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Post by erfan228 on Feb 6, 2007 6:46:38 GMT 10
Sweet update!!! Hpoefully Eddie will get custody! Can't wait for more!!
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Post by *Natalie* on Feb 6, 2007 7:04:28 GMT 10
Great update natalie x
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Post by hollygirl on Feb 6, 2007 13:16:15 GMT 10
Chapter 9: Who Was He?
It was Sunday night, Abby had spent the whole weekend with Eddie... it had been the longest her and Luka had been separated, and it wasn't even a whole weekend. Luka and Abby spent this morning at the hospital where his mom worked, and Eddie picked them up and took them out for lunch. But then Luka had gone with his dad to some soccer game.
Abby sat in the living room watching TV, waiting for Eddie to get home. He had went out to buy them groceries and then he was going to come home, tuck her into bed, sing her special song, and even read her a story. He would then kiss her and she would 'blow out' the light... And that would be it. Eddie had to go back to Rockford in the morning.
The phone rang and Abby waited a minute thinking Maggie would answer it, but when she didn't Abby jumped up and ran to the kitchen. She grabbed the phone and answered it. "Hello?"
The voice on the other end was about to say something when it stopped. She wasn't expecting a little girl to pick up. "Is your mom home?"
"Yeah."
"Could you please put her on the phone, right away?"
"Sure." Abby covered the phone with her hand, and walked to the bottom of the steps. "MAGGIE!"
"MOM!" Maggie yelled back down at her. "I am MOM Abby."
"Uh huh.. anyways.. there is someone on the phone for you"
"Who is it?"
"I don't know."
"What do they want?"
"They want to talk to you."
Maggie took the phone from her. "Hello?"
"Maggie Wyczenski?"
"Yes?"
"I'm Dr. Ferguson, calling from County.. your husband was brought in, I think you should come down here."
"Is he alright?"
"I can't discuss that over the phone."
"Is he dead?" She asked like it didn't even matter. Abby heard that and looked up. Who was dead? who was Maggie talking about? who was he?
"Mam, I can't discuss that over the phone. You need to come down here.. now."
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Post by daniella on Feb 6, 2007 13:21:12 GMT 10
Oh, my... Poor Abby... Dani
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Post by hanna on Feb 6, 2007 15:01:19 GMT 10
wow this was the first fan-fic that i read and i love it! great job and keep it up! i cant wait to see what happens to eddie!
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Post by jacobsmommy on Feb 6, 2007 16:33:22 GMT 10
Poor Abby. Hope everything turns out ok Great story.
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Post by Bah on Feb 7, 2007 2:46:00 GMT 10
poor Abby.
great update update soon please!
=]
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Post by ERFanRach on Feb 7, 2007 5:21:09 GMT 10
Great Update!!!!
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Post by erfan228 on Feb 7, 2007 6:41:40 GMT 10
I hope Eddie's alright!!! Great update!!!
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Post by *Natalie* on Feb 7, 2007 7:51:33 GMT 10
Oh no... hope Eddies ok
update soon natalie x
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Post by luby2534 on Feb 7, 2007 8:29:43 GMT 10
Hope Eddie is going to be all right !! Poor Abby !
Please update soon
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Post by hollygirl on Feb 7, 2007 13:54:15 GMT 10
Chapter 10: Gone
Maggie walked into the ER, a firm grip on Abby's wrist, the other hand holding Eric's carrier. Abby's little legs were going as fast as they could but still couldn't keep up with Maggie's long strides. She tried pulling away but that only made Maggie tighten her grip. Abby looked around and saw Mariana talking to Nathanial... not far from them she saw Luka wandering around. What were they doing here so late?
Maggie was at the front desk and Abby finally pulled away. She ran over to Mariana who looked very upset. "Mrs. Kovac! where is my papa?" Mariana looked at Nathanial.... and then back down at her. "Where is he!?"
"Abby honey.."
"Where is he..." Abby asked again, tears filling her eyes.
"Your papa was in an accident... a very bad car accident.."
"But he's ok? you fixed him? you guys fixed him?"
"He was hurt very badly sweetie... but we are trying everything.. we are working very hard."
"Why aren't you helping him?"
"I was.. but I wanted to come here and wait for you guys." She said, giving Abby a little smile. She looked over and saw Maggie walking toward her and Nathanial. "Nate, take Luka into the lounge.. here Maggie, let Nate take Eric." She nodded and handed the sleeping baby to him.
"Abby, you go with him too." Maggie said.
"No." She said shaking her head. "No.. I'm coming! I want my papa!"
"Abby, go with Mr. Kovac."
"I'm not going!" She took off running through the halls, tears running down her cheeks. "Papa!" She yelled, looking into the curtains, and windows. "Papa!"
"Go with the doctor Maggie, I'll get Abby." Mariana said. She started running toward Abby and finally caught up to her, pulling her into her arms. "papa." Abby sobbed. "I want my papa."
"I know.. I know.."
"Please let me come.. please.."
"Ok.. ok.. come on." Mariana took her hand, and walked with her toward the Trauma room. She peered into the window and closed her eyes when she saw the doctor stepping back. Abby didn't wait for her, she pushed the door open and walked in. Mariana was soon standing behind her with her hands on her shoulders.. holding her close to her as the screen went flat line.
"Time of death 10:02"
"What?" Abby asked.
"I'm sorry honey." Mariana said.
"No." Abby said. She moved toward the gurney, and took her fathers hand. "Papa... please.. please wake up! Please! Papa! You can't leave me!" Maggie moved toward her daughter.
"Abby.."
"Get away from me! Why are you in here!? he doesn't want you! he doesn't want you! I don't want you! I hate you! I hate you! This is all your fault!" Abby cried. "This is all your fault! you made him leave! get out!"
"Abby..."
"Get out! Just leave me alone!"
Maggie looked down and then walked out of the room, standing by the door, looking into the window. The doctors and nurses in the room stepped back and looked down. Abby moved closer to Eddie and stepped up on this stool next to his gurney. He had a tube in his mouth.. his chest was cracked open.. and he was all bloody. "Papa... you have to wake up! we have to go home! you promised me! you promised you would take me away from Maggie! You can't leave me! pleeeaaaase!! Please papa!! I love you! I love you papa! you can't leave! you have to wake up!"
Everyone in the room closed their eyes as tears filled them. Some of them new Abby.. some didn't, but everyone felt her pain.. everyone felt sorrow for this little girl.. Their hearts went out to her. Especially Mariana, who moved closer to her, and placed a hand on her shoulder. Abby turned around and looked at her, still holding Eddie's hand. "Wake him up.... Mrs. Kovac, wake him up! please! you gotta help him! you.. got to.. I need him.. I love him.. please.. please wake my papa up... fix him!"
"Sweetie.. we tried everything.. he was just too hurt... his injuries were too bad.. we couldn't fix him.. I'm so sorry."
"Noooo..." Mariana got down on her knees and wrapped both her arms around Abby. "Shhh... Abby... shhh.." She said, rubbing her back. She felt her shirt soaking with Abby's tears, and couldn't help it anymore... tears began pouring from her eyes and she looked back to the door.. but Maggie was gone.. A nurse walked over and whispered into her ear.
"Mariana, we have to clean this room.. and the body.."
"Right now?"
"We just got word that a multiple MVA is coming in.. lots of traumas.."
Mariana nodded. "Abby.. we're gonna have to go now..."
"Nooo.."
"I'm sorry.." Abby blinked, and turned back to Eddie. She kissed his cheek which was still warm, and still held onto his hand. "Papa... I love you so much..." Abby cried. Mariana lifted her, and started walking toward the door. Abby wouldn't let go of him. She tightened her grip on his hand and just cried harder. A nurse gently peeled her hand from his. "Nooooo." Abby sobbed into Mariana's neck. "Papaaa... papaaaaa!"
Mariana walked into the lounge holding Abby, who was hysterical... She looked around and Maggie was no where to be seen. She didn't see her on the way there either. Nate was sitting in a chair, with Luka on his lap.. Eric's carrier by his feet.
"Where is she?" Mariana asked.
"Maggie?"
"Yeah.."
"She's gone..."
"What do you mean?"
"I mean she's gone.. she ran out of here."
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Post by jacobsmommy on Feb 7, 2007 16:52:05 GMT 10
Great update Now the Eddie passed away. Let Abby and Eric go live with Kovac's. They treat Abby and Eric more their own, than Maggie does. Maggie should not have run out of the hospital, with a daughter who really needs her right now.
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Post by ERFanRach on Feb 7, 2007 21:29:59 GMT 10
Great Update!!!
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Post by *Natalie* on Feb 8, 2007 7:10:23 GMT 10
Great update Cant believe Eddie died and poor abby natalie x
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