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Post by daniella on Jan 8, 2007 0:28:20 GMT 10
PG - 13 for figting...
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The next day at school, Luka went to talk with Danijela.
She was talking with her friends, and looked up when he approached them. He looked pissed.
' Tko da li vi misliti ti si? ' he asked, putting his hands hard on the table. ( who do you think you are ? )
Danijela looked at him.
' Isprika mene? ' she asked, shocked. ( excuse - me ? )
' Te opozvao je moj majka juèer i je rekao njoj o Abby i mene.... ' he said aloud. everyone was watching. ( You called my mother yesterday and told her about Abby and me... )
Danijela didn't say anything. This was enough for Luka to know that she did it.
' Tko je dao te pravo? ' he asked. ( who gave you the right ? )
She looked down for a few seconds, but looked up at him again.
' Ja sam te peèen... 'she said. ( I'm your friend... )
Luka shook his head.
' Ti si ne moj prijatelj.... prijatelj ne to uèiniti... ' he said. ( you're not my friend... friends don't do that... )
Danijela looked down.
' Pravedan držati yoorself daleko from mene i Abby... ' he said, sighing. '... i ne pozvati moj home više....ne oporaviti se gostovanje nas previše i ne približiti se moj brat. JA ne ištanje vidjeti te više. ' ( please, stay away from Abby and me... don't call my home anymore...don't come to visit us too and don't come near my brother... I don't want to see you anymore... )
With that, he left. Danijela looked at his back.
. Te htijenje pitati mene to oprostiti te još Luka. i našto vremena stiæi , te htijenje biti minirati... she tought. ( you will ask me to forgive you yet, Luka... and when the time arrives, you will be mine...)
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Abby looked at Luka, who sat in front of him. He was quiet today.
' Luka, you ok ? ' she asked.
' Yeah... ' he said. ' Just discovered that Danijela called my mother yesterday... she was the one who told her about us... and then today, I fought with her, in front of everyone else... '
Abby nodded.
'And you are feeling bad for that ? ' she asked.
He looked at her. Was he so easy to be read or she was that good ?
' Yeah... ' he said. ' But what's done is done... I can't go back now... '
' You can talk to her... ' said Abby.
' I don't want too... ' he said.' She's a pain... but she will let us in peace... '
' Good... ' said Abby, smiling
He picked her hand and smiled.
'We're good together, Abby... I don't think anyone or anything could separate us... '
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Dani
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Post by ERFanRach on Jan 8, 2007 3:03:08 GMT 10
Great Update!!!!
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Post by steffi1986 on Jan 8, 2007 5:06:05 GMT 10
wow this is really good Dani please update soon
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Post by hollygirl on Jan 8, 2007 5:30:16 GMT 10
Glad Danijel won't be bothering Abby and Luka anymore... or will she??? please update soon!
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Post by strausser on Jan 8, 2007 7:11:27 GMT 10
yay!!! looking forward to read some more
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Post by daniella on Jan 8, 2007 10:46:25 GMT 10
Writting it now... Dani
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Post by daniella on Jan 8, 2007 13:07:18 GMT 10
Update...
It's PG...
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During the two next weeks, Danijela let Luka and Abby alone. He still couldn't believe that he did made her back off. Abby and he were happy, very happy.
Today, Abby was watching Luka play soccer at school. She was with some girls, that she became friends with, watching the match on the grand stand, besides the camp. It was the final of the game.
They were cheering their team. Luka was one of the best players of the team and already made two goals. Their team was winning. The panel showed it was 3X1.
The judge blew the whistle and they commemorate their win. The girls get up and applauded them. The boys applauded too and Abby went to Luka, kissing him. He put his arms around her and lifted her of the ground for a few seconds..
' Good game, g - man... ' she said.
' Thanks... ' he said, smiling. ' Listen, I was talking with the guys and they all agreed that if we won, we would be going to the pizzeria near here... do you want to go with us ? '
' Sure... 'she said, smiling.
' Okay... I'm going to tell them... 'said Luka, kissing her again. ' I'm going to change... '
' I'll be waiting... ' she said.
He nodded and run to the cloakroom. Abby watched him go.
' Look who's here... ' said a voice behind her.
Abby took a deep breath and turned around. She saw Danijela in front of her, with her two friends.
' What do you want ? 'Abby asked.
' Just want you to know that sooner or later, Luka will be mine... ' she said.
' Just try... ' said Abby, walking away.
Danijela followed her.
' Well, you will be leaving next year... ' she said ' What you will do then ? '
' I don't know... ' said Abby, turning around and facing her. ' Maybe he will be coming with me... '
Danijela stooped, just looking at her. Abby smiled and turned around, walking away...
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The group walked towards the pizzeria, that was on the commercial center, near the school. There wasn't a lot of them, just five boys and three girls. Abby was holding Luka's hand.
When they sat, Luka translated the flavors to her. She was with the menu and he was on his side, whispering to her. Abby smiled. She would tell him about her and Danijela encounter later.
' What yours choice ? ' he asked his girlfriend.
' I think I want this one... ' she said.
' You're sure ? ' he asked, smiling.
Abby nodded, looking at him. Luka nodded and get up, going to the counter and ordering their meal
' So, Abby... ' said Vuk. ' I " hear " that you had an encounter with Danijela ?
'Yeah, I had... ' she confirmed. ' But I put her in herplace... she don't scare me anymore... '
Vuk smiled and drank a little of his coke.
' What she think she has with Luka, anyway ? ' Abby asked.
' Well, they grew up together... she was always trying to be near him or something... '
' So, shes in love with him... ' Abby conclude.
Vuk nodded.
' But he loves you, so... ' he said.
' She thinks I'm on the way... ' Abby said. He nodded again.
Luka returned with two plates of pizza and a coke for them to share.
' What are you talking about ? ' he asked, putting the plates and the coke on the table and sitting back as his chair.
' Nothing important... ' Abby said. ' Just things... '
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Dani
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Post by hollygirl on Jan 8, 2007 13:17:30 GMT 10
soccer. I love soccer! great update!!! Danijela needs to stay away from Abby and Luka. far away. update again soon!
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Post by daniella on Jan 8, 2007 13:27:53 GMT 10
She will give them some troublejust one more time...
I just waiting an answer from Maggie to do the next part...
Dani
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Post by jacobsmommy on Jan 8, 2007 17:21:14 GMT 10
Great update.
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Post by strausser on Jan 8, 2007 17:23:23 GMT 10
She will give them some troublejust one more time... Dani i don't know if i want to see the trouble anymore... but great to hear that it'll just be ONCE more
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Post by daniella on Jan 8, 2007 22:07:31 GMT 10
Hey... just for you to know...
I decide to change the plot just a little bit...it will be the same story, but with some aspecsts diferently... I'll update later when I figure it out...
Dani
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Post by ERFanRach on Jan 9, 2007 2:12:40 GMT 10
Great Update!!!!
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Post by lubyfreaky on Jan 9, 2007 4:02:48 GMT 10
Great Updates! I love this fic so much!
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Post by daniella on Jan 9, 2007 5:52:37 GMT 10
Update...
PG ...
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It was now October. Luka and Abby were together for a month now.
Today was Thurday and there were a holiday this week. So Luka was talking with his parents about going to the beach and show Abby some of their cities, near Dubrovnik. And he had a big surprise to do to Abby. His friends think he's crazy, but he couldn't help the way he felt about her.
' So, can we go ? ' he asked his mother. Irena looked at him and then at Abby.
Irena became closer to Abby and now she knew she could trust the girl. And she liked her too.
' I think... ' Irena said.
Luka smiled. .
' Thanks mom... ' he said. Then, he turned to Abby and said .' I think that's better to go and make the bags... '
She nodded and got up, following him
' But... take Andro with you... ' said Irena
Luka stopped and turned around.
' Mom... ' he whinned.
' Take him or don't go... ' Irena said.
' Fine... ' he said, rolling his eyes.
He turned to Abby.
' I just can't believe he's going with us... ' he said.
' It's okay, Luka... ' she said, kissing his cheek. ' He wont get in the way... '
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Friday morning, they left the house early to meet with the group. Andro was too with two friends, so he wouldn't feel deslocated.
' Hey Abby... Luka... ' said Javor, another friend's of Luka.
' Hey... ' said Abby, smiling at her friends.
Luka was a little nervous, but didn't want to show it to anyone. Vuk pullet him away from the group.
' Jesu stvarno dogaðaj ovaj? ' he asked. ( are you really doing this ? )
' Da , Ja sam.... ' said Luka nervously, looking from his friend to Abby. 'Harati at njoj... JA hatar njoj sa svi moj srce ' ( Yes, I am... Look at her... I love her with all my heart... )
' Ti si ispucan , te znati?? ' Vuk said. ( You are crazy, you know ? )
' Da , Ja sam.... ' Luka said, turning back to his friend. ( yes. I am... )
Vuk shook his head.
' Barem , je te donijeti prsten? ' he asked. ( at least, did you bring the ring ? )
Luka amiled and showed his friend a little box. Vuk shook his head, walking back to the group. Luka just smiled and hoped that Abby like this surprised.
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They arrived at Dubrovnikin the afternoon. It was a medieval city, all made of stone and fortifications and narrows streets in the old part of the city. They would be taying at a camping. So they organized that the girls would be in two tents and tho boys would be in the others four tents.
The boys spent the rest of the day put the tents together and the girls did others things.
Andro saw that his brother couldn't stop looking at his girlfriend and shook his head. He was hidding something. He could tell. So he walked, where Javor and Vuk were talking.
' Vuk , Poznajete me što je gombanje Luka? ' he asked. ( Vuk, do you know what is bothering Luka ? )
Vuk looked at Andro.
' Nijedan , ja ne ' he said. ( no, I don't... )
Andro knew he was lying.
' ti si ležanje ' Andro accused. ( you are lying... )
Vuk looked at him. Luka was his best friend, but Andro... the boy was his friend too, but he could be a pain in the @ss.
' Oblièje , ako JA reæi te Luka ide biti mahnit at mene... ' he said. ( Look, if I tell you Luka is going to be mad at me... )
'Sto ? ' Andro insisted. ( what ? )
' Posrijedi je iznenaðenje za Abby... Ja sam ne iduæi u ono što je kazano što posrijedi je tvrd... morate oklijevati. ' Vuk said, sighing. ( it's a surprise for Abby... I'm not going to say what it is tough... you have to wait... )
With that Vuk and Javor walked away, living a corious Andro to wonder about it. Maybe he should ask Luka...
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PS: sorry for those who speaks Croatian if the sentences are wrong... I picked it up from a translation site...
Dani
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