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Post by jaana on Oct 24, 2006 23:58:45 GMT 10
Great update! You should start the new one.
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Post by LoveLuka on Oct 25, 2006 0:16:33 GMT 10
awsome
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Post by debsxx2006xx on Oct 25, 2006 4:25:12 GMT 10
Double trouble. Abby.I’m dancing with Luka to our favourite songs when all the lights go out leaving the room in darkness. “Happy birthday to you happy birthday to you happy birthday dear Abby happy birthday to you.” I look up and see Ray and Neela pushes a huge cake into the room “oh you guys” Luka pulls away from me but I reach for him holding onto his hand. “It’s your night princess.” He whispers in my ear trying to tug away again “don’t let me go” I tell him wrapping his arm around my stomach. “Blow them out and make a wish.” I think for a few moment’s before looking around the room “ok 1 wish ” I say leaning closer to the cake. “Don’t say it aloud mommy.” I hear Joe tell me as I close my eyes “I wish…” I wish my life would never change that it will always be full of love and joy. “Speech!” The candles go out and the room breaks into screams “no guys no way” I laugh it off but everyone is standing around looking at me. “Go on baby.” Luka tugs on my hand “ok well first of all I hate you all for lying and when I find out who was involved…Neela, Greg” I point my finger at them “were going to have words” everyone laughs out loud. “He made me.” Neela assures me hoping I wont hate her but how can I how can I hate any of them this has to be one of the best birthdays I’ve had to date. Luka.“I just want to thank you all for coming and have fun get drunk it’s on Luka and that doesn’t happen often.” I grab her by the stomach and pull her against my chest “happy birthday princess” I kiss her forehead before she turns around in my arms. “Thank you Luka this has to be one of the best I’ve had.” She tells me wrapping her arms around my neck “oh your welcome very welcome” I tell her leaning closer towards her covering her lips with mine. “I’m sleepy daddy.” We look down to find Joe tugging on my jacket “are you buddy?” he nods his head so I reach down to pick him up. “Oh do you want to go to bed baby.” Abby rubs her hand over his hair causing him to lean against my shoulder and sticking his thumb in his mouth “it’s late” I tell Abby and Joe nods his head. “Hey mom some people are going and want to say bye.” Abby leans in and kisses me then Joe before grabbing Katie’s hand and dragging her off to the door “I’m glad you have had a good night honey” I call after her. “Shhh daddy I’m sleeping."
Good?
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Post by LoveLuka on Oct 25, 2006 6:51:56 GMT 10
it's not good it's the bestest chapter ever
(bestest isn't even a word I know. But this fic is really the BESTEST)
UPDATE
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Post by *Natalie* on Oct 25, 2006 7:16:13 GMT 10
Brill update as always natalie x p.s. think you should carry on with them all : p
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Post by ERFanRach on Oct 25, 2006 8:46:06 GMT 10
Great!! Update!!
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Post by jadestar on Oct 25, 2006 11:29:56 GMT 10
soooooooo freaking cute...
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Post by jaana on Oct 25, 2006 23:47:00 GMT 10
Great update!
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Post by strizzy on Oct 26, 2006 2:47:26 GMT 10
Nice update! I'd like to read any other ideas that you may have
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Post by debsxx2006xx on Oct 26, 2006 3:55:45 GMT 10
Double Trouble Abby.“Morning Beautiful.” I feel a cold pair of hands on my waist then he slides up behind me “it’s morning already?” make my day and say no I dare you. “Yeah 8am if your wondering.” Oh crap I could sleep for days “do I have to get up baby?” maybe if I’m nice I can drag my birthday out an extra day or so. “Not a chance woman.” He laughs and flips me over that’s when a rush of blood goes to my head and I’m about to throw up “oh good” I jump up and run into the bathroom to stick my head half way down the toilet. “Baby you ok?” I look up and see him standing next to the doorframe looking concerned but before I can reassure him I’m ok I get another rush of sickness through my body and I empty my stomach. “I didn’t think you even drank last night you can’t be hung over right?” I can hear him speaking to me but I feel so crap I just push away and curl into a ball on the bathroom floor. “Come here.” Is all I hear before his strong arms go under me and lift me off the floor “thanks honey” I whisper into his chest as he lays me back down on the bed. “I know I said get up but you didn’t have to make yourself ill.” He leans in and kisses my cheek then my forehead “can you get me the bucket” I ask him to tired to run into he bathroom if need be. “Sure sweetie.” He rubs my head smoothing my hair down before making his way down the stairs and now I’m really wishing I had kept my mouth shut, I only wanted an extra hour in bed not to throw up my birthday cake. Luka.I wonder what is up with Abby she wasn’t drinking last night so she can’t be hung over and we all ate the same so she can’t have food poisoning. “Where is mom?” I look up to see Katie making hers and Joes breakfast “she isn’t well sweetie” I pick Joes car up and place it on the table next to him. “Should I go give her a kiss it always makes me better?” I take the plate Katie made and hand it to Joe “that’s sweet kiddo but you don’t want to catch anything” that’s all I need. “What is wrong with her dad?” Katie asks handing me a cup of coffee “she was fine then ran into the toilet throwing up” I get the sick bucket from under the sink. “Oh lovely does she want anything.” I hold the bucket up as I make my way back up the stairs “eat up then finish getting ready I’ll drop you guys off at school” I call back from the top hallway. “Thanks hone…” She grabs the bucket from me just in time “oh baby” I rub her back I really wonder what’s wrong with her.
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Post by steffi1986 on Oct 26, 2006 4:44:39 GMT 10
really great updates honey and I also think that you should start a new one and please update this one soon btw how are you sweetie?
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Post by maggie on Oct 26, 2006 5:11:34 GMT 10
somebody hasn't been using protection, have they?
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Post by debsxx2006xx on Oct 26, 2006 5:15:53 GMT 10
hi I'm good steffi no morning sickness today . How are you? I have already started my knew fanfiction LOL "you were my best friend. Deb p.s Maggie would you believe me if i said we were? lol
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Post by maggie on Oct 26, 2006 5:18:25 GMT 10
lol... debz, i wasn't talking about you, i was talking about abby! btw, if its a girlie, you're naming her abby, right? and luka if it's a boy?
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Post by luby2534 on Oct 26, 2006 5:39:47 GMT 10
Hehe !!
I believe you when you say you used protection. We did too !!
Great update !
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