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Post by daniella on Jan 15, 2007 1:40:38 GMT 10
I'll put the last part tonight...
Dani
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Post by lubyfreaky on Jan 15, 2007 5:19:50 GMT 10
WOOOOHOOOO LUKA IS AWAKE and yes flight 93 was very sad
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Post by daniella on Jan 15, 2007 20:56:02 GMT 10
Sorry if i took so long to update... my internet was down.all day yesterday... here it is... it's PG... XXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXX part 23: The End - 1 year later ' You ready ? ' someone said. Luka sighed and nodded. It was the moment that he was waiting for so long. ' Let's go, then... ' When he got out of the room, he saw a lot of people stand in there, even his father and brother with his family. Luka smiled. He turned and listened a music play. It was now or never. Abby was walking towards him, smiling and beautiful. When she got near him, he picked her and and kissed it. She could kiss him right there, but it wasn't the time yet. After a while listening to one person, in general, the looked at each other and said: ' I do... ' The priest smiled and declared them man and wife... The end XXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXX Dani
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Post by jacobsmommy on Jan 15, 2007 21:10:40 GMT 10
That was a great story. I am sorry to see it end. You are so talented when it comes to writing. Keep up the good work.
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Post by daniella on Jan 15, 2007 21:55:49 GMT 10
Thanks... If it's not clear, Luka is allright and isn't paralysed as I put it as a possibility... Dani
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Post by lubyfreaky on Jan 16, 2007 4:13:11 GMT 10
this was just so great!!! and a great end even if it was short!!!! you're an amazing writer!! I love all your fics! hope you write more
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Post by hollygirl on Jan 16, 2007 4:40:07 GMT 10
great fic!!! glad Luka was ok. and very glad they were married!!
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Post by daniella on Jan 16, 2007 8:36:57 GMT 10
Thanks... I'll thin on more stories... right now... I'll be with the two that i already have, but I'll let you know when I thought about more stories...
Dani
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Post by lubyfreaky on Jan 17, 2007 1:44:39 GMT 10
okay can't wait!
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Duchess of Luby
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Post by kia on Jan 17, 2007 4:43:42 GMT 10
wow, that was a great ending...a wedding...beautiful and romantic!! i just love all your stories. bravo dani!!
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Post by daniella on Jan 17, 2007 13:13:22 GMT 10
Thank you... Dani
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Post by rorygilmore on Jan 17, 2007 15:41:58 GMT 10
Wow! Good Job, Dani! I had a good time reading your little fic; you had me sweating... and crying... and smiling Liked it very, very, very much!
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Post by daniella on Jan 17, 2007 21:16:57 GMT 10
Thanks... Dani
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