over" he paces around the small brick room hitting himself in he head with the gun he starts to shout. "No no i'm not going down for this NO." He grabs the rope thats keeping my hands tied togather pulling me up to my feet "please stop" he looks mad scary even I really don't know what he's capable of anymore. "If i'm going down i'm taking you with me." I feel the gun been pressed against my head as he grips me around the stomach "Richard no" he walks me forward but I don't move I really think he's going to shoot us both "no no" I cry as he pushes me almost dragging me out the door.
"Put the gun down." "Let her go Richard." "Lay on the floor with your hands above your head."
Lights are flashing he's using my body to cover his I can see a number of cops behind the car doors pointing guns at us but best of all I can see Luka held back behind them. "If i'm going down so is she!"
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Post by britneyluby on May 20, 2008 23:29:59 GMT 10
love it.. update!!
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marie
Countess of Luby
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Post by marie on May 21, 2008 2:23:51 GMT 10
oh come on !! update update update !!
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Post by lkaljk (Ebba) on May 21, 2008 2:26:52 GMT 10
Ohh my....... Don't let him hurt her please Update!!!!!!! ;D ;D ;D
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Post by jacobsmommy on May 21, 2008 4:09:50 GMT 10
Oh please don't let Richard hurt her. Please update soon.
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Post by sissa on May 21, 2008 4:44:09 GMT 10
I hope one of the cops kills Richard. He deserves a bullet.
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Post by lubylover on May 21, 2008 8:33:14 GMT 10
update ASAP!!!!
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Post by debsxx2006xx on May 21, 2008 18:54:28 GMT 10
Part 27 Luka.I turn off and go down a slip road seeing red and blue lights flashing i'm guessing that's where I need to be but when I pull up I see a bunch of cars in my way but worst of all I see Abby he has a gun held to her head her hands are tied together she has cut's all over her face and Richard's using her body to cover him so the cops can't fire. She spots me tears roll down her face she's trying to pull away from him "Abby" I want her away from him but I don't want her to make him more angry i'm stuck between wanting her and wanting her safe. "If i'm going down so is she!" He gets pissed and starts waving the gun around cops shout and he scream's people run closer then I fall to the floor as I hear gun fire go off "ABBY!" I crawl forwards and look under one of the cars all I can see is Richard and Abby both laying on the floor neither of them are moving. "All clear get the medic here now!" I jump up and rush over that's when I see Abby her eye' are open she's talking "Abby" I rush over falling to the floor I take her in my arm's "I'm here" I whisper rocking her looking over my shoulder I see Richard on the floor blood around him and the medic shake's his head he's dead. "I tried..I." I hold her close "it's ok now i'm here" I tell her over and over not letting her look behind me while waiting for someone to finish un-doing the rope's keeping her tied together. "Is he dead?" I nod my head "yeah sweetie he's gone it's over" we get up taking a quick look before hiding herself in my again. "Good." "She's good Luka." I turn around and see Ray standing behind me "Good? her loser husband spent year's abusing her and then he tries to kill yeah Ray she's great" I turn back to looking in the window i've been standing outside her room for hour's scared of going in. "I'm sorry I just meant." I hold my hand up in defence "i'm sorry I just we should have known" I should have known I should have stopped this. "sorry Luka." He pat's my shoulder and walk's away it's now or never I guess "hey" I say softly she has her back to me but I know she's not sleeping. "Where's Katie?" Oh damn I haven't called Neela "with Neela she's save" she turn's around "your save" I tell her sitting on the bed. "I don't think i'll ever feel save again Luka."
go me 4 keeping 2 going Hope your enjoying? thanks everyone x
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Post by orangecrush on May 21, 2008 19:04:14 GMT 10
I like!
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Post by britneyluby on May 21, 2008 19:16:38 GMT 10
update!
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Post by lubylover on May 21, 2008 21:23:07 GMT 10
UPDATE!
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marie
Countess of Luby
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Post by marie on May 21, 2008 23:06:36 GMT 10
come on ! update soon
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Post by lkaljk (Ebba) on May 22, 2008 1:13:54 GMT 10
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Post by jacobsmommy on May 22, 2008 5:10:58 GMT 10
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