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Post by baboune51 on Mar 17, 2009 8:53:16 GMT 10
a kiss of Abby and Luka has to forget Rebecca ! nice udapte ! , udapte soon
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Post by daniella on Mar 18, 2009 0:48:52 GMT 10
Loved how Abby went to Luka... hot scene !
Love the update, Suzanne...
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Post by suzanne on Mar 18, 2009 2:47:49 GMT 10
Thanks guys!! Appriciate any comments, good or bad!!Chapter 19 Luka turned the ignition off and looked into the passenger seat. Abby was drunk. He stepped out of the car and hurried over to her side as she struggles to stand up between giggles. “Let me help you.” Luka offers as he picks her up off the ground, slinging her over his shoulder. “Luka.” “Yeah?” “I had fun tonight. I like Joe, he’s a nice man.” Luka laughs. “Yeah, he liked you too.” “He did? I don’t think your ex liked me very much.” He balanced her as he unlocked the door to the house. “No, I’d say she wasn’t a big fan of yours.” “Luka?” “Yeah?” “You have a really nice ass.” He smiles as her hand moves along the tight curve of his ass. “Thanks.” He pushes the door to her bedroom open and approaches her bed. Slowly leaning forward he gently lowers her onto the soft mattress and sits down on the edge of the bed, his arms on either side of her. “Can I tell you something?” She asks. “What?” “You’re a great kisser too.” Without warning she reaches up and pulls him toward her, covering his mouth with hers. Her tongue darted out to touch his, circling before leaving the warmth of his mouth. His eyes open after a minute to find her sleeping soundly. He pulls her shoes off and covers her with the thick comforter at the foot of her bed. He takes one last look at her before snapping the light off and closing the door, leaving her to sleep off the effects of the night.
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Post by littlegirl on Mar 18, 2009 4:47:42 GMT 10
When do you have the time to write all this stuff? Your updates all are great. And there were finally kisses.
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Post by baboune51 on Mar 18, 2009 6:55:42 GMT 10
I hope that they 're finally going to love each orther ! nice udapte !
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Post by suzanne on Mar 19, 2009 8:46:55 GMT 10
Thanks guys!! Chapter 20 Abby padded down the steps, she needed coffee. The clang coming from the kitchen startled her to a halt, not because she was worried about who could be making all the racket. She knew exactly who it was, she had asked him to fix the plumbing in the kitchen. Crap, she would just have to creep back up the steps and hide out in her bedroom until he was done. She couldn’t face him, it was hard enough to get that kiss out of her head without having to see him. Taking two steps back she turned around swiftly and tripped over what could only be her own two feet. She landed on the floor with a thud. “Damn it!” She cursed. He appeared in the hallway in a matter of minutes, smiling at her as he held his hand out to help her to her feet. “Are you okay?” He asks. “I uh…. Yeah, I just tripped but I’m okay.” She took his hand and allowed him to help her up. “Do you want some coffee?” “Thanks but I thought I would call Susan and see if she wanted to go out for coffee this morning.” “Oh, okay. Then I’ll see you later.” More in a while, got interrupted!!
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Post by baboune51 on Mar 19, 2009 20:46:44 GMT 10
Luka is so cute ! udapte soon , nice udapte !
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Post by suzanne on Mar 20, 2009 22:59:48 GMT 10
Chapter 21 She was surprised Susan answered her call after abruptly leaving her last night. She sat at the table in the small coffee shop not far from her home, waiting for Susan to show up. “Abby.” “Susan, I’m really sorry about last night. I hope you aren’t too mad at me.” “I think I’ll forgive you, besides you weren’t feeling well. I understand.” Abby’s eyes immediately fell to the floor. “About that.” Abby says. “You weren’t sick?” “Like I said I’m sorry.” “You bitch, you left me all alone with that pain in the ass!” Susan says loudly. “I know. Wasn’t she the most annoying person you have ever met?” “I was talking about your brother!” “Eric?” Abby asks. “Do you have another pain in the ass brother?” “What happened? I thought you guys would hit it off.” “I don’t want to talk about it.” “If it makes you feel any better, I feel like crap this morning.” “Yeah, it kinda does but I thought you weren’t sick last night.” “I wasn’t, I got drunk and now I’m not only hung-over but I’m also slightly embarrassed.” Abby admits. “Why? What did you do?” “I kissed Luka.” “What’s embarrassing about that, he’s cute.” “And I touched him.” As she says it her cheeks redden. “What? Well you were drunk; people do things when they’re drunk.” “I was sober when I did it.” Abby rubs her temples. “Oh, is there anything else?” “He had to carry me to my room, I told him he had a great ass and I actually grabbed it. Then I kissed him in my bed and passed out. He was so sweet.” “What’s so bad about that?”
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Post by shelby on Mar 21, 2009 2:43:40 GMT 10
Aw, poor Abby feeling embarrassed. Nice updates!! Can't wait to read the next one!
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Post by baboune51 on Mar 21, 2009 21:08:43 GMT 10
Abby is embarassed , Susan is right what bad about that ! really nice udapte !
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Post by littlegirl on Mar 25, 2009 5:32:13 GMT 10
What did Eric do? Poor Abby, she shouldn't feel embarrassed. I wouldn't ;D
Great update.
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Post by jehkovac on Mar 26, 2009 10:10:17 GMT 10
Chapter 21 “What’s so bad about that?” Yeah Abby, what's so bad about it??? hauhauhauahhua Update soon Suzanne!! Loving it
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Post by orangecrush on Mar 28, 2009 9:17:26 GMT 10
update!
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Post by shelby on Mar 28, 2009 11:50:10 GMT 10
Suzanne! Where are you?? It's been a week! Update when you get back!
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Post by suzanne on Apr 1, 2009 6:30:26 GMT 10
Sorry for the delay guys!! Am back in hospital and wasn't allowed my laptop or my phone back until today cuz I was in icu on a breathing machine. My stupid heart giving me more trouble. had to get a valve replaced. I'm backnow and writing at the minute, will be up shortly!!!
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