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Post by daniella on Nov 14, 2006 22:07:03 GMT 10
well, you see it in the fourth part... writting the third now...
Dani
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Post by jadestar on Nov 15, 2006 0:27:59 GMT 10
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Post by lubyfreaky on Nov 15, 2006 3:25:24 GMT 10
oh canĀ“t wait too
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Post by steffi1986 on Nov 15, 2006 3:28:10 GMT 10
OMG this is really exciting, I can't wait for the next parts
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Post by ERFanRach on Nov 15, 2006 5:57:24 GMT 10
Great Update!!!!!!
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Post by strizzy on Nov 15, 2006 6:58:41 GMT 10
Great update!!!
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Post by daniella on Nov 15, 2006 9:21:46 GMT 10
I had to go out so I didn't finished the third part... I'm finishing it now and putiing into English... Maybe I'll post it today... maybe tomorrow...
Dani
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Post by ERFanRach on Nov 15, 2006 10:03:22 GMT 10
Update Soon!!!
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Post by daniella on Nov 15, 2006 14:48:39 GMT 10
Third part is her...
I'm going to change the rating of the story to NC - 17 for violence, because i thing it will be getting worse in the next parts, so be aware...
The third part maybe NC - 17...
County General 11:54 AM
Abby and Luka walked out of Exam One.She had consulted Luka after reading her patient's tests results, that now was going to be admitted on Oncology to do more tests, after a long talk.
' Thanks Luka... she said, walking through the hallway.' It was hard to convince her that she needed to be admitted here...'
' You're welcome...' he said, stopping.
When Abby didn't stop, he grab her arm gently, making her turning around.
' Listen, when is your lunch break ? ' he asked her quietly.
' Well, it will be... ' she said, looking at her watch. ' In less then ten minutes... Susan and I are going to Doc Magoo's because we don't have much time... when is your's ? '
' In a little while...' he said. 'I'll meet you there...'
' Okay...'she said, kissing him quickly.
' We'll be waiting...' Abby said.
She started to walk away, when Luka asked:
' Hey, what did you said to them earlier in the lobby ? '
Abby turned to look at him and without stopping her walking, she smiled.
' We're even... ' she said.
With this, she turned and walked away, leaving Luka standing there, looking lost. ----------
West Liberty Bank Same time
The group of thieves were taking the money bags upstairs when they heard sirens, a lot of lauds sirens.One thief, walked to the window and looked between the blinders.
' S@#t, we are enclosed... 'he said. 'what are we going to do ? '
' I already thought of that... ' said the leader. ' Plan b... let's get out by the back...'
They took the bags up and went downstairs again, making their way to the emergency exit, that were near the safe's room. They walked quickly towards it.
' Rafe is waiting for us...' said the leader.
One of the men ran in front of the group and opened the door, when a shot has heard.. The thief fell down with the impact of the bullet, but his hand were in his gun, so when he was falling, the gun went off. The bullets hit the police officer twice, making him fall too.
Another thief went and picked up the hurt one and helped him to get up.
' And now ? 'asked another one.
' Let's get out of here...'said the leader. They get out quickly and walked to the van, which was parked behind the bank. But there were something wrong. The engine was turned on, but Rafe wasn't in anyplace. The leader went to the front of the van and saw that inside Rafe fell against the wheel, blood in the corner of his mouth and two gunshots in the win shield. He was probably dead.
' S@#T... ' the leader said, walking to the other side.
He opened the van's door and pushed Rafe th the side. Sating down, he felt for a pulse. It was weak, but there. But before he closed the door, he looked outside and saw the officer in the ground. The officer looked at him for a few seconds, before the leader take his gun and shot Him in the head and close the door.
' All set ? The shot's probably startled the police, we have to go...' the leader said, turning around.
The thieves were finishing to put the bags in the van and when the last thief outside was going to enter, he received a gunshot in the heel.
' Aaaahhhhh...'he shouted. Two hands put him in the van and close the door.
' Let's go... said the leader, putting the van in movement, while the officer that was in the corner ran off, talking in his radio to call back up. ---------- Dani
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Mitsi1819
Marquise of Luby
Somewhere, Somehow, I'll Find You..
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Post by Mitsi1819 on Nov 15, 2006 23:06:51 GMT 10
Great Update
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Post by daniella on Nov 15, 2006 23:58:33 GMT 10
Thanks... Writting the fourth now... finally the stories are going to mix with one another
Dani
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Post by lubyfreaky on Nov 16, 2006 0:12:45 GMT 10
great update
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Post by steffi1986 on Nov 16, 2006 6:12:47 GMT 10
wow really amazing >:(please update soon
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nandafm
Marquise of Luby
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Post by nandafm on Nov 16, 2006 6:33:57 GMT 10
Oh God Oh God Oh God!!! They goint to county...
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Post by *Natalie* on Nov 16, 2006 7:47:57 GMT 10
This is brillient natalie x
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