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Post by baboune51 on Mar 11, 2009 19:40:31 GMT 10
Abby would protect her brother ! nice udapte !
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Post by shelby on Mar 11, 2009 23:39:06 GMT 10
Great update! It's funny!
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Post by littlegirl on Mar 12, 2009 4:34:58 GMT 10
This is funny!!! Great update!!!
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Post by suzanne on Mar 12, 2009 9:21:53 GMT 10
Thanks girlies!! Chapter 14 “Sydney, I don’t think Eric and I will be hugging.” Mark says. “You never know. So Abby, gosh that’s such a fun name. I just think we are going to be such great friends, don’t you?” “Uh…” Abby takes a big sip of her drink. “Abby would you like to dance?” Luka asks. “I’d love to!” She hops up out of the chair and pulls Luka with her to the dance floor. “Thank you.” Abby says. “Your welcome, but she was driving me just as crazy as she was you.” He steps in close to her and wraps his arm around her waist gently pulling her close. Abby hooked her arms around the back of his neck and they started to move. She thought this should feel awkward being in another mans arms, but surprisingly it didn’t. She felt comfortable. “I’m having a good time.” Abby says. “You are?” “Well until Mark and Sydney got here.” “Maybe we should ditch them.” “That sounds like an excellent idea, except I would feel bad abandoning Susan and Eric.” “What about Mark?” “What about him? He brought her so as far as I’m concerned he deserves what he gets.” She looks over at the table. “You’re right let’s ditch them.” “But you said….” “Screw it, they’ll forgive me eventually.” “So how should we do this? I’ve never ditched anyone before.” “Me either.” “Okay how about after the dance is over we go back to the table and you can say you’re not feeling well and we can get out of here.” “That’s a good plan, but I don’t feel like going home just yet.” “I know a place we can go.” “Great.”
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Post by baboune51 on Mar 12, 2009 21:05:03 GMT 10
they are going alone together ! really nice udapte !
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Post by suzanne on Mar 13, 2009 9:04:31 GMT 10
Chapter 15 As they approached the table, Sydney made eye contact with them. “Oh we missed you guys, so Abby can we talk?” Sydney says. “Actually I think were going to call it a night.” Luka says. “What? Why?” Mark says. “I’m not feeling well, I think I’d just like to go home and go to sleep.” “You look fine!” Mark says. “I’m tired and I’ve got an early morning so…Sydney it was um…yeah…Susan I’ll call you tomorrow.” “You’re really leaving?” Eric asks. “You’ll be fine” Abby whispers to Eric. “She likes you.” “Are you ready?” Luka asks Abby. “Yeah, goodnight everyone.” As they crossed the parking lot to her car she fished her keys out of her coat pocket and threw them to him. He caught them and opened her door for her, he then ran around to the driver’s side and got in. “So where are we going?” She asks. “My friend runs a bar on the other side of town.” They pulled into the parking lot of Ike’s Bar. It was a brick building with a neon sign hanging in the window. From the outside it looked packed. Luka quickly got out and opened her door. “Thanks, you didn’t have to do that.” “Are you kidding, I want everyone to see what a hot date I have.”
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Post by shelby on Mar 13, 2009 9:08:57 GMT 10
Nice update! Their finally alone together! Well, away from all their friends! Luka is such a gentleman!
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Post by littlegirl on Mar 14, 2009 3:06:41 GMT 10
Luka is very cute!!! loved your update
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Post by suzanne on Mar 14, 2009 9:59:49 GMT 10
Thanks guys!!Chapter 16 She blushed and looked down as they walked towards the door. He reached over and took her hand causing her to look over at him as they walked into the busy crowd. He led her to the bar where they sat on the last two empty stools. “Luka, man where the hell have you been hiding?” “Hey Joe, sorry I haven’t been around. I see business is good.” “Yeah, so who’s the cute lady?” “Oh sorry, Joe this is Abby, she’s my new employer.” “If I wasn’t gay I’d ask how I could get a job like that.” “Abby this is Joe.” “Hi Joe.” “What kind of work do you have Luka doing?” “He helps me take care of animals and some labour around my house.” “What kind of animals?” “Joe enough, get the girl a drink and leave her alone.” “It’s okay Luka. I take care of sick animals, horses, dogs…” “Cats?” Joe asks with a hopeful look in his eyes. “Yeah.” “Would you look at my cat?” “Since when do you have a cat?” Luka asks. “Jason brought one home a couple of days ago, but it limps around. I made an appointment for the vet but they can’t see her until the middle of next week.” “I’d love to take a look for you, where is she?” “Right now she’s upstairs, we have an apartment up there.” “Do you mind if I take a look Luka?” “No, as long as you don’t mind doing it.” “I’ll be right back, order us some drinks it shouldn’t take me very long.”
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Post by baboune51 on Mar 14, 2009 20:10:34 GMT 10
they 're so cute ! nice udapte !
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Post by suzanne on Mar 15, 2009 23:38:49 GMT 10
Chapter 17 Abby follows Joe to a door towards the back that goes upstairs. Ten minutes later Luka is sipping his beer, when he hears a familiar voice from behind. “Luka?” He closes his eyes and sighs, he had hoped he would not run into her. He thought he would be safe here because she always hated this place. “Rebecca, what are you doing here?” He asks as he turns around to look at her. “I came for a drink.” “You hate it here.” “Fine I thought I would run into you.” “Rebecca.” “Luka, I’m sorry. I wanted to see you but you never answer my calls.” “That’s because I don’t want to see you.” “Is it really necessary to be rude?” “What do you want?” “You, I want you.” “You don’t need me.” “I do, you’re the only one knows exactly how to please me.” “You’re drunk.” “Does that matter? Take me home and I’ll show you just how much I’ve missed you.” Abby and Joe watch from in front of the door to the upstairs apartment. “God don’t do it Luka.” Joe says so only Abby can hear. “Is that his ex-girlfriend?” “Yeah, that’s her. She’s a real bitch.” “Do you think he will take her back?” “I hope not. She really screwed him over this last time.”
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Post by shelby on Mar 16, 2009 0:17:08 GMT 10
No! I hope Luka stays with Abby! Very sweet how Abby went and looked at Joe's cat. Nice update!
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Post by baboune51 on Mar 16, 2009 5:07:18 GMT 10
No Luka do not make that ! nice udapte
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Post by suzanne on Mar 17, 2009 4:06:32 GMT 10
Thanks guys!! Chapter 18 Abby casually walked toward Luka and his ex-girlfriend. When she reached him she crushed her lips against his and placed one hand on the back of his neck. The other ran down the front of his chest and only stopped when she reached the front of his pants, she cupped her hand and rubbed it against him. She parted his lips with her tongue and explored his willing mouth. He forgot all about the woman he had just been arguing with. He wasn’t sure if it was the sweet tasting kiss or the fact that Abby was currently rubbing his now growing erection through his pants, either way he leaned forward as she pulled away from the kiss. He wasn’t ready for it to end. “I’m ready to go home whenever you are.” Abby says. “Who are you?” Rebecca demands. “Oh, I’m sorry I didn’t realize you were talking to anyone.” Abby says to Luka. “Hi I’m Abby.” “Luka you’re not going home with her are you?” Rebecca says as she crosses her arms. “I hope he does, after all we live together.” “You what?” Rebecca yells “Luka and I live together.” “Is she your girlfriend?” Rebecca asks loudly. “Yes.” This time it is Luka who answers. “I can’t believe you!” Rebecca yells as she turns away from them and marches toward the front door. “Abby, thank you. I don’t think you know exactly how good that felt.” “Sure I do, remember we both have cheating ex’s.” That wasn’t exactly what he meant but he would drop it for now. “So did you get me a drink?” She asks. He hands her the drink and she gulps some down before pulling him out to the dance floor, leaving Joe to stand there smiling as he watched them move together in the crowd of people.
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Post by Martine on Mar 17, 2009 5:59:28 GMT 10
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