lylee
Luby Lover
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Post by lylee on Oct 20, 2008 6:14:55 GMT 10
It's great! I love the fact that we learn about the kiss once it's done, it's pretty unusual but good. Karma to make you update soon, because we can't wait.
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Post by suzanne on Nov 28, 2008 1:39:04 GMT 10
Please, Please, Please update this fic!! You can't leave it like that!! Luka and Abby need to get together, and fast!!
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Post by Martine on Nov 28, 2008 22:05:38 GMT 10
I happened to find your last update which made me really curious so I read your fanfic from the biginning. And guess what, I just couln't stop. I love it and I look forward to the next updates
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Post by shelby on Dec 2, 2008 2:03:00 GMT 10
Please update soon! This is getting so good!
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Post by manu on Dec 18, 2008 2:36:13 GMT 10
Yes, I know: I'm so bad ... I don't have an update, I'm so sorry. But I'm just so busy right now. I hope I can write something in my holidays. I really really try!!
There's something on my mind: did anyone hear something from jujuba? I can't reach her and I'm really worried!! Please, if you know something, tell me!
Kisses, Manu
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Post by manu on Mar 18, 2009 5:02:57 GMT 10
Are you still interested?!? Because I wrote a little bit today ... I know my last update was in October ... I'm really bad! But I hope you like it nevertheless.
Chapter 19: Sunny days, rainy nights
Luka was enjoying his time on Hawaii, although he couldn’t stop thinking about Abby. It was like he was seeing her in every woman he crossed – a similar smile, similar hair, voice, eyes. He was about to go crazy. Fortunately there was Isabella, who was was taking his full attention. She loved to build huge sandcastle with her daddy, jumping into the water and enjoying the waves or just to cuddle up on his chest, when he was laying in the sand.
Abby stood next to the window in her hospital room. It was raining for hours outside and so she was standing like that watching the rain fall down to earth, she didn’t even knew for how long. Everything seemed so unreal to her. In what possible universe did she dared to tell something like that to him. She couldn’t believe herself. She had ruined everything. Abby was going to be discharged today, Susan was about to pick her up in a few minutes.
“I can’t believe this weather, it’s raining for days.”, Susan said when she entered the room to find Abby staring outside.
“Well, at least it fits to my mood.”, she told her, turning around. Susan walked over to her, embracing her. It felt good to Abby to have such an awesome friend on her side.
“It’s going to be okay, you’ll see. He’s coming back and you two will have a talk.”.
“I’m not so sure about that.”, Abby explained and took her bag. “Let’s go.”
“Trust me, you didn’t ruined everything, Abby.”, Susan tried to comfort her while driving over to Abbys place. She just shook her head.
“Let’s just not talk about that anymore, okay? I …”, Abby shugged. “I … I don’t know.”.
“Okay, whenever you want to talk, just call me. I’ll be there for you.”, Susan said and moved into the parking lot.
“Thank you, Susan.”, Abby whispered and smiled a bit. Then giving her friend a hug. “You know what’s the worst … I miss him … him and Izzie.”, she looked down to her hands. “Thanks for the ride.”, she told her and then she left the car.
Another hot night on Hawaii was about to start, when Luka was having dinner with his daughter. They had lots of fun at the table until Izzie started to look sad.
“What’s wrong honey?”, he asked concerned. “You don’t like the food?”.
“No.”, she whispered.
“What then? Are you ill? You probably ate too much ice cream today.”, he said and smiled at her. Izzie gave him an adorable look.
“You can never eat too much ice cream, daddy.”, she explained and Luka nodded, smiling. “What’s Abby doing now?”, she asked, looking up in her daddy’s eyes. He sighed.
“Honey, I don’t know.”, he answered.
“Then call her.”, Izzie pleaded.
“I can’t do this, Izzie. It’s … it’s complicated.”.
“Then explain it to me, daddy.”, she said and looked at him with puppy eyes. He couldn’t answer, so he just shook his head.
“How about taking a walk at the beach and buying you some more ice cream?”, he asked and Izzie sighed.
“Okay.”, she just said.
Abby had a restless night, turning from side to side in her bed, throwing pillows away just to get them back seconds later. It was still raining like hell in Chicago. Rain drops beating on the windows. She finally got up after laying awake for hours, walking to the kitchen and opening the fridge. Seconds later she closed it again, decided to make some tea. Her cell phone laid on the kitchen counter, Abby stared at it while waiting for the water to be ready. Should she try to call him? In the midde of the night? Or was she just thinking stupid … With her tea cup in one hand and the cell phone in the other she sat down to her couch, taking a blanket and covering herself. Then she just called his number, without even knowing what to tell to him.
His cell phone rang just when he was taking Izzie to bed. They had a very long walk at the beach and Isabella ate much more of her favorite ice cream. He walked over to the table, where his phone was laying and looked at the display. Abby. It still rang … and he wasn’t able to pick up to call. Then the sound ended.
“How’s calling?”, Izzie asked from the bedroom.
“Oh, nobody, princess. And you should definetely sleep now.”, he explained, looking once more into the bedroom.
“Night, daddy.”, Izzie said and Luka placed a tender kiss on her forehead.
“Good night, honey.”, he whispered and left the room. He was going back to the table, still his cell phone on it. He picked it up and went on the balcony, sitting down on a chair and looking over the peaceful water. After what seemed like hours he opened the phone and called Abby.
“Yeah.”, Abby woke up quickly by her ringtone, her eyes were to blurry to even look on the display.
“I’m sorry I’m calling this late.”, he whispered.
“Luka.”, now she was wide awake. “No, no it’s okay.”, she said, sitting up in her bed.
“What’s the weather like in Chicago?”, he asked. What a stupid question, he thought to himself and rolled his eyes.
“Ehm, it’s raining … for days.”, she answered. Then there was silence. Arkward silence. “I’m glad you called back, Luka. I …”, she started. “Look, I didn’t meant what I said … but I can definetely understand you.”.
“It’s okay, maybe I overreacted a little bit but …”, he explained. “But this vacation feels so good to Izzie and me … I planned on doing this for years, you know. Just spending some time with my girl.”.
“Yeah, I bet she has a lot of fun jumping into the waves.”, Abby whispered.
“She has.”, he whispered back. “We’re coming back on Friday.”, he said.
“Okay.”, Abby didn’t knew what else to say.
“Okay, I’ll see you then.”, he said. “Bye.”.
“Bye.”, she said and Luka hung up.
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Post by suzanne on Mar 18, 2009 5:40:43 GMT 10
WOOOOOHOOOO your back!! And with such a good update!! They need to get their acts together and admit to each other how they feel!! Update again soon!!
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jehkovac
Marquise of Luby
Jessica Kovac Andrade de Oliveira
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Post by jehkovac on Mar 18, 2009 7:33:44 GMT 10
Welcome back!! ^^ I'm very happy you decided to continue this ff!!! I really am!!!! Great updat!! I love Luka's and Izzie relationship!!!
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aminem
Lady of Luby
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Post by aminem on Mar 18, 2009 14:15:11 GMT 10
please follow fast and I am glad that you are back
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Post by littlegirl on Mar 19, 2009 5:17:16 GMT 10
Great that you're back. Your ff is really good and I love to read it so keep going.
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Post by shelby on Mar 21, 2009 2:49:33 GMT 10
Glad your back!!! Such a sweet update! Can't wait to read the next chapter! Update again soon!!
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jehkovac
Marquise of Luby
Jessica Kovac Andrade de Oliveira
Posts: 281
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Post by jehkovac on Apr 11, 2009 7:35:02 GMT 10
where are you Manu???
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Post by suzanne on Apr 17, 2009 18:43:14 GMT 10
Come on Manu, I need to know what happens!!
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marie
Countess of Luby
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Post by marie on Apr 30, 2009 20:08:32 GMT 10
That's a great update !
go on !!! :-)
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Post by suzanne on May 19, 2009 8:46:14 GMT 10
Yeah were are you?? You totally have to update this fic!! NEED to know what happens!!
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