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Post by jadestar on Nov 19, 2006 11:33:03 GMT 10
great updates, very exciting - can't wait for more!!!
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Post by daniella on Nov 20, 2006 0:07:37 GMT 10
This chapter is PG - 13... hope you like it...
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Luka put his stethoscope in his neck and sighed. He finished one more patient. It was a difficult day today.
' Jerry, I'm going to have lunch... ' he said, passing the reception.
Jerry nodded. Carter, that was erasing a patient's name from the board, heard that and asked:
' Can I go with you ? '
' Sure.. ' Luka said, putting his hands on each side of the stethoscope that was in his neck. ' Susan and Abby are there for a while now... '
Carter nodded. He Lift the board to its place and walked out the reception, following Luka out the ER.
' So, what are you guys doing for Valentine's day ? ' Carter asked.
' Abby and I are going out... I'm preparing a surprise for her... Luka said. ' You ? '
' Well, not really sure... Susan has to work... ' Carter said.
' Ah, well... I still think you coul... Luka was saying, but stopped when he saw what's was going on. Carter looked from the floor to what get Luka's attention.
There were various police cars, parked in the street, with the lights on, but no sirens. There was a van crashed near and police barriers on the street and on the entrance of the ER. Police officers were talking and shouting, orders were being said and there was even some men from ESU.
'Why didn't someone told us about this ? ' asked Carter, walking toward and officer. ' Excuse - me ? '
The officer turned around.
'What's going on here ? ' asked Carter, with Luka behind him.
' You are ? ' asked the officer.
' Dr. John Carter and Dr. Luka Kovac... said Carter.
'Well, there were a little incident... 'said the officer.
' Come on, we can see that this is no little incident... ' said Carter.
The officer looked at him and at Luka, considering what he would say to them.
' Some bank robbers that we were chasing crashed and went inside that dinner...' the officer said finally.
'Are there any hostages with them ? ' asked Luka, worrying about Abby and Susan.
The officer looked at them. They were visible worried.
' We don't know... 'said the officer. ' The dinner was getting ready for lunch...'
Luka turned to the side and passed his hand over his face and Carter put his hands on his waist, sighing. The officer looked at them.
' Our girlfriends are in there... ' said Carter, passing his hand on his hair.
The officer looked at them, but called his Sargent.
' Sargeant... '
' What? ' he shouted. ' I don't have time, Cooper... we are in the middle of a situation... '
' I know, but you really want to come here... '
The Sargent sighed and walk toward his subordinate.
'This better be good Cooper... ' the sergeant said.
' Well, this are Dr. Carter and Dr.... ? said the officer.
' Kovac... 'said Luka. ' Look, we really need to go there... '
' Sorry, we don't know what's going on over there... ' said the sergeant. ' Once that it's all clear, we call you... '
'No, you don't understand... ' said Luka. ' Our girlfriends are in there...'
The sergeant looked at them.
'Okay, you two come with me... '
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Dani
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Post by lubyfreaky on Nov 20, 2006 2:50:43 GMT 10
Excitingly great update
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Post by ERFanRach on Nov 20, 2006 6:00:58 GMT 10
Great Update!!!!!!!
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Mitsi1819
Marquise of Luby
Somewhere, Somehow, I'll Find You..
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Post by Mitsi1819 on Nov 20, 2006 6:17:54 GMT 10
Great update!
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Post by ninabrasil (Marina) on Nov 20, 2006 20:48:00 GMT 10
Hey Daniella. I just read the whole story and it's great!! Can't wait to see what happens next. Please let Abby and Susan be okay.
Nina xx
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Post by daniella on Nov 20, 2006 21:27:46 GMT 10
Thank you... I'm glad you are liking it... Dani
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Post by josefine on Nov 20, 2006 22:48:30 GMT 10
course' we do update soon!!!
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Post by jadestar on Nov 21, 2006 3:20:37 GMT 10
I agree, like this story very much... *bites fingernails* want to see Abby and Susan safe
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Post by daniella on Nov 22, 2006 0:15:04 GMT 10
hey, this is really short and Pg - 13... just to keep you girls interested till the next part... XXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXX Luka and Carter were standing, near the ESU truck.They had discussed a plan about the best way to contact the thieves. After a long conversations over the phone, they agree to let the two doctors enter and treat the wounded. They also made sure that Abby and Susan were all right. Now, another cop was putting a small camera on Luka's coat and two microphones in Carter's. ' Don't do anything that call theirs atentions... ' said the sergeant. ' But, aren't they going to search us ? asked Carter eying the cop and his microphones. ' That's what we're hopping for... ' said the sergeant ' Thar's why we are hiding a smaller microphone on you... they are going to discover the big one... ' ' But not the ohter... ' completed Luka. The sergeant nodded. Carter looked at them and nodded too, visible nervous. Now they were ready for the action. The police officer give them their coats. The sergeant speak while they put theirs coats on. ' Remember, try to speak with them during the exams and Luka... try to show us their guns or faces... ' Luka and Carter nodded. ' Okay, let's go... ' said the sergeant. Luka and Carter walked towards Doc Maggo's feeling everyones eyes on them. The police had isolated the area, putting barriers on both ways of the street and in the entrance of the hospital. Nurses and doctors were there, looking forward to the plan to go right and to them to be safe.. Luka and Carter continued to walk toward the dinner. ' I'm so nervous....'said Carter.' i never did this... ' ' I did... ' said Luka.' In the war...' Carter looked at Luka but didn't say anything. ' We are here... silence now... ' said Luka , knocking on the door. XXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXX Dani
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Post by ERFanRach on Nov 22, 2006 3:29:47 GMT 10
Great Update!!!!!!!!!!
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Post by daniella on Nov 22, 2006 9:18:57 GMT 10
Doing next chapter, but I'll only update it on thurday... tomorrow is a busy day for me... so...
Dani
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Post by daniella on Nov 23, 2006 4:50:51 GMT 10
Doing the translation now... i think i'll pust ti today and not Thurday as I said before... Dani
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Post by jadestar on Nov 23, 2006 21:36:41 GMT 10
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Marquise of Luby
Somewhere, Somehow, I'll Find You..
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Post by Mitsi1819 on Nov 23, 2006 23:27:47 GMT 10
Great update !!
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