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Post by <3 LubyII <3 on Aug 12, 2006 11:57:55 GMT 10
Awesome update!
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Post by lubyfan on Aug 12, 2006 23:48:43 GMT 10
Great update!
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Post by strizzy on Aug 13, 2006 1:40:53 GMT 10
Great update!!
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Post by *Natalie* on Aug 13, 2006 7:11:30 GMT 10
Great update!! Glad they're such good friends natalie x
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Post by Maryna on Aug 14, 2006 5:37:37 GMT 10
UPDATE SOON!
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Post by Caffy on Aug 20, 2006 18:11:08 GMT 10
[glow=purple,1,300] Going to update later tonight, sorry, I've been basically working all day/night, you know the feeling?
Anyway, when I come back from work tonight, new update *hoorah* [/glow]
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Post by Caffy on Aug 21, 2006 7:16:47 GMT 10
It is now nearing the end of Abby’s seventh month of pregnancy and she is only half way through her divorce with Richard, the main problem had been getting him to sign the damn papers, he had refused to sign them for months making it very difficult to think about much else, thank god for Luka, he had found her an apartment and helped her with papers for it and had fast become her closest friend.
“Mmm, yeah Luka, poor you, try having to treat a foot fungal infection spewing puss everywhere whilst you were at the very beginning of morning sickness… The green, yellow, torn old skin and blistering pustules pulsing all over…” Luka pulled a face and covered his ears.
“Ok, ok, OK! Way too much information! And please, we are eating!” he exclaimed with a smile, Abby grinned back proudly. Abby had invited him out for dinner as both of them had been off at the same time and they were both bored. Luka had been trying to gross her out by saying her dinner looked an awful lot like the abscess on one of their more frequent patients neck. They continued their playful banter and soon enough they had finished their meal and Abby whisked out her credit card quickly before Luka could protest and smiled sweetly at him. Luka sighed.
“I should be the one paying…” Luka stated, Abby pulled a face and raised her eyebrow.
“Hey I asked you remember, you’re my date.” She said with a grin, Luka knew she was joking but his heart still jumped. He grinned and nodded.
“Mmm yeah. Guess I am, I hope your not going to make me pay for any of this later…” he said giving her a jokey wink, Abby feigned horror, then grinned.
“You wish Luka…” she said, what the hell was she doing? She thought to herself, she was just about 8 months pregnant and was flirting with her best friend. Her extremely sexy best friend. She mentally kicked her brain. Luka drew breath to speak when;
“Sorry madam, your card won’t run through our till…” Abby looked surprised and then paused a moment.
“Maybe try it again?” she asked hopefully, the waiter shook his head and gave her an apologetic look.
“Sorry, we tried it five times already.” Abby sighed, and checked her purse and realised she had no cash, she met gaze with Luka, shrugging her shoulders and smiling sheepishly.
“Here take mine” Luka offered smiling. After the waiter went to try Luka’s card Abby frowned a little and bit her thumb nail.
“Sorry Luka, I have no idea what’s wrong with it...”
Luka smiled and shrugged. “No problem it’s fine, I’m sure you can check it too see what’s wrong with it later.” Abby sighed and nodded her worried frown melting away to give him a brief smile. After they paid they stepped outside, it was absolutely freezing.
“Brrrr!” Luka exclaimed wrapping him arms tightly round himself and rubbing his hands quickly trying to warm himself. Abby laughed, and Luka grinned mischievously and wrapped an arm round her so they were sharing body heat, he enjoyed the closeness he had with her and couldn’t restrain his smile. Abby laughed and looked up at him with a playful grin.
“You big girl you, it’s not that cold!” she said, but she didn’t pull away, in fact she leaned in closer to him enjoying the feel of just leaning her weight against him in their own warm little world. She sighed and forgot about her credit card for the moment.
Richard paced up and down the empty apartment. He was reading the letter he had written Abby back to himself slowly, ever since she’d left he had become quite bitter about the whole experience and wanted to spite her as best he could yet, he had convinced himself he would win her back. It was a strange mixture of emotions, jealousy, anger, failure and loss. All the reasons he wanted Abby back were purely selfish, but that was who he was, he couldn’t quite bring himself to let her go and realise they weren’t right for each other, the idea of her with anyone else sent him spiralling, he had convinced himself it was because he loved her, the letter he’d written held all him pent up spite;
Abby,
I will not let you make me a stranger to my own child, you can’t just take our kid away from me, that’s why, I’m going to send you this as your last chance, I honestly didn’t want to have to do this, but I’ve cancelled our shared account and you now have denied access to our money, so you have no money, soon the have no home, and as soon as this kid comes out I can appeal to court, you know I can, I have the house, the money and I can recall all you past on you, your bipolar gene’s, your alcoholism and I have witness’s that saw you scream and slap me in the hospital. Come back home and you can forget about everything, like I said, I didn’t want it to come to this, but you just always push me to extremes. This is your last chance.
Richard
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[glow=purple,1,300]Was that TOO harsh? I might re-write the letter... Hmm... What does everyone think? [/glow]
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Post by *Natalie* on Aug 21, 2006 7:31:18 GMT 10
No i think that was great because i think she'll need to get closer to Luka natalie x
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Post by <3 LubyII <3 on Aug 21, 2006 7:38:08 GMT 10
Great update!!!
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Post by strizzy on Aug 21, 2006 7:57:54 GMT 10
Great update!! And the letter just shows what an arse Richard is!!
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Post by lubyfan on Aug 21, 2006 23:33:16 GMT 10
Great update!
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Post by Caffy on Aug 23, 2006 9:12:03 GMT 10
She walked into her apartment and flung herself down on the sofa, pressing a hand on her back and wincing a little trying to get comfortable. She picked up the mail off the side and began to flick though, there were a few bank statements telling her she’d cancelled her account, over and over again it’s all it said, she frowned, her heartbeat increasing slightly and she felt her stomach dropping again. She reached an envelope without an address on it, obviously delivered by hand. She opened it a read the contents. By the end she was shaking with rage and frustration. She crumpled up the letter and threw it down as hard as she could stamping on it, before collapsing back on the sofa, her head in her hands and let out deep, despairing sobs.
She wanted to say so many things to him. She played them all out in her mind; they kept getting mixed up and mangled. She repeated memories of Richard over and over in her head. The first time they met, in collage, some creep wouldn’t leave her alone, Richard took a swing at him, he ducked and he had caught her square in the jaw.
“Oh my god!” she remembered him yelling in distress, the genuine look of concern on his face as he had caught her fall, she had smiled and laughed, she loved it that he could make her laugh. She remembered a few years on, when she was held so tightly in his embrace she had felt scared, because she knew she loved him.
“I’ll never hurt you Abby. I swear I won’t ever hurt you.” His words still rang hard in her ears. Her memories sped up, words and images flashed before her like lightning, “I love you. Could you MOVE any slower? FINE be like that. That kid is MINE Abby. You’re an unfit mother!” it wasn’t until her angry screams stopped her spinning head that she realised in her rage she had kicked over her coffee table, bin and broken her side lamp. She was breathing heavily and shaking all over. The doorbell went. She really wasn’t in the mood for anyone, she wanted to scream, she wanted to kick and cry and shout, just like she wanted to all through her life, but she never would, never could, she was everybody’s rock, but there seemed to be no one there when she needed to brake down. She swung back the door and there stood Luka who immediately looked concerned. He attempted to reach an arm out towards her but then rested it back at his sides unsure of what she wanted. She looked at Luka long and hard and he could feel her emotions building inside her and just welling over. She clung to him tight and let out long, heart wrenching sobs letting the waves of emotion take over her body and keep rolling over and over her.
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[glow=purple,1,300]Sorry it's not long but thats because most of it isn't dialogue... I'd much appreciate some opinions on my story in the realistic actually making sense department (I doubt anyone knows what the hell I'm blabbing on about) But yeah. Sorry I haven't update Hindsight for an age, I will get round to it eventually, but my ideas for the rest of hindsight aren't actually very good [/glow]
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Post by <3 LubyII <3 on Aug 23, 2006 11:48:35 GMT 10
Great update!
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Post by Maryna on Aug 23, 2006 17:26:06 GMT 10
update soon!
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Post by strizzy on Aug 23, 2006 21:26:20 GMT 10
Great update!
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