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Post by Rach :) on Jan 4, 2007 21:57:17 GMT 10
awww i love it update soon as possible
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Post by ERFanRach on Jan 4, 2007 22:29:36 GMT 10
Great Update!!!!
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kia
Duchess of Luby
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Post by kia on Jan 5, 2007 0:05:56 GMT 10
great! your ff is very interesting. i'm sorry for luka's brother... update asap
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Post by strizzy on Jan 5, 2007 1:37:20 GMT 10
I like the originality of this, it is very good!
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Post by *Natalie* on Jan 5, 2007 5:26:07 GMT 10
Great update Natalie x
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Post by lubbylover1 on Jan 5, 2007 7:16:11 GMT 10
awesome...... as always
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Post by Abbie on Jan 5, 2007 15:42:06 GMT 10
Thanks so much!!! Now this chapters a long one because I wont be able to update till Sunday night, so enjoy!!Chapter 3: The next morning Abby woke up to Amara crying. She sat up wondering if she should see if Mirjana needed any help. She decided to go when Amara began to scream as loud as she could. “Good morning.” Abby smiled walking into the kitchen. “Did she wake you?” Mirjana asked almost in tears. “She wont stop crying!” Mirjana said bouncing the baby in her arms. “May I?” Abby asked holding out her arms. “Please!” Mirjana begged handing over Amara to Abby. She fussed for a little while until Abby laid her across her arms, and she rocked her back and forth. Amara began to calm down. “How did you do that?!” Mirjana asked amazed. “This was the only way I got Joe to sleep when he was a baby.” Abby smiled looking down at the sleeping baby. For a moment she felt sad knowing she will never have the chance to hold her own daughter in her arms. “You’re very good.” Mirjana nodded sinking into a chair. “Why don’t you go lay down. I’ll bring her in with me and Luka for a little while.” Abby said still rocking Amara. “Oh that would be very nice of you!” Mirjana patted Abby’s arm and headed to her room. Abby walked around the quiet house for a while so Amara wouldn’t wake up. She walked past an open window and felt the warm breeze blow in. She decided to sit outside and look at the beautiful scenery around the house, so she grabbed a blanket for Amara, and headed outside. Rocking Amara in her arms Abby smiled looking around her. “It’s beautiful isn’t it.” Luka said walking up to her. Abby jumped, and Amara moved in her arms. “Yeah, Luka it’s amazing!” “I see you have a new little friend.” Luka said sitting next to Abby, touching Amara’s face lightly. “Mirjana couldn’t get her to stop crying, so I tried. She calmed down, and I let Mirjana get some sleep while I had Amara.” Abby said softly cuddling Amara closer to her. “You were always good with Joe when he cried.” Luka said leaning back against the chair, as they both sat looking around.
“Are you going to see Stephen today?” Abby asked breaking the silence. “Yeah, I’m going to go with my dad and Mirjana.” “I’ll stay with Joe and Amara. I don’t think he should be seeing him like that.” Abby said quickly. Luka nodded agreeing.
“Mommy!” Joe called from inside the house. “Outside sweetie.” Abby said leaning forward so he could see her through the window. Joe raced to the door, and outside. “I didn’t know where you were.” Joe said climbing on Luka’s lap. Amara opened her eyes and blinked a few times. “Baby!” Joe smiled leaning over to see her. “This is your baby cousin, Amara.” Luka said playing with the baby. “She’s cute!” Joe smiled following what Luka was doing. Amara smiled at them, and Abby giggled. She stopped when she found herself beginning to cry. “Mommy you crying!” Joe said suddenly looking at Abby. “I’m fine sweetie I just yawned.” She said wiping her eyes. “Luka, can you hold her. I have to go to the bathroom.” Luka nodded taking the baby, and watched Abby rush into the house. “Come inside Joe.” Luka said as he got up to go into the house after Abby. “Can you sit here and watch her for me?” Luka asked laying down a blanket on the floor and laying Amara on it. Joe nodded excitedly, and Luka handed him some of her toys.
“Abby…” Luka said opening the door to their room. “I’m sorry Luka. I just saw Joe with Amara and…” “It’s ok. I understand.” Luka said sitting on the bed next to her. “I’m fine.” Abby sighed wiping the tears from her face. Luka was about to say something when there was a knock at the door. “Daddy, Amara threw up and it’s gross!” Joe said opening the door. “I’ll be right there buddy.” Luka said looking back at Abby. “You ok?” He asked touching her face softly. Abby nodded, and Luka got up to clean up Amara.
Later that morning everyone left to go to the hospital. “You ready?” Abby asked looking down at Joe making faces at Amara as she laughed. “Where are we going?” Joe asked sitting up. “Outside silly. It’s to nice to sit in here.” Abby laughed picking up Amara. Joe lead the way to the door, and out to the front yard. Abby set up a blanket for her and Amara while Joe pulled a baseball set out of the shed that Lukas father got for him. “Mommy play with me!” Joe yelled trying to throw the ball in the air, and hit it with the bat. Abby made sure Amara was occupied with her toy, and she headed over to Joe. “Ok, ready?” Abby asked getting ready to pitch him the ball. Joe nodded, and Abby lightly tossed it to him. He swung and hit the ball back to Abby. “Good hit!” Abby yelled catching the ball. Joe started running in a circle laughing. “Joe I caught the ball! Your out!” Abby laughed watching him running. She turned to run after him, and he zigzagged across the lawn. “What are you doing! Bases are in a diamond!” “So! This is how I play!” “Oh really, so how do you get out?” Abby asked stopping to catch her breath. “I don’t!” Joe said stopping to watcher her. Abby sat down on the ground holding her stomach. “Mommy you ok?” Joe asked walking up to her. “Mommy?” Joe said softer kneeling down next to her. “Your out!!” Abby yelled grabbing him, and tickling him. “Not fair! You cheated!” Joe said through laughs. “You always fall for that.” Abby laughed. She stopped when Amara began to cry. “She wants to play too!” Joe said following Abby.
At the hospital Luka sat alone in the room next to his brother. “How’s he doing?” Mirjana asked walking into the room. “He’s sleeping right now.” Luka said leaning back in the chair. “That’s all he’s been doing.” Luka’s father said sitting in the other chair. Just then the monitors began going off, and the doctors rushed in. Luka backed up making room for them. “Oh god.” Mirjana whispered covering her mouth crying. Luka quickly moved over to her wrapping his arms around her. “Don’t.” Luka’s father said when the doctors pulled out the paddles. “You wont get him back. He has suffered enough.” The doctors shut off the machines, and called it. When they left Luka walked over to the bed with everyone else, and they cried. After a little while Luka stepped out to call Abby and let her know. “Hello?” Abby said into the phone. “Mommy who is it?” Joe asked in the background. “Shhh…” Abby hisses. “Luka?” Abby asked listening to someone sniffing. “He’s gone.” Luka whispered. “Oh, Luka I’m so sorry.” Abby sat on the couch watching Amara smiling at Joe. Abby began to cry, and quickly wiped the tears away before Joe looked up at her. “We’ll be a little later. Mirjana wants to stay a little longer.” “That’s fine. I’ll feed Joe, and put him to bed. Tell Mirjana not to worry about Amara. I know where her bottles are.” “Thank you Abby. I’ll call you before we leave. I love you.” “I love you too Luka.” Abby said before hanging up the phone. “What happened mommy?” Joe asked climbing onto the couch next to her. “Uncle Stephen just died sweetie. He was very sick, and the doctors couldn’t make him better.” Abby said softly rubbing Joe small cheek. “You and daddy should’ve helped him. You save lots of people.” Joe said looking down at the floor. “Yes we do, but sometimes doctors cant save people. If someone’s very sick, and their heart stops it’s better not to make the person suffer anymore. You understand?” Abby asked cupping Joe’s face in her hands. “Yeah, but if I got really sick would you stop fixing me?” Joe watched Abby waiting for her to answer. Abby breathed deeply, and nodded. “I would do anything to save you, but uncle Stephen had cancer all over his body, and he died.” Joe nodded, and went back on the floor to play with Amara.
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Post by jaana on Jan 5, 2007 18:52:05 GMT 10
Great update!
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Post by ERFanRach on Jan 5, 2007 21:08:30 GMT 10
Great Update!!!!
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Post by <3 Luby II 2 <3 on Jan 6, 2007 0:25:01 GMT 10
Great updates!!!
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Post by lubylover123 on Jan 6, 2007 2:42:57 GMT 10
Just read it, this is really good! Update soon
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Post by *Natalie* on Jan 6, 2007 7:54:23 GMT 10
Loved the update. Poor Abby getting upset with Joe and the baby, glad Luka was their to comfort her. And stephen dying was sooo sad
natalie x
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Post by strizzy on Jan 6, 2007 10:30:33 GMT 10
Brilliant update!!!!
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Post by Rach :) on Jan 6, 2007 10:44:29 GMT 10
aww poor luka thats so sad loved abby playing with joe update soon!
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Post by jadestar on Jan 8, 2007 4:52:13 GMT 10
aww just caught up with the story... very beautiful one. loved it whn Joe was playng with Amara... so sweet and Stephen dying was so touching... great story, really
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