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Post by *Natalie* on Sept 27, 2007 5:18:50 GMT 10
Great update natalie x
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Post by lubbylover1 on Sept 27, 2007 10:00:47 GMT 10
So lovely
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Post by lubylover on Sept 28, 2007 9:26:08 GMT 10
Good story, can't wait for the Update
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Post by britneyluby on Sept 29, 2007 2:20:47 GMT 10
Loved it...
She said goodbye, not goodnight... does that mean she's leaving?? just wondering.. UPDATE
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Post by Rach :) on Sept 29, 2007 8:26:01 GMT 10
loved the update, very beautiful and cute... more soon
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Post by jacobsmommy on Sept 29, 2007 16:21:11 GMT 10
Great update update really soon
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Post by manu on Sept 30, 2007 1:06:53 GMT 10
She said goodbye, not goodnight... does that mean she's leaving?? just wondering.. Who knows? You'll know in the next updates! Thanks for your lovely comments!!!
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Post by ERFanRach on Oct 1, 2007 3:57:00 GMT 10
Great Update!!!!
Update Soon!!!!
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Post by manu on Oct 7, 2007 18:55:16 GMT 10
Thanks to everyone,here's the new chapter!!!!
Chapter 7: It’s starting to hurt again
Abby was up early in the morning, she put on some clothes and left Luka’s apartment. She wanted to take a walk, enjoying to feel the air on her skin. When she walked down the steps it was already bright outside. The sun was shining, but it was cold – of course, it was the beginning of February. The cold air felt good on her cheeks, she was breathing in deeply. She walked firstly to Navy Pier, looking over the sea. It was storming, it was even colder than before. But she didn’t cared. She just walked, she always loved to walk by the sea. Everything seemed peacefully here. Her feet took her to her apartment, the key was in her coat. She opened the door and stepped in. Opening the blinds. She packed some more clothes before leaving the apartment again. Then she walked downstairs, knocking on her landlord’s door. He was opening quickly, greeting her.
“I want to cancel my living contract.”, she said.
In the meantime, Luka was up too. Making breakfast and wondering where she was. She didn’t left a message, so he was a little worried. He was setting up the table, controlling his pancakes on the cooker at the same time. Just in this second Abby was opening the door, stepping inside.
“God, it’s damn cold out there.”, she said, leaving her coat on the hanger and putting the bag with her clothes to the ground. Then she was walking over to the kitchen.
“I bet.”, Luka said, smiling at her. “I made breakfast, pancakes.”, he explained and took them from the cooker.
“Perfectely, I’m starving.”, Abby said and sat down. “Next time I make breakfast, I promise.”, she said and tried some pancake. Luka sat down too, looking at her.
“You okay? I mean … after tonight. Did you slept well?”, he asked and Abby looked over to him. She nodded.
“Yeah. I’m okay.”, she said and gave him a smile. “Thanks for talking, it really helped a lot.”, she explained and took another bite of her pancake. “I don’t know what to do without you.”, she explained. “You’re amazing.”.
“You’re welcome.”, he whispered. And he didn’t knew what to do without her. He loved to be close to her. “Did you took a walk?”, he asked and she nodded.
“Yeah, I just needed some fresh air. I was walking down Navy Pier, looking over the sea.”, she explained. “It felt good.”.
“Yeah, I know.”, he said as the phone was ringing. He got up, walking over to it and picking up. Abby turned to him as Luka began to talk in Croatian. He sat down to the couch, scratching his forehead. His voice sounded concerned, she could tell. Abby got up and put the dishes to the sink. Then she slowly walked over to him, sitting down next to him. Luka hung up and looked down.
“Something wrong?”, she asked, caressing over his back softly. Luka looked up, directely into her eyes. How much he wanted to embrace her now, to have her even closer. How much he wanted to hear her heart beat … how much he loved her.
“That was my brother. My father is in hospital, he had a heart attack.”, he explained, whispering and never stop looking in her eyes.
“I’m sorry. How is he?”, she asked, continuing to caress over his back. He let out a sigh.
“Not good, he’s in a coma. My brother wants me to come to Croatia.”, Luka said.
“You should go, he needs you.”, Abby said and he nodded. Abby noticed some tears in his eyes and she got even closer to him, embracing him. Luka wrapped his arms around her back, holding her close to himself. Seconds later Abby got on his lap, caressing his cheeks with her hands.
“He’s gonna be okay.”, she whispered and looked deeply into his green eyes. Their faces were locked to each other, just staring into each others eyes felt so good to them. It felt familiar, it was something they both needed right now. Their faces got a little closer, Luka was feeling her breathing on his skin. His hands moved down, finally they were wrapped around her waist. He was holding her even closer, more protective than before.
“He’s gonna be okay.”, she whispered again. Their eyes never lost contact, she was still caressing his cheeks and he was still holding her close. When their faces were just inches away, they layed down to the couch. Neither of them knew who pushed the other one to lay down. They just did. Luka had still tears in his eyes.
“Abby.”, he whispered and stared at her. His left hand moved to her cheek, caressing like she did. He then took her hand and kissed it. Feeling her hand in his own, reminded him again how much he loved her. How much he needed her. Their noses were almost touching each other, when he moved his head a few inches closer to her. He finally felt her lips on his. Her soft lips, her desireable lips. They were kissing, slowly and carefully. And Abby kissed him back, softly. When they parted a bit, Luka saw tears in her eyes too. She was crying hardly, tears were rolling down her face.
“I can’t.”, she whispered and looked at him, more and more tears rolling down her cheeks. She began to tremble. He whiped them away and kissed her cheek. She just snuggled up to his chest again and he was holding her close. He cried too. With her.
He didn’t knew how long they were laying on the couch, Abby cried herself to sleep. He still caressed over her back, feeling her heart beat. After some more minutes he carefully got up, trying not to wake her. He put her in his arms and carried her to her room, where he layed her softly down. Putting a blanket on her and caressing over her hair once more. Then he slowly left the room, in the door frame he looked back to her. She was sleeping soundly, she was looking like an angel. His angel.
When Luka arrived in the living room again, he took the phone, calling for a ticket to Croatia.
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Post by jacobsmommy on Oct 7, 2007 23:24:15 GMT 10
No Luka can't leave Abby. Great update Update soon
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Post by *Natalie* on Oct 8, 2007 0:31:07 GMT 10
Great update Hope Abby goes to Croatia with him natalie xx
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Post by lubbylover1 on Oct 8, 2007 2:05:52 GMT 10
Great update
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jehkovac
Marquise of Luby
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Post by jehkovac on Oct 8, 2007 5:09:27 GMT 10
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Post by Jana on Oct 8, 2007 7:55:12 GMT 10
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Post by charlie on Oct 8, 2007 20:13:48 GMT 10
Update Soon!!!
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