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Post by Bah on Feb 11, 2007 3:32:10 GMT 10
great update.
update soon!
;*
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Post by jacobsmommy on Feb 11, 2007 4:21:19 GMT 10
:)Great update, and so sweet I like the song you put in. KARMA TO YOU
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Post by luby2534 on Feb 11, 2007 7:43:54 GMT 10
I had tears in my eyes ! So Touching
Cant wait for you next update !!
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Post by erfan228 on Feb 11, 2007 10:12:08 GMT 10
Aww! That was soo sweet and sad!!! Luka and Abby are soo cute together! Can't wait for more!!
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Post by hollygirl on Feb 11, 2007 16:22:01 GMT 10
Thanks for all the feedback! Update tomorrow... well I actually today.. just later.. its 1:21 AM.
PART 2 starts then.
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Post by hollygirl on Feb 12, 2007 8:29:17 GMT 10
PART 2. It is about 4 years later.. Abby is 10, Luka is 11. They are in 5th grade. It is September 10th. And yes. Maggie came back. And I said this was set in PRESENT TIME.. which it kind of is. We are going to pretend Abby was born in the year I was born. 1991. and now she is 10.. so it is the year 2001.
Chapter 12: Monday Morning
Another summer was over. Another school year beginning. But this year... was different. Abby and Luka were looking forward to it. This year, they were on top. The 5th graders. The graduating class of 2001. At the end of the school year, there would be a small ceremony, as Point Road Elementary School said goodbye to at least 100 students. They would venture off to Middle School, and be on the bottom again.
Luka walked down his front steps, with his hands in his hoodie pocket, and made his way across the street to Abby's house. He couldn't wait to see her. It had been more than 2 weeks since he had seen her last. He rang the door bell, and waited for it to open. He was expecting to see her smiling face... but instead was greeted by a man.. he looked kind of dirty.. and smelled like alcohol. "Is Abby ready?"
"Who are you?"
"Luka... I live across the street."
"Oh.. yeah, Mags told me about you.. hold on a sec." Luka nodded. "Abigail!" He screamed. She came running down the stairs, and pushed past the man, throwing her arms around Luka. He took his hands out of his pocket, and squeezed her tightly. Her smile, couldn't have been any bigger. "I missed you!" She said.
"I missed you too." Luka said into her ear. She stepped back, and then picked her back pack up, and threw it over one shoulder. Her and Luka began walking away, and the man grabbed onto her arm, pulling her back.
"Did you apologize to your mother?" He asked. Abby didn't say anything. She just looked down at her feet. "Did you?"
"No." She mumbled...
"What was that?"
"I said, no!" She snapped back, looking up at him. He slapped her across the face, and Luka stood there gaping at the man. Who was he? and what right did he have to hit her?
"Don't you ever raise your voice at me again young lady! Do you understand me?!"
"Uh huh."
"Yes."
"Yes." Abby said.
"Yes what?"
"Yes sir."
"Thats right. I expect you to treat me and your mother with respect. Now get your ass upstairs, and apologize to her."
"I have to go to school."
"What did I just say? Do you like being hit Abby? huh? do you?"
"No sir."
"Then do as I say, and go apologize to your mother." He pulled her inside and she rushed up the stairs, leaving Luka there stunned, at the way this man was treating her. "You can wait right here boy, Abby will be down in just a minute." Luka nodded, and sat down on a rocking chair. A few minutes later, Abby opened the door, and he stood up. The man grabbed her arm again, and pulled her toward him. She grimaced as he pressed a kiss to the top of her head. "Have a good day at school now, I'll see you later." Abby didn't say anything. She just pulled away, and quickly went down the stairs. Luka caught up with her, and tilted his head trying to see her face, as she walked with her head down.
"You ok?" He asked, pushing hair behind her ear, so he could see her cheek.
"Yeah... I'm fine."
"He left a pretty good mark on your cheek."
"It'll go away."
"Who is that guy anyway? and why haven't I ever seen him before?"
"Jack. Maggie's boyfriend.. and you haven't seen him, because you left me, and went to Croatia!" She said, a smile forming. Luka smiled too, and threw his hands up.
"I didn't want to! My parents made me go!"
"Yeah. Likely story."
"You know they did... but hey, I got you a present."
"You did?"
"Yeah." He stopped walking, and took off his back pack. He unzipped the front pocket and pulled out a small box. He handed it to Abby, and smiled as she opened it. Inside was a charm bracelet. She picked it up, and admired it before throwing her arms around Luka again. "Thank you. I love it."
"I knew you would... here, I'll put it on for you." She held out her wrist, and Luka closed the clasp. "Tell me more about this Jack.. I mean.. I've only been gone for 2 weeks.."
"2 weeks and 5 days." Abby corrected.
"When did they start dating?"
"Umm.. a couple months ago actually.. She was going out every night.. I didn't know who, until last month... and the day after you left, he started spending the night.. almost every night.. I think he got thrown out of his apartment... but when hes not at our house, hes at one of his buddies places."
"Why didn't you tell me about him?"
"I don't like talking about him.. Hes a jerk, and I hate him.. but.. he doesn't even matter.. I don't want to talk about it anymore." Abby said, pulling off his back pack.
"What are you doing."
"Put this in front." She said.
"I'll look retarded."
"Just do it."
"Why?" He said looking next to him. But Abby wasn't there. He was about to turn around, when she suddenly, jumped onto his back. "Oh, I get it.. you want to get out of walking to school."
"Captain obvious."
"You're lucky, I'm such a nice guy."
"Tell me about Croatia... I wanna hear about your vacation."
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Post by *Natalie* on Feb 12, 2007 8:46:05 GMT 10
Aww that was sweet at the end between Abby and Luka natalie x
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Post by daniella on Feb 12, 2007 9:17:16 GMT 10
I don't like Jack... he's no nice... but with Luka's there everything is better...
Good job, Holly...
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Post by jacobsmommy on Feb 12, 2007 9:20:19 GMT 10
Great update
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Post by erfan228 on Feb 12, 2007 9:26:50 GMT 10
Aww They are soo cute together!! Jack is such a jerk!! I hope he leaves soon!!!
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Post by Bah on Feb 12, 2007 9:27:19 GMT 10
they are so sweet;
great update
update soon please!
;*
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Post by LuBByFaNatiC [ThAiSsa] on Feb 12, 2007 11:30:23 GMT 10
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Post by strausser on Feb 12, 2007 22:25:47 GMT 10
ohhhhhhhhhhh that's sooooo incredibly sweet!!!
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Post by ERFanRach on Feb 13, 2007 4:00:58 GMT 10
Great Update!!!
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Post by luby2534 on Feb 13, 2007 6:34:21 GMT 10
Great update
Jack is a real jerk !!
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