chaos1982
Marquise of Luby
I want so much to open your eyes `cause I need you to look into mine
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Post by chaos1982 on Sept 14, 2006 6:24:34 GMT 10
Great update! What a sweet scene between Abby and Luka!
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Post by jadestar on Sept 14, 2006 17:03:52 GMT 10
hhhmm great update! Susan & Abby & Samantha = great add Luka = great x 2
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Post by strizzy on Sept 15, 2006 1:49:17 GMT 10
Great update! Love it!
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Post by bostongirl on Sept 15, 2006 23:31:30 GMT 10
Sorry for my lack of update but I've somethings to do for school, stupid school!!! I'll update tomorrow, with a bit of luby love so be prepared
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Post by Rach :) on Sept 15, 2006 23:31:35 GMT 10
update
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Post by bostongirl on Sept 16, 2006 1:05:13 GMT 10
Okay I can't go away before updating this fic. So this is the update, i'll hope you like it.
Things between Luka and me are getting there. Tonight were having our first date. Sam is going to baby-sit on Micha and Dani. I’m so freaking out because I really have a crush on Luka. It’s the first time since Richard that I’m in love. “Abby you need to wear your hear down that looks way more better than in that ponytail.” Says Sam when she enters the bathroom. “Right….” And I take it out brush my hair again and look at her. “It will be ok Abs, he likes you. Dani told me that the other day when we were out shopping. She said he always talked about you. How you had your hair at work, kind of clothes you were wearing, how you smiled and what you had for lunch or dinner.” She laughs, she asked me if she could stay and finish high school here. So right now the spare-room is her room. And I’m trying to get her adopt. Maggie thought it would be a good idea and I think it will work out nice. I called Richard and talked with Katie, she will come over on spring break. Finally, my life is worth living. “Abby you need to hurry Luka is already here.” Sam screams from downstairs.
“Abby!!! Daddy said we can stick at your house while you and dad are having a romantic evening.” Typically Micha. “Yes kiddo you can. And Sam will play with you, or watch a movie.” I smile and put a hand on his head. “Yeah!!” And he’s jumping on the couch. “Ready to go?” Luka says while he kisses Dani. “Yeah I’m.” “Behave kids. Don’t breakdown Abby’s house. And be nice to Sam.” “Yes dad.” They both say.
In the restaurant we talk about work, his kids, Katie, Sam and some random stuff. But then all the sudden he looks into my eyes. “Abby, I like you. And I think I love you. You are the one who bring back joy into my life. After Danijela I never thought I would feel like this again.” He says still looking in my eyes. I can feel that I’m blushing. “The first time I met you Luka I knew I would love you at some point. And the last couple of months I know that for sure.” I smile cause I don’t know what else to do. On our way home in the car I text message Susan and she replies with; ‘You deserve it Abby. You had so much to deal with. I’m so happy for you.’ I can see her smiling. And I hope one day love will come to her.
When we arrive at my apartment we kiss in front of the door, we kiss in the hall, we kiss right in front of the living room and we kiss in my kitchen. Dani and Micha are lying in Sam’s bed and Sam is sleeping on the couch. Chips and coke every were but it doesn’t bother me. I want to crawl into his strong hands and feel his body against me. I know 2nd date rule but I can’t help it. He is just way to cute to stick to the rules. “You could stay the night. Your kids are already sleeping and we both are off tomorrow.” I say when I stop kissing him for an instant moment. “I could but what would the kids think. What will we say?” He says right before I kiss him again. I put my hand on his back and rub it. His hand is on my bum and he squeezes it a little. “Think it’s not a good idea Abs, let’s wait for a while and let the kids be involved in this. Don’t think Dani can cope with this all the sudden.” He whispers. “I understand.” And I really do. The girl lost her mother. But I also don’t understand because I can feel he wants more. We kiss again and right at that moment Micha walks in on us. “O dad you’re eating Abby’s tongue!!” He laughs so hard that Sam wakes up from it. “Think its time to go home for us.” Luka says and he walks toward Sam’s bedroom to wake Dani. “Abs that was a cruel interrupt.” Says Sam when she realizes what happened. “Yeah it was.” I feel so warm and bubbly. Luka comes down with Dani in his arms, I wanna switch places with the kid right now! “I’ll call you tomorrow and we will talk about the thing.” He winks and I let him out.
When he’s gone I let myself fell on the couch. Sam does the same thing and puts her head in my lap. “He it will be worth waiting. I talked with Dani and she said that she doesn’t bother if you and Luka will be a couple cause she likes you. I told her to tell him that.” She yawns. “Thanks Sam, you are a great kid. You should be thinking about becoming a psychiatrist. Lets go to bed. Your school starts tomorrow.” But when I look down she’s already sleeping. I close my eyes and try to do the same thing.
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Post by jadestar on Sept 16, 2006 3:06:03 GMT 10
*big smile on my face* - Luby love
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Post by strizzy on Sept 16, 2006 6:57:26 GMT 10
Love it!
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Post by Rach :) on Sept 17, 2006 9:32:58 GMT 10
lmao
hahaha i nearly peed myself lol anyway great update some of u fanfic writers should write book they are that good
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Post by LoveLuka on Sept 18, 2006 2:38:00 GMT 10
great update
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Post by bostongirl on Sept 18, 2006 2:59:03 GMT 10
The next morning I wake up from Sam who is making breakfast in the kitchen. I walk up to here. “Morning sunshine, ready for school?” “Hey, yeah I’m glad I finally can go back. Coffee?” She smiles. “That would be nice. So should I bring you to school or are you gonna take the El?” I ask when I sit at the dinner table with my coffee and the paper. “I’ll take the El. I meet Dani in front of the station. She knows which one I need to take. And after school were gonna shop. But I’ll be home for dinner ok?” “Right. Don’t be late Susan and her new lover are joining us.” “Bye!!” And gone she is. I take a shower and start cleaning the house a little. I find pizza on the couch and coke in the flowers. Kids…. Suddenly the phone rings. “Abby.” I say. “Hey it’s Luka. I hoped you could grab lunch with me.” When I hear his voice, my mind spins of to last night. “Sure, I’ll pick you up in an hour or so?” “Fine. See you then. Bye.” “Bye.”. If I hang up the phone I can feel my hearth beating in my throat and I feel the hunger for his kiss. I take another shower and brush my hair. Again I let it down and not in my famous ponytail. I look at my wardrobe…I have nothing to wear. At least nothing sexy. Then I see this black little dress but I don’t put it on. I go for a comfy jeans and a long sleeved shirt with ‘cutie’ on it and my yellow Asics sneakers. I drive up at his apartment and he’s already waiting outside. When he finally sits in the car I kiss him. It’s a long, hunger kiss and I know this is the one that made it happen.
During lunch he tells me what I already now. That Dani is happy with her dad having a new girlfriend as long she doesn’t have to call me mom. And I’m ok with that. She doesn’t have to. She already told Luka that she loved it that he was finally happy again. We talk and kiss and kiss and talk, I didn’t get the lunch part but ok. “Abby, should we go.” He says after he cleared his trout. “Yes.” It’s the only thing I can say. I feel my heart pumping liters of blood down to my body, not into my brain they don’t function that well. I drive to my apartment, knowing it’s empty.
In the living room we kiss and his hands are on my back under my shirt and after a few seconds my shirt is gone. I do the same thing. I can hear him breath heavily in my ears, I love that. He takes my earlobe in his mouth and I curve my back. His hands are on my back then on my front, tickling my stomach to find my breast and play with them. I moan and I can feel he’s laughing. I hunger for his strength. I start walking over to the couch and he let my lie on it. He’s on top. His mouth is kissing my forehead, nose, lips, earlobe, neck and down to my breast. I’m playing with his hair and I can hear he likes that. One of is hand is resting on my knee and suddenly starts moving op to my thigh, caress it and I can feel I’m getting wet. He reaches the bottom of my jeans, playing with the zipper. His mouth is around my belly button and again I moan. I try to pull him up but he doesn’t answer that one. He keeps playing with my zipper and finally takes my jeans of. He’s breathing trough my panties and that makes me go insane. Then all of the sudden the front door opens and there I see Richard. I cover my body and Luka does the same. I feel so little.
“Thought you wanted your kid back? But instead of waiting for her your already making a new one. I’ll tell her that.” He says. “Richard no. That’s not the truth. It’s not fare. You can’t do that. She’s my baby.” I yell at him. “O sure I can. She didn’t loved you before so what will make her love you right now. You bailed out of us Abigail, we didn’t even knew if you were coming back or were you where. Do you know what you did to Katie?” His eyes are red. “I’m sorry. But I couldn’t take it any longer. I never wanted to hurt Katie.” I start crying. “Hell you did. And after 6 months you already screwing someone else. Living with someone. I don’t know what the hell is wrong with you but your not going to see my daughter ever again. You bitch.” And he tries to get her. “You, leave her alone and go away.” It’s Luka, he stayed on the background but right know he needs to help her. “True love I guess? Just like you said to me. Are you leaving him too when you’ve got a kid? Name: Abigail Wyzcenski Job: Making kids with different husbands. Just remember that you will never try to contact Katie again. Did you hear me?” Richard is mad. “No….you can’t do that. Please Richard don’t take her out of my life.” I cry and beg. “I can and I’m doing it. No please Richard, you have done this yourself. You left me, Katie and the house. Your not my wife anymore.” And he goes away. I start crying and telling Luka he should go. He didn’t asked for this and he sure don’t deserve this. “I stay. I call Susan to ask if she can come over and stay with you. I need to go get Micha from school and then I will be back to help Sam with dinner and homework.” He says when he’s already dialing Susan’s number.
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Post by jadestar on Sept 18, 2006 3:21:40 GMT 10
oh my, emotional rollercoaster... first Lubylove *sigh* but than damn Richard again... he's such an a** Luka is really wonderful as ever...
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Post by Andy on Sept 18, 2006 3:26:28 GMT 10
Ok, I need to ask... Does Abby always leave her door open?! Either way, I really enjoyed the chapter can't wait for another one!
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Post by steffi1986 on Sept 18, 2006 7:18:02 GMT 10
wow this was really emotional and great please update soon
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Post by LoveLuka on Sept 18, 2006 7:26:05 GMT 10
i love it update!!
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