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Post by ERFanRach on Oct 22, 2006 20:36:25 GMT 10
Great Update!!
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Post by jadestar on Oct 22, 2006 22:55:47 GMT 10
hahahaha hope Dana and Rory push him off the cliff.... I know that's mean but get rid of Richard....
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Post by strizzy on Oct 23, 2006 0:39:50 GMT 10
Nice start!! Fantastic!!
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Post by *Natalie* on Oct 23, 2006 1:36:12 GMT 10
Great update natalie x
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Post by hollygirl on Oct 23, 2006 3:37:49 GMT 10
Just read the fic, and I am loving it so far! but...I agree with everyone else, GET RID OF RICHARD! Update soooooon!
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Post by Melimelo on Oct 23, 2006 6:59:44 GMT 10
Luka opens the door 'Hi Janice..." "Hey Dr Kovac..here is your pizza.." Luka grabs the box and gives her the money. "How's your studies going..?" Janice smiles as she walks off. "Pretty good ...if I can ever find time to study...see ya" Luka waves and closes the door. "You know the name of the pizza delivery girl..?" Abby laughs at him as he puts the pizza down "You must order a lot of pizza." Luka shrugs .."Mostly just Friday nights..." He starts singing as heads to the kitchen for napkins.
"It's another Friday night and I aint got nobody ..I got some money coz I just got paid...."
Abby bursts out laughing as he breaks into a congo sort of dance. "You actually think they are the words to a song and that is actually a dance move...?" Luka throws a napkin at her. "I know ...I made most of it up...at least you are smiling though" Abby bites into her pizza. "Thanks..I need a good laugh..you're a good friend Luka" Luka smiles as he opens a beer and takes a swig..Abby stares at the bottle and envies him..she knows the relaxing sensation and the taste of beer so well..but she also knows the danger of just having one..she sips on her root beer and starts thinking about Richard and how she hopes Carter can offer him a job and he leaves the ER. "Do you want to talk.." Luka sits down beside her and she suddenly bursts into tears. "Oh god ..I hate him and seeing him all the time reminds me of the mistakes I made with him, the alcoholism, the fact that I caught him cheating on me, the fights, the divorce.....everything Luka...he makes me remember all the bad stuff and to see him strutting around the ER completely happy within himself so obnoxiously happy...I can't stand it..." Luka puts his arms around her and she buries her head in his chest and he finds himself kissing her on top of the head. "Oh Abby..to be only yours... I pray" Abby plays his words over again in her head...did he just say that ..did she hear him right..?" "Luka.." she sits up and stares into his eyes and he averts his gaze from hers and she turns his head back to face hers. 'What did you just say ..Luka..what do you mean..?" Luka's mouth is suddenly dry and he pulls away and takes another swig of beer. "I love you Abby..and I hate seeing you so unhappy..I wish that I could make you feel better..and I am going to talk to Weaver tomorrow and get Richard off contract..." Abby fidgets with her hands....he said he loves her? does he mean as a friend or...hell she didn't know what to think.. Luka puts his hand on her shoulder and then runs his hand up through her hair and then cups her chin in his hand. "I could get a gun..and I could get rid of him for you..." Abby's pupils nearly explode and her heart pounds in her chest. "Did you just offer to kill Richard..?" She searches his eyes for some kind of response and suddenly his face draws lines and she sees a smile forming. "I was kidding"....he let's go of her chin and she smacks him on the arm and he rocks backwards and he falls off the couch on to the floor and he manages to grab her hand on the way down and she lands on top of him. Luka laughs first "Oh you are crushing me.." For a moment their eyes lock and neither of them dare to breathe and Luka imagines kissing her. Abby finally blinks and she too imagines Luka kissing her. "Well this is fun....thanks Luka you have really cheered me up.." Luka pulls her in even closer and plants a big wet kiss on her lips and she can taste the beer. "You're welcome..." Abby blushes as he helps her up. "Thanks for the kiss..I needed a beer.." Luka laughs and tries not to look at her "Was it that bad...?" Abby shrugs "It was like that time I went to seaworld and got kissed by a seal.." Luka is horrified that she has compared his kiss to a seal. "It wasn't a real kiss ..it was a muck around kiss..you know that I can kiss nicer than that Abby" Abby rolls her eyes "I guess you can ..I don't really remember...?" Luka's mouth drops and he can only see one way to prove his theory and show her " Abby giggles nervously as she anticipates that he is going to kiss her ..even it's only to prove a point. "Give it your best shot Luka.." Luka grabs her head in both hands ..gently but with some force he kisses her on the lips and the beautiful soft feeling of her lips meeting his is electric and he closes his eyes as he pasionately delves his tongue into hers and imediately she closes her eyes too as she is so vividly reminded of what it's like to kiss him and be in his arms. Luka slowly pulls back and opens his eyes as Abby does and they meet face to face... "What are we doing Luka...that was one hell of a demonstation kiss Luka..that felt real..." Luka puts his hands on her waist... and pulls her back in closer and whispers in her ear "To be only yours ..I pray.." Abby is silent as she looks into his eyes. He leans in and kisses her again. "You want to be with me again..?" Abby can't believe the feelings she is having and is scared of what is happening..they have been down this road before and it didn't work. "Luka we are good friends..and I don't want to ruin that.." Abby pulls away from his embrace and as their bodies separate Abby regrets what she said and allows him to pull her back and he kisses her again and this time she melts into his arms and does not resist when his eyes suggest they head upstairs.
To be continued.................
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Post by Caffy on Oct 23, 2006 7:13:15 GMT 10
[glow=purple,1,300] Ooo-er I see they will be having some kinkay fun.
Awww I do always love your fanfics, I actually really like the Richard stories in some weird twisted way. Maybe it's just me, haha, loved you're idea of Dana and Rory throwing him off a cliff *chuckles* You lot do make me chuckle
Great fanfic. I lurrve it. And I never comment enough on your's *hangs head in shame* They are all totally awesome and your storylines kick ass SOOOO much [/glow]
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Post by ERFanRach on Oct 23, 2006 7:56:18 GMT 10
Great Update!!
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Post by jadestar on Oct 23, 2006 9:01:26 GMT 10
hehe hope they have some fun in the bedroom *imagines pretty hot Luby scenes* think I need some fresh air lol
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Post by steffi1986 on Oct 24, 2006 3:14:23 GMT 10
hehe hope they have some fun in the bedroom *imagines pretty hot Luby scenes* think I need some fresh air lol same to me *lol* please update really soon
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Post by Melimelo on Oct 24, 2006 6:41:34 GMT 10
Abby wakes up... her eyes blinking adjusting to the light..she rolls over casually and then realises she is in Luka's bed..she clutches the sheet and stares at him as he sleeps...slowly he wakes too and they stare at each other and the conversation is only that of breathing in and out.... "Luka is this is a one night stand...?" Luka laughs as he reaches out for her. "No....you have been here for two nights.." Abby rolls her eyes at him..he was right ..they had made love on Friday night for the first time in years and it felt so right and she was so comfortable that she stayed the next day and wore one of Luka's shirts around ..but mostly she wore nothing.. "Luka..I'm serious ..what are we doing here..?" Luka pulls her over and on top of him. "We are just being together...and seeing what happens.." Abby pouts a little. "Well we know what happened last time we were together..it didn't work.." Luka kisses her on the lips. "A lot of stuff has happened since then ..we are different now and we are in a different point in our lives...but through it all we have remained friends and I think the reason for that has been that we still care for each other more than we realised .." Abby kisses him back. "Do you think we can make it work this time..I mean you have just broken up with Sam a couple of months ago because you couldn't communicate and maybe it's too soon....." Luka rolls her back onto the bed and leans up on his elbow . 'I did love Sam...on some level..but I don't think I was truly in love with her and I thought if we played happy families ..that it would be enough..but she didn't want to have a baby with me and she was smart enough to see that we were heading in different directions ...and she moved out..it took me a while to realise it and I tried to change her mind..but eventually I knew she was right....I wasn't in love with her I was in love with the idea of having a family again.." Abby runs her hand across his chest. "So when you think about me ..what do you think.." The phone interrupts them and Luka jumps out of bed to answer it and Abby watches him as he stands there in all his naked glory. 'Oh hi Kerry...no I don't want to cover Richard ..it's Sunday and .." Luka listens intently and then hangs up....Abby wasn't really listening to him as she was somewhat distracted. 'Abby...Abby are you listening to me..?" Luka's voice trembles and Abby realise he is trying to tell her something. "Abby ...I need to go into work...I have to do a shift.." Abby shakes her head. "Well ..I don't have to go..." Luka sits down next to her... "There has been an accident ...Richard has fallen off a cliff.." Abby is in shock.."What..." Luka puts his arm around her. "Richard was rock climbing and .. he fell.. and the police suspect he may have been pushed..." Abby sits there and can't believe what Luka is telling her. "I mean I hate the jerk...but I don't wish that upon him" Luka takes a deep breath. "He's dead Abby....massive head injuries.." Abby puts her hand to her mouth and starts to shake uncontrollably.."Oh my god Luka...no" Luka puts his arms around her and tries to console her. "Do you want me to call Kerry back and tell her to find someone else to cover the shift..?" Abby looks up at him through tearstained eyes. "No ..you should go...and I want to come with you..I think I should call his parents or something..or maybe his girlfriend." Luka puts his hand up. "Uh ..according to Kerry..the girlfriend is the main suspect." Abby scratches her head."Oh ..okay.." Luka bites his lip. "Um ..I kind of told Kerry you were here too... she had been trying to call you and I uh..said you were with me.." Abby arches her eyebrow at him. "So ...that's what we are telling people ...we are together?" Luka smiles at her..."Yes".
To be continued......
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Post by maggie on Oct 24, 2006 7:14:36 GMT 10
oh my god, i killed richard! wow, i totally rock...good for me. and i even managed to do it while i was in the library, i'm just so talented. sweet...
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Post by Melimelo on Oct 24, 2006 7:27:58 GMT 10
oh my god, i killed richard! wow, i totally rock...good for me. and i even managed to do it while i was in the library, i'm just so talented. sweet... You get one phonecall..use it wisely!
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Post by maggie on Oct 24, 2006 7:34:13 GMT 10
oh my god, i killed richard! wow, i totally rock...good for me. and i even managed to do it while i was in the library, i'm just so talented. sweet... You get one phonecall..use it wisely! ok, i'm calling rory.
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Post by Caffy on Oct 24, 2006 7:40:30 GMT 10
[glow=purple,1,300]*shakes head and giggles* Oh you three make me larf... Although I have to feel a little sorry for Richard.
Being left at the mercy of Dana and Rory Doesn't sound like a fun thing to behold. That didn't make much sense oh well. Loved the update, much sweetness, I liked how you added Luka's feelings about Sam and then much happiness and stoof. Anyway basically yay.[/glow]
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