kia
Duchess of Luby
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Post by kia on Jan 4, 2007 5:52:50 GMT 10
surprise? I love your surprises! i can't wait!
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Post by strizzy on Jan 4, 2007 6:10:21 GMT 10
Brilliant story!!! Can't wait for the next update!
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Post by daniella on Jan 4, 2007 10:00:54 GMT 10
Update... it's PG - 13
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part 12: Conversation between the FAA an the passengers.
Abby was in the airport center control, looking at the screen of the radar, with some men around her: the chief of security of the airport, the guy that was responsible for the radar and some flight commanders.
They were apprehensive because the couldn't get the flight to respond any message that they sent.
While they were waiting the last message to be responded, Abby's phone rang. she looked at it and knew it was Luka.
' Luka ... ' she called.
' Where are you ? 'he asked quietly.
' I'm on the airport... I made it the center control... 'she said. 'Listen, they're not respond to any message we are sending... '
He sighed. She was silent for a few seconds.
' Let me talk with him... ' whispered the chief of security.
' Look, someone here wants to speak with you... ' she said before handling to the security guard her phone.
' What's hes name ? ' the guard asked Abby.
' Luka... ' she said.
The guard turned to Luka.
' My name is Anthony Gibes...' said the guard ' What are you seeing, Luka ? '
' I'm seeing two men... one has a guy and the other a bomb... ' Luka whispered. ' Probably fake...'
' And what kind of gun they have ? ' he asked.
' I don't know... look see what you can do for us here... ' Luka said.
' We're working on that... ' said the guard.
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Dani
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Post by Rach :) on Jan 4, 2007 21:51:06 GMT 10
oh good they beleive her now but he still needs to get off the plane
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kia
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Post by kia on Jan 5, 2007 0:21:49 GMT 10
save them! i can't resist!
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Post by strizzy on Jan 5, 2007 1:48:06 GMT 10
Great chapter! Hope something can be done now!
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Post by jacobsmommy on Jan 5, 2007 2:05:02 GMT 10
Great update. Please save all of the passengers.
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kcabrasil
Countess of Luby
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Post by kcabrasil on Jan 5, 2007 2:23:18 GMT 10
SAVE LUKA SAVE THE WORLD!
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Post by ladylockhart on Jan 5, 2007 4:21:31 GMT 10
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Post by daniella on Jan 5, 2007 21:32:33 GMT 10
Update... it's PG...
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part 13: working on how to get off the plane - Luka POV
' We're working on that... ' said the guard. How, I wonder... we're up here and they're down there.
Suddenly, I heard a voice on the speaker, with all the other passengers.
' I know that you're thinking that we are crazy, but we're not... just wanted to call the attention of the world about our situation... ' said the one hijacker. He is the cabin. 'I'll took the airplane over... the pilots are dead and if you burst here like in September 11, I'll put her down... now the US should attend some of our exigencies... I'll pass it for the... '
He stops talking and I can see that this made some people hysterical. The other two hijackers let the passengers be, for now...
I sighed and after a few minutes, resolved to call Abby again.. I know what is going to happen. it may be the only way...
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Short, I know... but I'll write the next one bigger...
dani
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kia
Duchess of Luby
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Post by kia on Jan 5, 2007 22:06:59 GMT 10
I know what is going to happen. Luka knows what's going to happen? i don't know! so, update!! love your story!
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kcabrasil
Countess of Luby
Could I be more mess up?
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Post by kcabrasil on Jan 6, 2007 0:29:41 GMT 10
what??? please don't make us wait long...
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Post by daniella on Jan 6, 2007 9:10:36 GMT 10
Update... please, don't hate me...
PG - 13...
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part 14: the last call...
Abby picked up her ringing cell phone. She knew that was Luka.
' Luka.. 'she said..
' Hi... ' he said. ' Listen, can you pass your phone to Anthony... I need to speak with him... '
Abby sighed.
' He wants to speak with you... ' she said, giving him the phone.
Anthony picked it up.
' Hello ? '
'Anthony ? 'asked Luka. ' Listen I need you to do a favor for me... '
' Hum - hum... 'said Anthony, listening.
' I don't think we will escape, so... ' Luka said, but stooped for a few seconds. ' 'So, I need you to... can you tell the army or something to put us down? '
' What ? ' Anthony asked.
'I'm at loss here myself... I can't do or... think anything better than this... and if there is a solution, please, tell me... ' said Luka.
Anthony realized he was desperate. He looked at Abby and the others.
' I'll speak with Donald and see what he can do... ' he said.
' Thanks... ' Luka said. ' Now let me speak with Abby... '
Anthony passed the phone back to her.
' Hi... ' she said, with a sad smile.
Anthony knew that this was the better chance he had to speak with the others.
' Hi, there... 'said Luka. ' How you're holding up ? '
' Its difficult... 'said Abby.
She heard Luka sighed.
'Abby, I want you to listen carefully... ' Luka said. ' You probably heard me talking with Anthony... '
She had tears in her eyes. She closed her eyes and nodded.
'Yeah... 'she whispered.
'I know it's difficult, but this guys are dangerous... ' said Luka. ' I... we can't let them hurt people... '
' I know... ' said Abby.
' I just want you to know that I love you and you're the love of my life... 'said Luka. 'And... i want us to marry, if I escape this... '
' I want to marry you, Luka... ' she said, crying. ' I love you so much... '
She was crying hard, but knew he was too.
' Please, be safe... 'she said.
' I'll try... ' Luka said. ' Now, I want you to be happy... please, move on if I can't make it... '
Abby staid quiet. She couldn't accepted it.
' Abby promise me... 'Luka repeated.
' I... promisse... 'she said, miserably.
Luka sighed again.
' Okay... I need to go now... ' he said. 'I love you... '
' I love you too... 'said Abby.
She didn't hang up her phone, even if she heard him hang up.
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Dani
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kia
Duchess of Luby
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Post by kia on Jan 6, 2007 9:16:15 GMT 10
[glow=red,2,300]WHAT??? [/glow] you can't do that...you can't!! pls, let him be ok, pls...
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kcabrasil
Countess of Luby
Could I be more mess up?
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Post by kcabrasil on Jan 6, 2007 10:21:15 GMT 10
there's no such a thing like luka die... are you insane???
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