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Post by *Natalie* on Aug 9, 2006 6:41:47 GMT 10
Same post from me came twice so thought i'd change this one...
anyway read someone said this was crap... so WRONG! (Granted thats your personal view) Loving this still!
Hope you do more soon natalie x
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Post by *Natalie* on Aug 9, 2006 6:44:05 GMT 10
Right i've mucked this up soo much lol
Anyway last thing from me... promise this time
Loving this Update again soon
natalie x
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Post by rorygilmore on Aug 9, 2006 18:30:11 GMT 10
Blah, sorry, upon re-reading that update was crap Crap?! are u kidding? It was great!!!! Abby was so strong. I'm just hoping a car rolls over Richard so he won't mess up Abby's life in the future...
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Post by Caffy on Aug 9, 2006 18:58:34 GMT 10
Lol thanks *shrug* maybe it's just something about reading your own writing? I'm working on the next update and your piccy is adorable! Did you draw that?
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Post by lubyfan on Aug 9, 2006 20:20:36 GMT 10
Great update!
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Post by Caffy on Aug 11, 2006 20:45:55 GMT 10
People in the waiting room were staring at Richard and frowning, shaking their heads and muttering. Richard stared after Abby, he noticed Luka and he wasn’t sure what it was about him that just made him want to lunge at him, Luka looked at Richard and just shook his head, with this he slowly creped out after Abby. He found he, hunched up tight on the end of the bench in the ambulance bay. She was shaking all over and as he approached she quickly brushed away her tears with her arms and glared out angrily into the distance. Luka stood still for a moment, unsure what to say or do, the thought this wasn’t the time to force anything.
“My car is over here…” he offered gesturing over, he looked at her with sympathetic eyes, she met his gaze and smiled, for a moment her heart melted at how easy he was making things for her, no one had ever tried to make things easy for her. He offered her a hand and she accepted it, letting him pull her up. He wordlessly led her to the car and opened the door for her. She climbed in quietly, leaning her head back on the rest, she felt like crying, she felt like laughing, she felt the emptiness inside her dropping like a pit, she felt like she was falling and there was nothing she could do to stop it.
Luka parked the car and glanced over at her she had her arms tightly drawn into her and her whole body was tense; he smiled softly, trying to think of something to say.
“I haven’t… I’d never drink… Not again…” Abby started, bless her, she thought I cared about that. He could see this was getting her more upset.
“Hey. Hey...” he said gently tilting her head upwards to look at him. “You do not need to explain yourself to me, you know everyone thinks you lovely and no one thinks you’re going to make a bad mother…” he took her hand without much thought. “No one can take your baby away, don’t worry about it.” Abby stared at him for a long time and smiled.
“Thanks Luka.” She said, relaxing a little. “I’m so sorry to be dumping everything on you.”
He shook his head and smiled. “Don’t be, guess I’m just a sucker for a damsel in distress”
Abby cracked a smile, Luka studied her face carefully, she looked shattered, in every sense of the word, her felt himself drawn to her face, just to look at her a while, he hadn’t really taken in before how pretty she was. Of course he noticed she was pretty, but her being married and pregnant nothing had even crossed his mind, she was his friend, f.r.i.e.n.d, he thought. He began to feel his heartbeat quicken, and felt slightly guilty, why did he feel like that? He could feel butterflies in his stomach and he tried hard to grind them down.
“Would you like me to show you your room?” he asked with a gentle smile. She nodded tiredly; she couldn’t think of what else to do and smiled back. Luka grabbed her bag for her and opened the car door, her legs felt like jelly as she got out of the car. She walked along slowly. Luka watched her and couldn’t restrain a smile, like a child who has seen a fluffy puppy yawning; she looked so cute all floppy and tired.
“Here, you can lean against me.” he said gently, she hadn’t the energy to say no so instead just leaned against him chest and closed her eyes, his heart began beating louder and he propped an arm round her and walked slowly to the door. She felt so exhausted, every bone in her body ached for sleep. Luka glanced down at her.
“It’s quite a walk… I can carry you if you like?” he asked, trying not too sound hopeful. Abby sighed a little. She hated being so pathetic, she would tell him so. Maybe tomorrow that is, she thought as she found herself nodding her head and being carefully lifted off her feet, it felt great. She rested her head against his chest and felt his body heat… So warm she put her arms round his neck to make it easier for him. He looked down at her again, and couldn’t help the butterflies in his stomach took a giant leap and his heart swelled. She looked adorable, asleep in his arms. An elderly couple past them on the corridor and smiled, nudging each other, he knew what they were thinking, but didn’t say anything, in fact, he felt himself smile back, he finally found her room and adjusted her small weight to one arm while he found the key. Her opened the door and found the bed, careful not the wake her, he put her down and found one of the spare blankets to put over her, carefully pulling off her shoes. He remembered she had a shift tomorrow and so found the alarm clock and set it. He stood up after all this and looked down at her again. He stroked her hair softly, then smiling to himself left her keys for her by her bed and started to go, writing her a note for the morning. With that, he made his way out and carefully closed the door behind him.
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Post by strizzy on Aug 11, 2006 20:49:56 GMT 10
Great update!!
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Post by Maryna on Aug 11, 2006 22:28:17 GMT 10
update soon!
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Post by <3 LubyII <3 on Aug 11, 2006 23:13:42 GMT 10
Great update!!!
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Post by lubyfan on Aug 12, 2006 1:02:34 GMT 10
Love it!
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Post by ~Bel Vezer~ on Aug 12, 2006 2:37:20 GMT 10
Wow. I'm ridiculously addicted to this story. Wonderful update. Luka is such a gentleman! Please update soon. This story is great.
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Post by charlieluby on Aug 12, 2006 3:36:25 GMT 10
Update before i go mad! i am loving this! So sweet! xx
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Post by maggie on Aug 12, 2006 4:56:50 GMT 10
oh, that is so sweet. i love luka!
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Post by *Natalie* on Aug 12, 2006 8:24:52 GMT 10
Lovely update, dead sweet
natalie x
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Post by Caffy on Aug 12, 2006 10:43:53 GMT 10
Abby woke to the sounds of a bleeping alarm clock. She pulled herself up and stretched breathing out a sigh. She looked at the empty bed, and at the unfamiliar room surrounding her. She got up, throwing the covers back and smoothing them down again so she wouldn’t feel such a strong urge to climb back under the covers and hide. She stepped into the bathroom, and turned on the shower, then stepping back into her bedroom to find her bag grabbed all her toiletries and walked back into the bathroom, the shower looked steamy and inviting. She stepped in and leant against the wall, letting all the water drip down her body. She walked out of the bathroom until a note on the coffee table caught her eye. She picked it up and read it.
Morning! It started;
I hope you slept alright, the beds are more comfortable than the hospital lounge couch right? I put your bag on the chair by the wardrobe if your wondering and set you alarm for you, sooo, considering I set it a little early for work, how about I take you out for some breakfast? Most important meal of the day and you should eat. Food is good. You can also find a few newspapers with bright, shiny new apartments for you to look at. Please meet me downstairs at 8… I mean, no one gets stood up at 8 in the morning. Good night!
Luka
She sighed and smiled a little, and checked her watch. She wasn’t used to people treating her so nicely. She felt lucky to have such a great friend. She grabbed her bag with keys, purse and everything; it felt so good to have somewhere to stay. She walked down into the hall and sure enough, there was Luka standing in the hallway, grinning at her sheepishly.
“Thought you could use some breakfast…” he said shortly with a slight shrug. Abby nodded and yawned, smiling a little.
“Mmm. Yeah, you know I think this kid is a breakfast person, before now I usually hate breakfast, now I could eat an entire cow every morning.” Luka grinned.
“Well I don’t know about cows but I know a French café across the road which is rather cute.” Abby grinned and raised her eyebrows.
“You often go to ‘cute’ French café’s?” she asked playfully. Luka looked at her innocently.
“What? I happen to really like croissants.” Abby was still grinning as the walked out, Luka still carrying on the conversation.
“What? They are really good; they are all warm and fluffy.” Abby laughed
“I think you should stop with the fluffy and cute thing, now, your not too convincing.” Luka laughed too.
“Right, I’ll show you.” They walked into a small café a couple of blocks down from the hotel and sat near the window. Luka ordered two coffees’ to start, a plate with four croissants and two glasses of orange juice.
“Four croissants?” she asked him questioningly.
Luka smiled. “Trust me, they are really, REALLY good!” She nodded; they continued their banter until their breakfast arrived. After Abby had finished her second croissant Luka grinned.
“Good, yes?” Abby nodded through her mouthful and swallowed it.
“Mmmm yes, but I think you’ve introduced me to a new craving. Dammit. And before it was just apple, with a cracker and a piece of cheese.” She sighed and grinned.
“Thanks Luka, for all of this and my God, I’m sorry for last night, did you carry me into my room?” she asked trying to remember everything that happened before she fell asleep, Luka too couldn’t restrain his smile as he remembered her sleepy stumbling.
“Yeah, I thought you might actually have fallen down the steps if I’d looked in the other direction for two seconds… And no need to thank me, it’s not like you WEIGH anything.” He said smiling.
She nodded and smiled, then her face fell a little getting more serious. “I just. I hate being so pathetic. I hate being the one people talk about or feel sorry for, it makes me feel like a teenager all over again, you know, where you think everyone is always staring?” she said carefully. Luka nodded.
“Mmm. Maybe they are all staring at your ass and wondering how you keep such a trim figure?” he suggested with a grin, Abby hit his arm playfully.
“Kovac, shut up.” She said smiling as she walked towards the door, Luka mocked hurt, and wondered out after her.
“After all that, I even resorted to crime for you!” Abby looked at him with a raised eyebrow.
“What?” she said half smiling at him, as he produced the housing section’s of all the newspapers that had been in the café. Abby laughed.
“You stole their newspapers?” she asked him through her smiles.
Luka mocked sincerity. “This is serious Miss. Lockheart, I mean what if next time I pay you a favour through crime and get caught? And without any thanks at all…”
Abby laughed. “Mmm. I’m sure catching a newspaper thief is what every cop in town just dreams of.” She paused and grinned linking arms with him.
“But thankyou anyway” Luka grinned
“For stealing the newpaper?” Abby laughed and nodded.
“For everything.” She said as the walked to the el together.
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