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Post by ERFanRach on Oct 23, 2006 7:37:33 GMT 10
Great Update!!
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Post by <3 LubyII <3 on Oct 23, 2006 9:57:57 GMT 10
Great update!
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Post by Lubyfanatic316 on Oct 23, 2006 11:17:51 GMT 10
Great Update!
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Post by jaana on Oct 23, 2006 21:29:35 GMT 10
Great update! Really liked it.
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Post by debsxx2006xx on Oct 24, 2006 3:39:02 GMT 10
Hi Guys Sorry i haven't updated yet i haven't felt great today but u'm working on a chapter now. I'll try not to be long Deb's + bump
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Post by steffi1986 on Oct 24, 2006 5:07:46 GMT 10
hehe lol debs sweetie, but just update if you fell well okay?
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Post by debsxx2006xx on Oct 24, 2006 5:14:50 GMT 10
Double trouble. Abby.“Sorry mom.” I’m standing at the bar when Katie slides up next to me “you knew” I try to give her one of my best I’m angry at you looks but it doesn’t work. “I still meant everything I said.” I lean in and kiss her forehead “I know you did princess” she may be a daddies girl but she is truly me every inch of her. “Look at dad and Joe.” I turn around and see Luka on the dancing floor holding Joe in his arms as they dance alone on the floor. “You should go dance with dad.” She takes my glass off my and pushes me towards the dance floor “he’s dancing with Joe” I tell her but she storms over to Luka dragging me with her. “Hey munch come here and dance with me.” She takes Joe from Luka and spins him around “hi” I mouth to Luka from the edge of the floor. “May I?” He holds his hands out to me “I guess so” I’m trying to be angry at him but how can I be when he did all this for me. “I love you.” He whispers in my ear as the music changes and he pulls me to him holding me close to his chest “I love you” I tell him as we move around the floor. Luka.“Dance daddy dance with me.” I look down and see Joe standing at my feet with his super man doll stuff under his arm “I’m busy buddy” I look back up to the spot at the bar. “No you’re not your staring at mommy.” I look down and grab his arms lifting him up “yeah well she’s great to look at” I spin him around so he can look at her too “see your mom is amazing” and she looks good in a pair of jeans. “Dance daddy dance.” I walk to the dance floor “ok” I start to spin him around in a circle on the dance floor causing him to burst into a fit of giggles. “Faster daddy faster.” So I do as my son asks and we end up jiving around the dance floor looking like a pair of idiots alone. “Hey munch come here and dance with me.” Katie takes Joe from me and places him on the floor before going down on her knees so she is the same height as him to dance. “Hi” Abby mouths to me from the edge of the floor “May I?” I ask holding my hands out for her to her “I guess so.” I know she is only pretending to be angry with me “I love you” I whispers in her ear waiting for Greg to change the music like I asked. “I love you.” I kiss her neck as we dance everyone is watching us but I can’t say I care.
I'm ok hun
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Post by ERFanRach on Oct 24, 2006 5:29:00 GMT 10
Great Update!!
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Post by steffi1986 on Oct 24, 2006 5:38:55 GMT 10
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Post by <3 LubyII <3 on Oct 24, 2006 5:51:25 GMT 10
Great update!
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Post by jadestar on Oct 24, 2006 6:15:08 GMT 10
sweet update, Debs, I hope you feel better now
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Post by Lubyfanatic316 on Oct 24, 2006 6:27:51 GMT 10
Great Update!
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Post by *Natalie* on Oct 24, 2006 7:16:21 GMT 10
Great update! I don't think i could stay mad at him for long natalie x
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Post by debsxx2006xx on Oct 24, 2006 20:01:14 GMT 10
Hey guys I have thought of a new fanfiction but i won't and don't want to end either of the two i'm doing. I could start the new one but I wouldn't update it every day so do you think i should start it or wait until i end one of my old fanfictions? Please let me know what you think? Deb's
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Post by <3 LubyII <3 on Oct 24, 2006 22:20:32 GMT 10
I think you should start the new one!!!
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