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Post by daniella on Nov 16, 2006 10:34:52 GMT 10
Posting the part A of the fourth chapter... hope you liked it...
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County General 12:06 PM
Abby was looking at a magazine while waiting for Susan on the ER reception. After a few seconds, Susan arrived putting a chart on the discharge pile. She graned.
' You're okay ? ' asked Abby after looking at her.
' Sometimes, the patients make me so irritated... ' Susan said. ' But I'm glad it's my luch hour... '
She turned around the counter, meeting Abby and said to Jerry:
' Only beep me in fourty - five minutes...I don't want to know what's appening or if a patient is dying or if the world is finishing... nothing... '
' But, if Weaver calls ? ' he asked.
' Specially not her...' said Susan 'Don't call me for anything...'
' Okay, Dr. Lewis... daid Jerry.
Abby smiled and they walked outside. Just in this minute, a anbulance parked. The paramedic got out.
' Hey, Susan... Abby... ' said the paramédic. ' Can you pick this case ? '
' No,... said Abby and Susan. both at the same time.
' We're on our break... ' said Susan. ' Call someone inside...'
The paramedic nodded and rolled the gourney inside, as Abby and Susan walked to Doc Maggo's. They were crossing the street, when a van came in a hurry in same the street...
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Post by lubyfreaky on Nov 16, 2006 23:48:38 GMT 10
oh oh update soon
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Post by daniella on Nov 17, 2006 0:56:38 GMT 10
I will... just will post it tomorrow...
Dani
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Mitsi1819
Marquise of Luby
Somewhere, Somehow, I'll Find You..
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Post by Mitsi1819 on Nov 17, 2006 1:02:50 GMT 10
I can't wait...
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Post by luby4eva06 on Nov 17, 2006 1:05:03 GMT 10
great update
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Post by rorygilmore on Nov 17, 2006 2:09:28 GMT 10
NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO! i DON'T LIKE THAT VAN!!!
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Post by josefine on Nov 17, 2006 5:42:44 GMT 10
Great update =)
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Post by steffi1986 on Nov 17, 2006 5:50:22 GMT 10
OMG please update soon
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Post by *Natalie* on Nov 17, 2006 7:14:41 GMT 10
Uh oh... Susan/Abby + Van = Trouble i'm supecting
Update soon
natalie x
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Post by daniella on Nov 17, 2006 19:23:40 GMT 10
The rest of the chapter... don't be mad at me, just wait and see what happens...
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The van was coming in a hurry, but the leader saw two women crossing the street. He quickly steeped on the breaks and turned the wheel. They scared her selves while the van crashed in another car, that was parked. The two doctors looked at each other, frightened.
' Oh, my God... 'said Susan while Abby went to see the victims.
She followed Abby and could see that in the front seats, was a man, trying to focus, because of the crash.
' Sir, can you hear me ? ' asked Abby.
When she didn't have an answer, Abby put her hand inside the cabin, to check the man's vitals, when he grabbed her hand. Abby, scared, tried to pull her hand out, but he was grabbing it strongly. Susan, seeing it, stepped back and when she turned to go back to the hospital, to call help. one hand in her shoulder stooped her. Her blood froze, when the hand spun her around again.
' Don't try anything... ' the man in front of her said, putting his gun on the small of her back. the man looked at Abby, still whispering in Susan's ear. ' Or she dies... '
Susan nodded, looking in front of her and to Abby. She could see that the other woman was scared to death.
The man grabbing Abby's hand, was now of the van and was grabbing her neck.
' What we are going to do ? ' asked another thief, running close the their leader. Sirens could be heard, still weakly, but near. ' The police will be arriving soon... '
' Come... ' the leader said. He pressed Abby's neck. She closed here eyes, while trying to get his hands out, but he was stronger. He gave her a jostle, hissing and turned around to go to the dinner in front of him, while still grabbing Abby for her neck. ' You, take the money... quickly...'
When they entered the dinner, a waitress and the cooker were preparing the orders. There were three others people in there: two nurses, Lidya and Ioshy (that came back after a few years) and another man, that started at the hospital two days ago. The thieves pointed their guns to them and without pity, shot them once, twice or three times in the chest and head. One of them, went to the kitchen and shot the cooker. Anther one did the same with the waitress. Abby and Susan closed their eyes and were hearing just the shots. At least the, the didn't see the horrible scene.
' You two, don't move...' Said the leader, pushing Abby toward a table. She hit the table, but was able to keep on her feet. She started to cough roughly. Susan helped her and both sat on the seats, one in front of the other.They were scared to death.
' Are you okay, Abby ? 'Susan asked, trying to be stronger, but it was difficult with the situation.
Abby continued to cough. Tears rolled down her cheeks and her hands trembled.
The rest of the group, three on the total, entered with the money bags.
' You two... ' said the leader to two thieves that were beside him. ' Close the blinders... '
The did as were told. Susan tried to whisper to Abby, that was trying to recover her breath. Her hands went to her neck slowly. She knew the thief's fingers would leave a mark, and Luka...
' Oh, my God... ' she whispered. ' Luka... '
' What ? ' asked Susan quietly.
' He and Carter will be here in a few minutes...'Abby said. ' Or, at least, he will...'
'Hey, stop talking... 'said one of the thieves. ' Or I kill you...'
Abby looked at him for a few seconds. The thief walked toward her and raised his hand to hit her, but the leader stopped him. She flinched.
'Let them alone and concentrate.. ' said him.
The thief looked at her and walked away. The leader looked at Abby and Susan for a moment, but turned.
Abby closed her eyes and Susan took a deep breath. It would be a game of waiting what would happen, and be a long day...
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Post by daniella on Nov 17, 2006 23:07:16 GMT 10
Sorry, I forgot to post the rating... I don't know if this chapter is PG - 15 or NC - 17 for violence... even so, I'll be more careful for now on...
Dani
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Post by starbuck on Nov 18, 2006 6:20:18 GMT 10
Great update
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Post by steffi1986 on Nov 18, 2006 6:33:47 GMT 10
really great update please do it again soon
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Post by *Natalie* on Nov 18, 2006 7:27:24 GMT 10
Brill update! Hope Luka and Carter get their soon and save them natalie x
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Post by daniella on Nov 18, 2006 10:06:39 GMT 10
Doing the next part... íll see if I post it Sunday, because tomorrow I have a wedding to go...
Dani
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