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Post by luby2534 on Oct 11, 2006 3:49:45 GMT 10
OMG get back here and update right now !! 
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Post by erfan228 on Oct 11, 2006 4:24:11 GMT 10
Great update! Please update again soon!
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LiLM
Countess of Luby
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Post by LiLM on Oct 11, 2006 5:27:01 GMT 10
it's great different from the others!!
update soon!!
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Post by *Natalie* on Oct 11, 2006 6:41:36 GMT 10
Great update! Hope she goes for dinner  natalie x |
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Post by lubyfan on Oct 11, 2006 8:04:51 GMT 10
Great update!
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Post by Cornflake Girl on Oct 12, 2006 19:18:48 GMT 10
Thanks for your comments!
I'm not entirely happy with this but it will do I guess...  CHAPTER 5Abby stood outside Lukas apartment, she hadn’t knocked yet, she was nervous, more nervous than she should be, she took a breath, sucked in her cheeks and bit on her lower lip stifling a laugh at how silly she was behaving, as she built her courage up and knocked on the door. Luka heard her knock over the music and opened the door saying a quick hello and surprised Abby by briefly kissing her on her cheek. “I hope you still like your food hot, I made green curry” He said as he took her coat and hung it on the hook by the door, she nodded and stepped into the room, unsure of what else to say. After a few moments of awkward silence they settled into their meal, both slipping into familiar easy banter with each other, Abby told Luka about her day on her surgical rotation and about the whipple she had assisted with Corday, and Luka told her all about his shift in the ER trying to make the staff cost effective mentioning the fact that he had butted heads more than a few times with Romano, Abby cracked that she thought she was his favourite. Once they had finished with their meals they moved over to the living room, settling onto the couch, Luka slid an arm behind Abby’s back fiddling with some lose strands of hair, she cocked her head to the side and smiled at him. “About last night” He began, “I want you to know that I don’t think it was a mistake, I want to be with you Abby, you have been the one person I could rely on over the years, I care about you more than anyone. I,..I don’t want to do anything that is going to destroy that but I also know I don’t want to miss out on a chance to have a relationship with you, I want to make this work, if that is what you want” Abby let out the breath she had been holding in, he was really saying he wanted her; he wanted to be with her, to love her. She smiled at him, he had been so honest with her, something that neither of them was very good at, communication had been a major part in them not working the first time, she owed him the same blatant honesty, but words like that had never come easy to Abby so instead she answered him the only way she knew how, she reached out and pulled his head in for a slow passionate kiss, showing him she felt the same way, as he drew apart from her breathless he looked intently in her eyes and whispered “Are you sure?” She quickly thought about what he had said and answered him again by kissing him, hard this time, forcing her tongue into his mouth, exploring old but exciting territory, as she did so she let her hands do some exploring of their own, she felt him moan against her advances. It didn’t take them long to find their way to the bedroom, leaving a trail of clothes behind them… Abby woke the next morning feeling disorientated, she slowly opened her eyes and felt a hand nestled in hers, then it hit her, the night before she had had dinner with Luka, and had slept with him, several times in-fact, she smiled at the memory of it, as she rolled onto her back to look at the sleeping body beside her. He had made her feel safe and special the night before, he was tender and gentle making sure she was doing something she wanted to do ‘always the gentleman’ she thought to herself as she quietly climbed out of bed making her way to the shower. Luka drowsily rubbed his eyes open and felt the cold air quickly envelope him, for a moment he panicked thinking Abby had fled until he heard the water running in the bathroom. He got up and made them breakfast, eggs, remembering Abby liked tomato sauce smothered on hers, she strode out of the bathroom dressed in her clothes and smiled at him, he placed the plate in front of her and kissed her softly, “morning, sleep well?” he asked with a wink. “I did as a matter of fact” she smirked back to him. “What time you on?” “In about 1 hour actually, I better get going, see you there” She made her way to the door and slowly stopped, turning towards Luka she pursed her lips together, “do you, um, maybe think we could keep this to ourselves, um…I just don’t want people getting the wrong idea about me, us, and what with Carter and med school, and well everything, um I just think it would be easier if we kept this, ahh, quiet, at least for now” she finally managed to mumble out all the while ringing her hands together in-front of her. Lukas heart sank a little but he understood what she was asking and nodded his head in agreement adding a brief smile letting her know he understood her need for privacy and liking the fact that she had said ‘at least for now’.
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Post by luby2534 on Oct 12, 2006 19:26:06 GMT 10
What was wrong with it ?? I thought it was great !!
Please update soon ! 
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Post by larue on Oct 12, 2006 20:24:47 GMT 10
Just read this entire thing. What a nice job you are doing!
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Post by ERFanRach on Oct 13, 2006 0:30:44 GMT 10
Great Update!!!!
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Post by Andy on Oct 13, 2006 2:16:26 GMT 10
Yeah I liked it too!! Great Update!  I can't wait to read what happens next so when ever you can... 
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Post by erfan228 on Oct 13, 2006 5:09:56 GMT 10
Great update! Can't wait for more!
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Post by *Natalie* on Oct 13, 2006 6:37:32 GMT 10
Amazing update Really loving this Natalie x |
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Post by jadestar on Oct 14, 2006 3:51:38 GMT 10
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Post by lubyfan on Oct 15, 2006 0:01:23 GMT 10
Great update!
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Post by strizzy on Oct 15, 2006 6:21:30 GMT 10
I really enjoy reading this! |
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I can't wait to read what happens next so when ever you can... 
