Post by megan on May 25, 2006 7:34:21 GMT 10
My first fanfic...I dont really know how good it is but i gave it my best shot...I dont know if I will continue it. Oh the title is a line in the song that Luka sings in the car. And to everyone else that writes fanfics and keeps up with them I am very impressed cause this took me about 2 days to write. So my hats off to you! Hope you enjoy, but it is okay if you dont!
By the way I dont own anything and I have a bit of the real epi in their..so yeah
Abby sat alone at the bar watching Neela and Michael take their first dance as husband and wife. Her mind flashed to Richard and her first dance after they were married, her faced pursed almost as if she'd just taken a large swig of rotten milk which pretty much was their relationship after that point. She shook the memory from her head and continued watching, she watched as Michael whispered something in Neelas ear causing her to lean back a little and look at his face and giggle then lean closer into him as the danced.
Abby sat wishing she had something like that, a real relationship where she would be free to be silly and express her feelings and lets face it, she wasnt all that great at being an open book. She sat lost in her thoughts of love thinking about the one person who did make her feel like that when a voice startled her back into reality..
"Care to dance Dr. Lockhart?"
"Morris? What?"
"Dancing, you know rocking back and forth to the sounds of Frank Santra," slurred Morris.
"I know what dancing is you dumb ass, but why would I want to dance with you?"
"Well its me or this bar stool."
"Morris I am not dancing with you, your drunk, very very drunk. and what the hell?" Abby leaned a little closer to Morris taking in a quick whiff, "You smell like vomit! Did you actually throw up and not think to go home and change?" Abby turned. Her eyes almost started watering from the smell.
"Pshh! Fine I didn't want to dance with you anyway I just felt bad."
"Morris, I will ask you this once. Take about three steps back and turn the opposite direction and sit anywhere at least 10 feet away from me, and we will have no more problems."
"And what if I don't?"
Abby snatched a pen from the barteneder behing her taking orders, "See this pen?"
Morris nodded looking almost intersted.
"I will shove it so far up your ass, you will have to cough it up tomorrow."
Morris eyes never left the pen as she handed it to the waitor calming saying to him.
"Thanks."
Abby slowly turned around facing Morris with a very triumphant/intimidating look on her face.
Morris slowly backed away murmming something around the lines of
"Phsycotic Bitch."
Abby grabbed the pen from the waitor once more and hurled it in Morris's direction.
Luka barely ducked in time as the pen wizzed past him. He looked in the direction the pen came from and spotted Abby. She looked embarassed as he picked up the pen and handed it back to her with a puzzeled look on his face. Abby slowly turned around and handed the pen back to the baffled bartender who had just watched the whole scene. Abby slowly mouthed the word
"Sorry"
She turned her attention back to Luka.
"Well you sure know how to make a man feel welcome at a party, you know if you didnt want me to come you should have just said so."
"No," Abby blurted out to quickly for her liking,"I mean I did invite you but it didnt matter either way if you showed up or not."
"Well I almost didnt."
Abby almost made the mistake of whipping her head around and shouting why, when she caught herself and slyly said,
"Well then I guess you almost missed out on all the fun, did something happen with a patient?"
"No, I had to stay a little late to talk to Kerry."
"About what?" Abby said from behind her drink.
"Oh I just got chief." Luka said like it was nothing big.
Abby almost choked on her drink as she stammered
"Congratulations!"
"Thanks." Was all Luka said
"Oh you are such a man about this, acting like its no big deal." Abby said teasingly
Luka turned his head slightly towards her and winked. Abby almost melted right there.
"Do we have to call you Chief now?"
"Very Funny."
Abby enjoyed being on the teasing side.
"You know, if you've been interviewed do they say We are here at County talking to Chief Kovac…"
"They don't do it that way."
"I'm just saying I think it's cute if it's a guy"
"And if the Chief is a woman"
"I don't think women should be put in position to leadership. Do you?" I say in my best policitcal voice
"Peanuts...?" He pushes the bowl towards Abby
Abby disregaurds the peanuts and turns to look at Neela "Ah, young love they just have to show it off to everybody"
"Here is to discretion…" Luka holds his glass up for a toast.
"Propriety…" Abby adds.
"Maturity..." Luka adds.
"Well…" Abby looks at him with squinted eyes, just a little, showing her disbelief
"No, not to that" He quickly retracts his statement.
Abby laughs and glances over at Morris who is now sitting next to Kerry, he seemed to be spilling his guts, and to Abbys surprise Kerry wasnt beating the life out of him. She has to be drunk as hell, that was the only excuse Abby could think of.
"Well I am pretty much exhausted," Abby says about twenty minutes after thier little toast. She has now talked to Neela and Michael, and without feeling a need anymore she begins putting on her coat and gather her things.
"Yeah I better take off to." Luka says starting to gather his coat. "Need a lift?"
"Um, sure why not," Abby said not even realizing that she said it. "Well its not like I would pass up a car ride over the EL, who knows what crazy people ride it this time a night."
"Yeah I know what your saying."
Soon after saying good-bye to all their friends and getting in the car Luka pulled out front of Abbys apartment. Abby sat watching Luka sing to the wierd show girls song.
"And I remember..Doit doit do do do.." Luka slowly faded his voice.
"Ok, well thanks for the ride." Abby laughs.
"That bad, eh?"
"No… I would just… keep your day job…"
"What you never sing in the car? You know, when you are alone?"
"Sometimes I do, yeah… but you are not alone in the car."
"Yeah, I know"
"I'm just kidding"
They sat for what seemed like an hour just, well sitting and sometimes glancing at one another. Luka slightly parted his lips as if something might come out but as fast as he opened it he closed it. Obvisouly having second thoughts. Abby finally decided to make the first "move".
"Would you like to"
Abby was cut off when Luka seemed to lunge across the car grabbing her and locking his lips on hers, kissing each other passionetely, then Luke pulled Abby to his side of the car never once letting their lips part. This she thought was the begining of a very eventful, hot, steamy, and unforgetable night.
By the way I dont own anything and I have a bit of the real epi in their..so yeah
Abby sat alone at the bar watching Neela and Michael take their first dance as husband and wife. Her mind flashed to Richard and her first dance after they were married, her faced pursed almost as if she'd just taken a large swig of rotten milk which pretty much was their relationship after that point. She shook the memory from her head and continued watching, she watched as Michael whispered something in Neelas ear causing her to lean back a little and look at his face and giggle then lean closer into him as the danced.
Abby sat wishing she had something like that, a real relationship where she would be free to be silly and express her feelings and lets face it, she wasnt all that great at being an open book. She sat lost in her thoughts of love thinking about the one person who did make her feel like that when a voice startled her back into reality..
"Care to dance Dr. Lockhart?"
"Morris? What?"
"Dancing, you know rocking back and forth to the sounds of Frank Santra," slurred Morris.
"I know what dancing is you dumb ass, but why would I want to dance with you?"
"Well its me or this bar stool."
"Morris I am not dancing with you, your drunk, very very drunk. and what the hell?" Abby leaned a little closer to Morris taking in a quick whiff, "You smell like vomit! Did you actually throw up and not think to go home and change?" Abby turned. Her eyes almost started watering from the smell.
"Pshh! Fine I didn't want to dance with you anyway I just felt bad."
"Morris, I will ask you this once. Take about three steps back and turn the opposite direction and sit anywhere at least 10 feet away from me, and we will have no more problems."
"And what if I don't?"
Abby snatched a pen from the barteneder behing her taking orders, "See this pen?"
Morris nodded looking almost intersted.
"I will shove it so far up your ass, you will have to cough it up tomorrow."
Morris eyes never left the pen as she handed it to the waitor calming saying to him.
"Thanks."
Abby slowly turned around facing Morris with a very triumphant/intimidating look on her face.
Morris slowly backed away murmming something around the lines of
"Phsycotic Bitch."
Abby grabbed the pen from the waitor once more and hurled it in Morris's direction.
Luka barely ducked in time as the pen wizzed past him. He looked in the direction the pen came from and spotted Abby. She looked embarassed as he picked up the pen and handed it back to her with a puzzeled look on his face. Abby slowly turned around and handed the pen back to the baffled bartender who had just watched the whole scene. Abby slowly mouthed the word
"Sorry"
She turned her attention back to Luka.
"Well you sure know how to make a man feel welcome at a party, you know if you didnt want me to come you should have just said so."
"No," Abby blurted out to quickly for her liking,"I mean I did invite you but it didnt matter either way if you showed up or not."
"Well I almost didnt."
Abby almost made the mistake of whipping her head around and shouting why, when she caught herself and slyly said,
"Well then I guess you almost missed out on all the fun, did something happen with a patient?"
"No, I had to stay a little late to talk to Kerry."
"About what?" Abby said from behind her drink.
"Oh I just got chief." Luka said like it was nothing big.
Abby almost choked on her drink as she stammered
"Congratulations!"
"Thanks." Was all Luka said
"Oh you are such a man about this, acting like its no big deal." Abby said teasingly
Luka turned his head slightly towards her and winked. Abby almost melted right there.
"Do we have to call you Chief now?"
"Very Funny."
Abby enjoyed being on the teasing side.
"You know, if you've been interviewed do they say We are here at County talking to Chief Kovac…"
"They don't do it that way."
"I'm just saying I think it's cute if it's a guy"
"And if the Chief is a woman"
"I don't think women should be put in position to leadership. Do you?" I say in my best policitcal voice
"Peanuts...?" He pushes the bowl towards Abby
Abby disregaurds the peanuts and turns to look at Neela "Ah, young love they just have to show it off to everybody"
"Here is to discretion…" Luka holds his glass up for a toast.
"Propriety…" Abby adds.
"Maturity..." Luka adds.
"Well…" Abby looks at him with squinted eyes, just a little, showing her disbelief
"No, not to that" He quickly retracts his statement.
Abby laughs and glances over at Morris who is now sitting next to Kerry, he seemed to be spilling his guts, and to Abbys surprise Kerry wasnt beating the life out of him. She has to be drunk as hell, that was the only excuse Abby could think of.
"Well I am pretty much exhausted," Abby says about twenty minutes after thier little toast. She has now talked to Neela and Michael, and without feeling a need anymore she begins putting on her coat and gather her things.
"Yeah I better take off to." Luka says starting to gather his coat. "Need a lift?"
"Um, sure why not," Abby said not even realizing that she said it. "Well its not like I would pass up a car ride over the EL, who knows what crazy people ride it this time a night."
"Yeah I know what your saying."
Soon after saying good-bye to all their friends and getting in the car Luka pulled out front of Abbys apartment. Abby sat watching Luka sing to the wierd show girls song.
"And I remember..Doit doit do do do.." Luka slowly faded his voice.
"Ok, well thanks for the ride." Abby laughs.
"That bad, eh?"
"No… I would just… keep your day job…"
"What you never sing in the car? You know, when you are alone?"
"Sometimes I do, yeah… but you are not alone in the car."
"Yeah, I know"
"I'm just kidding"
They sat for what seemed like an hour just, well sitting and sometimes glancing at one another. Luka slightly parted his lips as if something might come out but as fast as he opened it he closed it. Obvisouly having second thoughts. Abby finally decided to make the first "move".
"Would you like to"
Abby was cut off when Luka seemed to lunge across the car grabbing her and locking his lips on hers, kissing each other passionetely, then Luke pulled Abby to his side of the car never once letting their lips part. This she thought was the begining of a very eventful, hot, steamy, and unforgetable night.