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Post by erprincess on May 28, 2006 23:09:49 GMT 10
Hi everyone. This is my first post here. yay! BACKGROUND: Abby and Luka are in a relationship. Carter, Susan and Gallant are all still at county. This story happens after Carter and Abby break up. Abby and Luka love each other. They have been going out for about a year now. Luka's POV Sitting at Abby's apartment feels kind of strange. We've moved in together. It's exactly the way I remember it. Except there is no alcohol or cigarettes. Abby finally quit. The No-drinking has been hard for her but I know that she is strong and can pull through. When Abby and I got back together I felt as if we could put the past behind us and work toward the future. I love Abby and I would love to marry her. It's just that I don't want to seem as I rushing the relationship. Abby likes to take her time but I help what I am feeling. I hope She feels the same way about me. Sometimes it's seems that she gets distracted by Carter. I can't be jealous of that but I can't help having the feeling that she would one day want to go back to him- after everything they have been through. I need to get ready for work. (At County) Abby's POV "Abby when's Luka coming in?" "He should be here soon, I guess" I answered "We'll were getting slammed and we are short doctors. your going to have to cover for him" Kerry said annoyed "Fine, what do we got?" "GSW X2, someone shot a mother and her daughter outside of a shopping mall" "A mother and daughter?" I asked surprised "Yes Abby what don't you understand, Luka better get here soon" She was getting really annoyed at my question. Every time a trauma like this came in, I always let my emotions get the better of me. Especially with a child and her mother. "TOA?" I asked. "5 minutes" She replied "Okay lets get 10 units of O-neg ready.. Cmon let's go" It felt so strange giving out orders when just months ago I was taking them. Ineeded to prepare myself for this trauma. I saw that Carter was preparing the two trauma rooms. Ever since we broke up we always had this weird tension around each other. I love Carter- he's my best friend-he always will be there for me, But now Luka's in my Life and I couldn't be happier.
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Post by <3 LubyII <3 on May 28, 2006 23:17:29 GMT 10
Great start!!
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Post by erprincess on May 29, 2006 0:30:06 GMT 10
Update. Tell me if u like. "Abby, let's go, ambulance is pulling up" "I'm coming!" I answerd Kerry. "Hey, Sam, did blood get here?" "Yeah, Hang 5 units?" She asked me. "Yea just in case." "Fine" I walked away, then I ran towards the bay. When was Luka getting here? Isn't he suposed to be here by now? I Don- "Hey, Abby, Cmon, take the next one." God, I was tottaly on Weaver's wrath today, I was not in the mood. my mind kept wondering back to Luka. I needed to focus on my paitent. I opened the ambulance door. Great, I have the mother. Those were one of the most diffucult paitents besides for the kids because they would always be so scared. I looked into her eyes and saw that she was crying and there was blood everywere. "Okay what do we have?" "24 year old, female, GSW to the stomach, found no exit wound, could be internal bleeding BP is good, nothing dropped. Says she pregnant. Pregnant? Okay there cannot be that much blood from a GSW to the stomach, besides the fact that there is no exit wound. I knew what was happening. God, she is so young.Her baby is most likley not alive,and who knows what's going to be with her other daughter. She was screaming and crying- God this was going to be hard.
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Post by noekii on May 29, 2006 5:19:26 GMT 10
I just read your story, I like it, please update!
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Post by erprincess on May 29, 2006 6:02:15 GMT 10
Update!
Luka's POV
Okay I should have taken the EL (L) This traffic is so backed up. I should have been at work 15 minuts ago, I can't believe this! Weaver is going to kill me. I Hope Abby isn't worried, she is so the type to worry. Okay it looks like thing are picking up....
County.
"Okay lets get a CT, and set up for a-" "No! I can't afford any of this please." "Okay, Chuny let's get her some vallium"
She was clearly not from the "rich crowd" I couldn't blame her for being scared about paying for all these tests. She started to calm down from the vallium. I needed to get through to her.
Luka’s POV
Finally I am out of this traffic. Oh, great here comes Weaver. Great, what is she going to do? Put another memo in my box. Im really not in the mood for this now. I want to see Abby- I’ve missed her all day.
County Lounge: “Luka- this is the second time your late and were short on attendings..” I wasn't paying attention to anything she was saying I was just thinking about Abby. “Luka this isn’t a museum, stop standing there and get in to trauma three, Carter needs your help.”
I hope Abby is working in there. I hope this isn’t a hard trauma to deal with I am so not in the mood.
Abby’s trauma room.
Where is he? Then I saw him go into the other trauma room, He saw me and waved. I must pay attention to my patients, I can’t let personal things get in the way. My patient,God I didn’t even ask her what her name was yet. Abby way she was still really scared and crying. She is still bleeding terribly. I needed to examine her but even with the valium she was still struggling.
“Hey, it’s okay, my name is Abby, and I want to help you” I looked directly into her eyes but she was looking the other way “My name is Lauren, what’s happening to me, why does this hurt so bad?” “Okay, Lauren, you got shot in the stomach, Surgery is coming down now to see-” I began “oh my g-d, I’m pregnant! please, no it’s not true! I am not having a miscarriage! I can’t” She started to cry “ I need you to stay still so I can examine you okay?” “ Okay. Where’s my daughter I need to see her” “Your daughter is in the next room- she is in good hands” “Lauren, how far along are you?” “ 13 weeks- please don’t let my child die” O god. 13 weeks? That's it? For all I know this could all be a coincidence. “I am going to do everything I can to help you” “Is this going to hurt?” She asked Of course it’s going to hurt- your practically bleeding out. God- I cannot lie to her. But I don’t want her to be more scared then she already is. “ It’s going to hurt for a few seconds, we are going to give you something for the pain okay?” “Okay” “Chuny- before I start lets get a fetal heart monitor” “Sure” She replied Chuny put the heart monitor on Lauren, it was dead silent. I knew exactly what that meant. “ Wait- something isn’t right- Abby?” “Okay, Lauren, it’s seems that you've miscarried your baby- Im so sorry.” “What-No- Abby, please your a doctor you can do something” She was sobbing “Lauren....” “My husband doesn’t even know! I never told him- I wanted him to be surprised” “Would you like me to call him?” I asked her “No, he is out of town on business, he is trying to find a job, he is going from interview to interview” I took her hand tightly “Okay, your going to go to surgery then up to OB okay?” “Can you stay with me?” “Well, When you are out of surgery, I’ll come back, I’m going to go check on your daughter” “Okay, tell her I'm here” “Sure” I walked away. I went into the bathroom and locked myself into a stall. I felt so bad for Lauren. I broke down and cried. I t took 5 minutes for me to get myself together.
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Post by lubyfan on May 29, 2006 8:05:18 GMT 10
Great fanfic!
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Post by erprincess on May 29, 2006 10:24:18 GMT 10
ok here is an update.
I walked out of the bathroom. My eyes were all red from crying. I can't break down like this with every paitent. I needed to check up on Lauren's daughter and see Luka. I walked into the trauma room.
"Hey Luka, how is she doing?" "She's doing okay,Surgery is coming down to remove the bullet." "Good, They took her mom up to surgery and then OB" "Can I see my mom now?" "Her name is Ashlee, she's six" "Okay, want me to talk to her? "Sure, you saw her mom, I have to go, come find me later" "Sure" I smiled at him. God I can't wait to get away with him. "Hi, Ashlee,how are you feeling?" "Are you a doctor to?" She asked me- G-d she was so cute she had strawberry vlond hair and blue eyes- she was holding her doll. "Yes, I am a doctor, my name is Abby." "My Leg is hurting alot" "Were gonna give you something for that and then people are going to come and you are going to get an operation okay?" "Is it going to hurt?" "No,no, you will be asleep" "Then can I see my Mom?" "Sure, I'll take you" "Okay"
I walked away and began looking for Luka, I went into the lounge. He was drinking coffee.
'Hey, how's your shift going?" I asked him "It's okay, Weaver is breathing down my back today." "Same- she will not leave me alone." "How's Ashlee's mom?" "She's in surgery now." "Why does she have to go to OB?" "She was eight weeks pregnant, miscarried." "God- That must be hard" "She's poor, no one to pay for the bills, Husband is out of town looking for a job" "Can we help her?" I asked him "Abby.. What would we do for her?" "Offer her a job here.. she has no health care insurance and maybe the hospital can offer her some benifits" "Sure..that's a good idiea" There was a silence. I didn't really know what to say next, he just leaned over a kissed me.. it was great.
"Hey how bout we go out tonight- just you and me. "Can you promise me something?" "IF anything like this would ever happen to us, to me like that would you leave me? I think he was shocked by my question because he was quiet for a few seconds... Then he looked straight into my eyes and took my hand "Of course, I could never do that, let's not think about that right now.." "Luka.. promise me" "I promise" Then we kissed.
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Post by jaana on May 29, 2006 15:12:46 GMT 10
Update soon!
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Post by Noora on May 29, 2006 22:52:54 GMT 10
Great update!
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Post by Lubyfanatic316 on May 30, 2006 1:34:04 GMT 10
Can't wait for the next update!
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Post by <3 LubyII <3 on May 30, 2006 1:43:08 GMT 10
Great update!
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Post by erprincess on May 30, 2006 4:59:48 GMT 10
Update thanks guys for replying it really means alot to me.
"Hey Abby, theres this great new resturaunt, wanna try it out tonight?" "Sorry Susan, I have plans" "oooh.. Someone special I presume?" "Hmhm... You can say that" She tottaly knew it was Luka.. Luka and I have been trying hard to keep our relashonship "underwraps" but rumors tend to spread around at county preety fast. I wondered where Luka would be taking me. I hope it will be something nice. But I just want to be around him- he makes me so happy.
"Okay,Abby, I'm off" "Lucky, I took a longer shift- I'm of in a hour" "Alright, see you tommorow, bright and early" "k" I laughed.
Then my pager went off-it was OB- I hope nothing bad happened with Lauren- she's been through a lot today.
"Hi, Lauren, how are you feeling?" "A li'l better, I guess, still hurts though.. there was so much blood" "Yeah.. I know." I know? How would I know Iv'e never had a miss carige in my life- thank g-d "Yeah.. it will stop soon- if it gets really bad let me know" "Thanks...how is Ashlee?" "She's doing realy well, she is still in surgery- they said everything is going right on track so far" "She's such a good kid- she never complains." I just smiled at her. What was I going to say? "Thats...good" Thats good? I am such an idiot. Iv'e never been through this in my life and all I have to say is that's good? Stupid things just keep coming out of my mouth. "Yeah.. we've been strugling.. we got evicted from one apatment allready.. I got fired from my job" "Maybe you can work here..there's a day care if you need it." "that would be great" Just then I saw the detectives come in, they were going to question her about the shooting, she saw them too. She started to cry suddenly. "Lauren.." I took her hand "I'm sorry Abby... I can't deal with this- Michael, my husband is never home, I just went through a miscarrige... I don't want to answer any questions..please Abby "Okay, I'll be right back okay? "Okay"
"Are you Abby Lockhart?" "Yes.." "We need to ask her some questions about who shot her and her daughter....." "Well,she just went through a shooting and a miscarige and she is very trauma tized right now and is in no condition- "Ma'am we must talk to her" "I am sorry you can't" "you have to understand- "And YOU have to understand that she has been through more today than you will probably go through in your entire lives so please, go wait in chairs"
Wow- iv'e never talked back to a police officer- it felt good for a strange reason. But I did my job- I had to protect my paitent.
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Post by <3 LubyII <3 on May 30, 2006 5:53:32 GMT 10
Great update!
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Post by Noora on May 30, 2006 23:16:24 GMT 10
Good update!
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Post by rorygilmore on May 31, 2006 0:35:20 GMT 10
Wow- iv'e never talked back to a police officer- it felt good for a strange reason. I like the way you have captured Abby's character. Hope to know what's coming next, soon!
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