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Post by daniella on Dec 24, 2006 12:20:17 GMT 10
Hey... another story...
This isn't going to be part of my regular stories... I saw United 93 today and it gave me an idea... so this haven't got anything to do with A long day and Life, proposal ... and marriage...
Abby and Luka just started to date again after he came back from Africa and healed from Malaria... Abby started med school again... Luka came back to County General...
Hope you like the start...
The Trip PG/ PG - 13/ R for violence ( I'll let you know when it changes... )
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part 1: preparation ( PG )
Luka's apartment 08:42 AM
Abby was sitting in the bed while Luka was finishing pack.
' I just want to knew why are you going... she said.
' Because Weaver asked me too... ' he said.
He was going to a conference in LA and would be back in four days.
' I know, but why she didn't asked Pratt or Jing - Mei to go ? Or even Susan ? ' asked Abby.
' I don't know, Abby... ' Luka said. ' Maybe she trust ' in ' me to actually go to the conference... '
' It's just trust me, Luka... ' she corrected him.
Luka said while closing his bag. He picked it up and walked away from his bedroom. Abby followed him. She was going to let him at the airport. She had class today, but didn't want go.
Picking up her keys, she sighed. Luka smiled a little and kissed her.
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Dani
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Post by hollygirl on Dec 24, 2006 12:28:37 GMT 10
I saw that movie. It was really good. my mom knew the guy that played the pilot.... have you also seen 'World Trade Center'? if you haven't, I recommend it. It was soooo good. I saw it opening day...
I hope you aren't planning on putting Luka on a plane, that is going to crash... that would be horrible!!! Please update soon!!
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Post by daniella on Dec 24, 2006 12:41:41 GMT 10
I saw World Trade Center.too... I liked it but I liked more United 93... it was better done I think... But, about Luka yuo have to read the story... I'm not going to reveal nothing now... Dani
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Post by lubyfreaky on Dec 24, 2006 19:30:04 GMT 10
Great Start and when you let Luka on a plane crash..... But I´m sure you won´t let it!
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Post by daniella on Dec 24, 2006 22:10:15 GMT 10
Update...
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part 2: the airport
09:37 AM
After parking the car, Abby went with Luka to do the check - in. There were some people in front of them.
' Do you want me to go and buy you a cup of coffee ? ' asked Abby.
' I'm not that hungry... ' said Luka, putting his hand on her waist.
Abby smiled and tip - toed to kiss him. Just after a few seconds, a guy cleared his throat and nodded to the line.
' Sorry... ' said Luka, walking with the line. Abby blushed a little and followed him.
After the check - in, they walked to the walked to the embarkation area. The sat in the two seats that were free. Luka holded Abby in his arms, kissing her softly.
' I'm going miss you, you know ? ' she asked.
' Yeah, me too... but I call you when I arrive... and maybe we can have phone sex if you want... ' said Luka smiling.
She blushed and looked at him. He never did this before. This means he's really changing.
' Well, it's time for me to go... ' he said.
They kissed for a few seconds and parted. getting up. Luka picked his suitcase and walked to the embarkation gate. He turned his head to Abby and smiled.
' I love you... ' he said.
' I love you too ' she said.
They didn't notice, but there was a worried guy behind Luka.
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PS: Didn't want to put any race or any coutry in this story to be the bad guy ( s ) because I don't want to judge anyone... it's a question of not being a racist...
Dani
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Post by lubyfreaky on Dec 25, 2006 1:14:47 GMT 10
Great Update
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Post by hollygirl on Dec 25, 2006 6:08:32 GMT 10
oh please don't let the worried man.... take over the plane, and crash it!!!!
PLEASE LET LUKA HAVE A SAFE TRIP!!! orrrrr. maybe he shouldn't go at all....
UPDATE SOON!!
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Post by daniella on Dec 25, 2006 6:55:47 GMT 10
Update... sorry, it's short but I'll make up to you...
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part 3: The flight
In the airplane, Luka picked his place in the economic class. The plane wasn't be crowded, though. There was a little grlr with his mother, some guys on business and a couple of couples together. They were flying for twnety minutes.
He sighed and closing his eyes, thinking about Abby.
' Can I give you something, sir ? ' asked a voicce.
Luka opened his eyes. There was a flight attendent in front of him.
' No, I'm okay... 'he said, smiling a little. ' Thanks... '
She nodded and stteped away. Luka sighed again. Then he heard a comotion...
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Dani
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Post by hollygirl on Dec 25, 2006 7:15:03 GMT 10
noooooo! you cant stop there!!! I don't like this commotion...... update again soon.
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Post by daniella on Dec 25, 2006 7:23:02 GMT 10
I'll update tonight or tomorrow... I'm promisse... now, we are preparing the party...
Dani
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Post by daniella on Dec 25, 2006 14:45:33 GMT 10
Just finished the Christmas party... it was cool... and now I have time to post another part of the story...
It's still short and it's PG - 13...
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part 4: the highjack
Luka didn't know what happenend. At first there was shouts and screams of the passangers of the first class. Then, they ran to the economic class, with a man behind them.
' We've taken the plane...' said the man. ' Don't do anything or we'll put this plane on the ground... '
The flights attendents were all in the back and the passagers, in the most part men, were trying to stay calm and let their wives or girlfriends tranqüils. He tryid to stay calm himself, but didn't pass for a situation like that. He first thought was Abby.
Another man appeared and walk to the first one. This one had a bomb. Luka tried not to atare, but it was difficult. His hands were sweat and he tried not to move.
The two men spoke in a language he didn't know or in a broken English, when they wanted to treaten the passagers.
' Listen very well... 'said the one with the bomb. 'Don't try anything or I'll explode the plane... '
Luka sighed and wished to be in some place else, with the love of hs life...
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Dani
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Post by hollygirl on Dec 25, 2006 15:04:52 GMT 10
DON'T BLOW UP THE PLANE!!!!! ahhh! I can't belive you stopped it there!! I need to know what happens.. update again, very soon!!!
MERRY CHRISTMAS
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Post by daniella on Dec 26, 2006 0:07:41 GMT 10
Update...
It's PG - 13...
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part 5 : talking with the others passengers
' Why are they doing this ? ' asked a woman.
' I don't know... ' said another man.
' Do you remember 09/11 ? They are going to explode our plane... ' said another man.
Luka turned his head.
' Please, be quiet... ' he said to the passengers.
The looked at him.
' We don't know anything now, let just stay quiet... ' he said
' He 's right... ' said another man.
' Well, I can't stay quiet when that man is threaten us with a bomb... ' said the first man.
Luka looked at him.
' We don't know if the bomb is real... ' he said.
' Of course we do... ' said the first man. ' He is threaten us, isn't he ? '
' It can't be real if he passed in the metal detector.. ' said Luka.
' It's plastic explosives... 'said the first man, ' It doesn't appear on the metal detector... '
' But they are more careful now... ' said Luka. ' Or do you think that after what happened on 09/11 isn't enough ? They wouldn't have let him on the plane... '
He looked at the two men, standing there. They were somewhat scared too. Luka knew he needed to do something...
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Dani
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Post by steffi1986 on Dec 26, 2006 5:12:42 GMT 10
oh no Luka don't do anything please update soon
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Post by daniella on Dec 26, 2006 9:55:36 GMT 10
Going to update tomorrow...
Dani
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