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Mar 16, 2008 2:06:48 GMT 10
Post by mrseyre on Mar 16, 2008 2:06:48 GMT 10
For Andreija!
A teeny-tiny one-shot based on "The Human Shield" and "Two Ships".
If...
If after I knock on his door and count to 10 it hasn’t opened I’ll leave and not talk to him. But it does and I do.
If he doesn’t show me he understands I can tell myself that nothing has changed and I can leave. But he does and I don’t.
If I don’t kiss him back nothing will happen. But I do and it does.
If he doesn’t wake I won’t have to think about this but he does and I do.
If he doesn’t smile I won’t have to let out the smile I feel inside, but he does and I do.
If he looks away and lets me decide, I’ll go.
But he doesn’t.
And I stay.
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cloudy
Duchess of Luby
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Mar 17, 2008 2:34:37 GMT 10
Post by cloudy on Mar 17, 2008 2:34:37 GMT 10
ooooohhhhh .... what a tease !!
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Mar 17, 2008 5:53:28 GMT 10
Post by andrejia on Mar 17, 2008 5:53:28 GMT 10
Ahh....thank you. I called this the quintessence of what's making Luka and Abby so special (or how much you can say with so little words)...You managed to capture with a few sentences the fear, desire, complexity and 'meant to be' factor of their entire story.
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Mar 18, 2008 0:23:31 GMT 10
Post by apoint14 on Mar 18, 2008 0:23:31 GMT 10
that was amazingggg!!! so cute and really "gets" them.
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Mar 18, 2008 4:17:15 GMT 10
Post by Rach :) on Mar 18, 2008 4:17:15 GMT 10
short but FANTASTIC!
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Mar 20, 2008 6:19:10 GMT 10
Post by zelda on Mar 20, 2008 6:19:10 GMT 10
Inimitable style . Andrejia moja, you LUCKY THING, I'm SO jealous of you! ( looking at Shellie with puppy eyes...)
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