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Post by lkaljk (Ebba) on Aug 14, 2008 23:40:46 GMT 10
[glow=red,2,300]Where are you , I can't wait eny longer!![/glow] I love this story ;D ;D ;D ;D ;D ;D
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Post by manu on Aug 17, 2008 3:12:14 GMT 10
I know ... I just came back from vacations. But I don't have an update for you. SORRY!
But there is one coming soon, I promise!!
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Post by lkaljk (Ebba) on Aug 17, 2008 3:17:44 GMT 10
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Post by shelby on Aug 29, 2008 7:28:40 GMT 10
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Andie
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Post by Andie on Aug 29, 2008 12:08:01 GMT 10
Update please!!!
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Post by suzanne on Sept 11, 2008 1:46:49 GMT 10
Were are you? ? I NEED to know what happens!! UPDATE please!!
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Post by manu on Sept 11, 2008 3:36:22 GMT 10
I feel so bad about all of this. I know I promised an update. The truth is I started writing the new chapter,about 300 words now. But I personely think it's the biggest rubbish I have ever written ... I'm so sorry ... I really really try to write, but the right words just don't seem to come to my mind.
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Post by suzanne on Sept 11, 2008 11:11:29 GMT 10
I'm sure its not bad!! Your writing is really good!! An I love this story so please update soon!!
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justcala
Countess of Luby
Penny for your thoughts...
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Post by justcala on Sept 11, 2008 15:39:22 GMT 10
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Post by manu on Oct 19, 2008 20:12:36 GMT 10
OMG, I have finally a update for you! But I still feel very sorry that it took soooooo long. I have no idea if this is good, please tell me what you think!!
Chapter 18: Love gives, love takes
“Oh, Abby, you scared me to hell. I’m so glad you’re alright.”, Susan said when she entered the room, going directley towards Abby’s bed, finally standing in front of it. Abby was still in a state of shock because of the kiss. She grinned slightly.
“Yeah.”, she just said and Susan took place on a chair next to Abby’s bed.
“Why the hell are you grinning? This isn’t funny.”.
“I know … I know.”, Abby said and smiled. “I … it’s just …”, she didn’t knew what to say or even how to explain to Susan that she just kissed Luka for God’s sake!
“Okay, what happened? I just saw Luka coming out of your room, he seemed a bit out of his mind too.”, Susan explained and smiled. She pictured some weird scenes in her mind, what she didn’t knew was that one of them came true.
“Well, he kissed me.”, Abby whispered and Susan’s expression was just priceless.
“He what?”, she said. “Oh my God, and what did you do?”, she asked really curious. And now she began to grin too.
“I kissed him back, I think.”, Abby explained.
“You think?”, Susan said out loud. “What’s that supposed to mean?”
“I don’t know, I … I kissed him back.”, Abby whispered, a little blush on her cheeks.
“And what happened then? That’s so amazing.”.
“He just left, picking up Izzie.”, Abby explained.
“And now, what are you doing?”, Susan asked, she was really excited.
“I’m doing nothing. I mean … it was just a kiss.”.
“Just a kiss.”, Susan said, she knew that there was more than `just a kiss`.
“Yeah, just a kiss. A rush of emotions, nothing serious.”, Abby tried to explain.
“Abby, you two are meant to be! This was not just a rush of emotions, please trust me.”, Susan explained to her friend, but Abby just shook her head.
Luka was sitting in his living room, drinking a beer. Still very confused of what had happened today. He felt stupid for just leaving her room after the kiss. He should have said something. But what? There are no words to explain all of this. At least, that’s what he was thinking. He put his beer to the table, standing up and walking to the window. He loved to look over Chicago at night, everything seemed so perfect. He remembered the night after Catherine’s death, he was standing near the window, like he was doing now. The only difference was that Izzie was a little baby, she was screaming a lot in that night. As if she felt what happened to her mommy.
“Abby is going to be okay, right?”, suddenly a small voice said. It was Izzie, she was walking over to his daddy, who picked her up.
“Yes, she going to be alright, don’t worry.”, Luka whispered and kissed her forehead. The two of them were looking out the window. Izzie’s head was laying softly on his strong shoulder. “You like her very much, don’t you?”, he asked.
“Yes.”, his daughter said. “And you?”, she asked. Luka was still staring outside, he felt Izzie’s small hand caressing over his neck.
“Me too.”, he answered and Izzie was looking up.
“I love you daddy.”, she said and Luka smiled. Then she gave him a kiss, a tear was rolling down his cheek.
“I love you too, princess.”, he said. “Very, very much.”.
The next day Luka was finding himself standing in front of Abby’s hospial room. He couldn’t explain to himself why he was there, how he got there. And he couldn’t imagine what to say to her, when he was opening the door. She was sitting in her bed, looking up when someone entered the room.
“Oh, hey.”, she said. In some kind it was a very awkward situation.
“How you feeling?”, he asked, still standing near the door.
“Good.”, she was just able to say. Silence filled the room, Abby was looking down. Luka couldn’t imagine any sentence, he was feeling very bad. “Look, Luka … maybe we shouldn’t see each other for a while.”, she said out very quietly. Luka was staring at her. And Abby couldn’t believe what she just said.
“I understand.”, he said, keep staring at her.
“No Luka … I … I mean …”, Abby tried to explain.
“No, it’s okay … really.”, he said and left the room. Abby closed her eyes, trying to hide back some tears.
“Shit.”, she whispered. What had she done?
At the end of his shift, Luka was talking to Kerry Weaver. He needed some free days, go on vacation with Izzie. Just leaving all of this. Clear out his mind. To his surprise Kerry gave him off. Six days. Six days without seeing this hospital, the city. Just to have some time with his daughter. When Luka picked up Izzie from day care, she asked if they could visit Abby.
“No, we’re going on vacations. Isn’t that great?”, he asked his daughter. She wasn’t looking very happy.
“But we can’t leave her in the hospital! She needs us to visit her.”, Izzie whispered.
“No, Abby is fine.”, he tried to convince his daughter.
“Were are we going?”, she asked as they were walking to their car.
“I don’t know. Were do you want to go?”.
“Hawaii.”, Izzie said and Luka smiled.
“Let’s go to Hawaii!”, he said as they drove home.
He knew that emotions were taking over him, when he left her room. Like a short circuit reaction. He was out of his mind. Too much heartache was inside him. He had to run away. And so they are going to Hawaii for a few days. He just ordered everything. Now he was laying in bed, crying in his pillow. He wanted to stop, but wasn’t able to. It felt like he was crying a river, a river that led to nowhere.
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Post by lubyfan4ever on Oct 19, 2008 20:25:55 GMT 10
it's good and so emotional. keep going ! And dont't wait too long fro the next up date, you have to reunite them soon
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justcala
Countess of Luby
Penny for your thoughts...
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Post by justcala on Oct 20, 2008 1:29:13 GMT 10
Once again you make me cry (it's not like I'm complaining ) Keep going, this fic is amazing!
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Post by manu on Oct 20, 2008 2:55:40 GMT 10
Thank you so much I love it too, when I can cry while reading a FF
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Post by suzanne on Oct 20, 2008 5:43:21 GMT 10
Can't believe Abby said that, so sad!! Loved the update!! Hope Luka comes back soon!! Please dont make us wait to long to see what happens!!
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Post by Izzy on Oct 20, 2008 6:09:04 GMT 10
Yehhh... you are back!! Luka likes running away... Abby needs to catch him!!
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