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Post by ERFanRach on Jan 7, 2007 8:58:16 GMT 10
Great Update!!!!
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Post by hollygirl on Jan 7, 2007 9:04:07 GMT 10
wonderful update!!!!!
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Post by daniella on Jan 7, 2007 9:48:23 GMT 10
More update...
It's PG - 13...
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04: 26 PM
Luka and Abby sat in a cafe to have a little break on their tour in the city. They were sitting outside, in a little table for two. The table and the chair were made on steel, paitend of white. Abby found the city fantastic. The old and new made a beautiful contrast.
'And I want to be a doctor... ' said Luka.
' Sounds like a good idea... ' said Abby.
Luka smiled and nodded, looking down.
'And you ? ' he asked, looking at her, trough his hair, that fell a little over his eyes.
Abby was mesmerized.
' Abby ? ' he asked. ' Are you okay ? '
' Ahn ? ' she asked, blushing a little when he caught her staring at him. ' Oh, yeah... I didn't think about it... but medicine looks great... '
Luka looked at her. She was so adorable when she blushed.
' Ti si na taj naèin lijep, Abby... ' he said.
' What did you said ? ' she asked, smiling.
' I said that you're beautiful, Abby... ' he smiled.
She blushed again. This wasn't what she expected at all. She didn't mean to fall in love with the son of the family who was recieving her.
Without saying anything, Luka got up from his chair, leaned on the table and kissed her.
Abby was surprised, but smiled after a few seconds. Luka kissed her again. She closed her eyes and savoured his mouth. It was eletrizing at first, but they were getting used to this.
Luka broke the kiss and looked at her. Abby was still with her eyes closed. Slowly, she opened them and smiled at him.
' I think that I'm falling for you, Abby... ' he said.
' I'm too... 'she whispered, but he heard her.
Luka smiled. He asked for the bill and looked at her.
' I want to show you a place... ' he said, picking up her hand.
' Where ? ' she asked.
' You'll see... ' he said, smiling.
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Luka sat on the grass and put Abby between his legs. He leaned on a tree behind him. There were yellow leafs all around them. The lake in frint of them were big, beautifulas the rest of the park. There was a freezing wind, so they closed their coats.
' What do you think ? ' Luka asked.
' It's beautiful... ' she said, turning and looking at him..
He kissed her again. It was a thing that he didn't tire to do. Abby put her hand on his head, don't letting him pull away.
When they break of the kiss to take their breaths back, she said.
' Luka, I want to keep this between us... and I want us to take this slow... I don't want your brother or you parents to think that I just come here to arrange a boyfriend... '
He nodded.
' Nobody will know about us... ' he said.
She didn't say anything, just snuggle against him and closed her eyes. Luka put her arm against her and sighed, looking at the lake.
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That night, when they arrived home, Andro was sitting on the floor and looked at them. They were hiding something. He could tell. Their parents were watching TV. His father looked at them.
' Luak... you're late... ' he said.
' Sorry, it was my fault... ' said Abby. ' I asked him to show me the city at night... '
Josef nodded and turned back to the TV.
Abby turned back to Luka.
' I don't want you to be in any trouble... ' she said.
' I won't... ' he said.
' Well, I''m going to my room... 'she said. ' I want to call my brother... '
With that, she went upstairs.
' I just hope you know what you're doing Luka... ' his father said. without looking at him. ' You're eighteen and she's still seventeen... '.
Luka nodded. He had to remember that.
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Post by hollygirl on Jan 7, 2007 9:51:19 GMT 10
ahhh! they kissed! another great update!!
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Post by ERFanRach on Jan 7, 2007 11:17:44 GMT 10
Great Update!!!!
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Post by daniella on Jan 7, 2007 15:54:00 GMT 10
Another update...
i resolved to put Danijela in the story, but she has nothing with Luka, so...
It's PG - 13 for now...
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A few days passed and today would be Abby's first day at school. She was nervous for a lot of things, but mostly because of the language she didn't know and the culture, that was so different from hers own...
She was waiting for Luka and Andro, so they would be walking to school together.
Andro got downstairs. He looked at Abby's clothes, but didn't say aniything. She was pretty with that clothes.
' Where's Luka ? Abby asked, from where she was sitting on the couch..
'A little worried about him, I see... ' Andro said, picking up his things.
Abby looked at him, exasperated. Andro just smiled and continued to put his books on his backpack.
At this moment, Luka walked down the stairs. He looked at Abby.
' Nervous ? he asked.
She nodded. She saw that he was hndsome with his jeans and a navy blue t - shirt.
'Don't be... ' he said, smiling.
' How " beautiful "... ' said Andro, smirking at them.
Luka glared at him and Abby rolled her eyes
' Let's go, Luka... 'she said getting up and picking his hand.
When they were almost on the door, she turned her head to Andro and said:
'And it's cute, Andro... not beautiful... '
Luka looked at him and laughed at his face.
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At school, Luka and Abby entered the class, after going to the school principal. The interchange programm was in his school too, even if he picked the information at Andro's school. It would be esier for them to adapt. So, now everyone was arriving and looking at her. It was like this in the USA. She thought that in everyplace it was like this.
She sat besides Luka, in the table next to him.
The class were a little diferent. There were double tables, like in some schools at the US, but it was the first time she saw it on high school.
' Our first class is biology... ' he said.
'Okay... I know that I won't understand it, but you can explain to me later... ' she said.
' Sjajna osoba Luka... tko je tko tvoj prijatelj? ' asked one boy. ( wow, Luka... who is your firend ? )
Luka looked at his colleague, sitting on the table in front of them. It was Vuk.
' Njoj ugled je Abby.... ' Luka said. ' Ona je Amerikanac ans je ovdje na meðusobna izmjena plan.... ona je at moj mjesto... ' (Her name is Abby... she is american ans is here on the interchange program... she is at my place... )
Abby looked at the two boys.
' I was presenting you to him... ' Luka said. ' Abby, this is Vuk... Vuk, Abby... '
Vuk shook her hand.
' Nice to meet you... ' she said.
' You too... ' said Vuk.
One girl, walked to them.
' Ona je na moj mjesto, Luka.. ' the girl said. ( she's at my place, Luka... )
' Možete zatvoriti se drugi stol Danijela... ' he said. ( You can sit in another table, Danijela... )
' Ti si moj razredni drug dio... 'she said. ( You're my classmate partner... )
' Ne više, Danijela.. ' he said. ( Not anymore... )
Danijela looked at him, but didn't say anything. Vuk smiled.
' Man, you made it... ' he said when Danijela walked away.
Abby wasn't understand anything.
' She thinks that she is my girlfriend... ' Luka explained.
' Well, I'll better look out, then... ' Abby said.
Luka looked at her.
' You don't have to worry... ' he said, picking her hand on his. ' I don't even like her... '
' It's not you that I'm worried about... ' Abby said.
Luka looked at her.
'I'll protect you... ' he said.
There were another students, talking about her, mainly girls. And this girl that she didn't even know the name was one of them. Abby knew she was popular and this could mean trouble. Sighing, she knew that it would be long day....
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' Liking you first day ? ' Luka asked, sitting with her in the table on the dining - hall, of the school. The food was pratically equal, so she knew what to choose.
' It's difficult... ' she said, opening the little plastic bown that contained her fruit salad and picking a plastic spoon. ' I can't really talk with anyone... and I know that they were talking about me... '
' Because you're beautiful... ' he said, smiling.
' Luka, I think that the girls in your classroom don't think it... ' Abby said.' Mainly...'
' Danijela... ' he said.
' Yeah... ' Abby said, eating the fruit salad.
' It's " jealousy " ... ' he said.
' You mean, jealous... ' she said.
' Yeah, you understood... ' he said and she nodded, smiling..' But don't worry... she's just a boring, dull girl... '
Abby looked at him.
' You mean that ? ' she asked.
Luka nodded, kissing her.
They didn't realize but Danijela was behind them, sitting in a table with her friends, seeing everything.
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Post by hollygirl on Jan 7, 2007 16:22:18 GMT 10
awesome update!! I hope Danijela doesn't cause problems. I hope you update soon.
and I thought it was so weird, when I first read this story. you and I think alike. A idea for a fic like this popped into my head a few weeks ago.. it was different in a lot of ways though.. the only thing that was the same.. was that Abby goes to Croatia.
Love your fic a lot so far!
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Post by strausser on Jan 7, 2007 17:18:28 GMT 10
oh dear, stupid girls in high school could really be a pain in the ass dani, i am sooo looking forward to the update :PPP
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Post by jacobsmommy on Jan 7, 2007 17:30:50 GMT 10
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Post by daniella on Jan 7, 2007 21:39:13 GMT 10
awesome update!! I hope Danijela doesn't cause problems. I hope you update soon. and I thought it was so weird, when I first read this story. you and I think alike. A idea for a fic like this popped into my head a few weeks ago.. it was different in a lot of ways though.. the only thing that was the same.. was that Abby goes to Croatia. Love your fic a lot so far! About Danijela, you will see... It is so cool... we had the same idea... Dani
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Post by lubyfreaky on Jan 7, 2007 21:42:35 GMT 10
I just read all the updates and this fic so GOOD GREAT UPDATES
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Post by daniella on Jan 7, 2007 21:47:13 GMT 10
oh dear, stupid girls in high school could really be a pain in the ass dani, i am sooo looking forward to the update :PPP I'm writing it right now... Yeah, i agree... sometimes, they think they are amazing when they really aren't... I'm so angry with this... Dani
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Post by daniella on Jan 7, 2007 23:30:44 GMT 10
Update...
It;s PG...
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Danijela walked in the corridor that ahd the pay phone. She needed to call his parents. She had to tell them about his son ahd his new freind.
She sighed and dealed Luka's number.
' Halo? ' said Irena, when she picked up the phone at her home. ( hello ?)
' Milostiva gospoða Kovac? ' Danijela asked. ( Missis Kovac ? )
'Da , tko je ovaj? ' asked Irena ( yes,who is this ? )
' Posrijedi je Danijela.... Kako ste? ' asked Danijela. ( it's Danijela. How are you ? )
' Ja sam dobar. i te? 'asked Irena, smilling. ( I'm good... and you ? )
' Ja sam dobar... 'she said. ' Slušajte , JA znati taj ovaj htijenje biti pitan kup snopova , ali JA amd pozvati to upozorenje te i tvoj muž o nešto... ' ( I'm good... listen, I know that this will be a shock, but I amd calling to warn you and your husband about something... )
' Što?' asked Irena. ( what ?)
' Jesu te recieving Amerikanac student at tvoj home? ' asked Danijela. ( Are you recieving an american student at home ? )
' Da...' said Irena, suspicious. ( yes... )
' Kvalitetno , ona i tvoj sin jesu dogaðaj nešto.... ' Danijela said. ' JA znati taj ja sam pozvati from škole i da internet svibanj pojaviti se taj zelim nanijeti problematika, ali Ja sam njegov prijatelj.... JA ne ištanje previše vidjeti njemu nanositi povredu... ' ( .Well, she and your son are doing something... I know that i am callig from school and that it may appear that I want to cause problems, but I am his friend... I don't want too see him hurt... )
' Sto ? 'asked Irena. ( what ? )
' Oni preterit od be stvaranje vanjska strana at škole.. ' she said, looking at her friends. ( they were making out at the school... )
' Oh... ' said Irena ' Kvalitetno , Ja æu naprodikovati njima... ' ( oh, i'm going to talk to them... )
' Ugoditi , to uèiniti... 'said Danijela, smiling. ( please, do that... )
' JA htijenje... hvala vam za reæi mene... ' said Irena, hanging up the phone.. ( I will, thank you for telling me... )
With that, Danijela hang up too, with a small smile at her lips.
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When Josef arrived home, from another day of work, tired and just wanting to rest, Irena came to him, looking worried.
' Što dogoditi se Irena? ' he asked concerned. ( what hapened, Irena ?)
' JA recieved telefon pozvati ovaj poslijepodne. to je bio Danijela i rekla je taj Luka i Abby preterit od be stvaranje vanjska strana na škole... 'she said. ( I recieved a phone call this afternoon... it was Danijela and she said that Luka and Abby were making out on school... )
' Sto ? ' Josef asked, incredulous. ( What ? )
' Ne te misliti oni su ljepušan Zatvori? Zatim mi znati zašto... 'Irena said. ( don't you think they are pretty close ? now we know why... )
Josef sighed. ' Da vidim naprodikovati njima... ' Josef said. ( let me talk to them... )
' Josef... ' Irena said.
' Ja æu naprodikovati njima noæašnji... Ja æu reæi njima biti više pažljivo... mi ne mogu ja phohibit njima , na taj naèin... ' Josef said. (I'll talk to them tonight...I'll tell them to be more careful.. we can't phohibit them, so... )
Irena just nodded. She knew that he was right. They couldt prhibited them for loving each other... it would be worse if they did this...
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When Luka and Abby rrived at home, past seven, his father are waiting for them. He loocked at them.
' I think we need to talk... ' Josef said.
Luka sighed and looked down at Abby.
' Don't worry... ' he said to her and she nodded.
They sat on the couch, while Josef sat on his chair.
' Look, I have something... important... to talk to you... ' said Josef. ' I and your mother... can see... that you are... very close... '
Abby looked away. Luka looked directly at his father.
'Yes, we are very close... ' he said picking up Abby's hand. ' I fell in love with her... and she did for me as well... '
Josef looked at them. He knew it. Sighing, he said.
' I can't... prohibit... you from that or anything... ' he said. ' But I want you two to be... careful... about this... '
' Yeah, we will... ' Luka said.
' There are places, you can't... how I can say... making out ? '
Luka raised an eyebrow.
' We will be more careful... ' he said. ' Anything else ? '
Josef shook his head and get up from his chair. When he was almost out of the living room, Abby said.
' Mr. Kovac ? '
He turned to her.
' I just want you to know that I didn't came here just to fool around... I came here to study... ' Abby said. ' I didn't mean for this to happen... but it did... and I want you to know that I love your son very much... '
Josef looked at her for a few seconds and nodded. Smiling a little, he just nodded and turning around, left the room. Abby closed her eyes to keep the teras from falling over her face. Luka looked at her and hugghed her, kissing her head softly. Abbu hugghed him close to her.
' It's okay Abby... ' Luka said. ' My parents will understand... '
' Who told them ? ' she asked.
'I think I have a hunch... ' he said.
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Post by Rach :) on Jan 8, 2007 0:08:42 GMT 10
greta stuff please up date will luka puch that girll i would!!!
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Post by daniella on Jan 8, 2007 0:19:25 GMT 10
Almost... finishing the next chater... update in a few minutes...
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