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Post by <3 LubyII <3 on Oct 24, 2006 5:55:12 GMT 10
Great update!
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Post by jadestar on Oct 24, 2006 5:56:33 GMT 10
sweet lovely update - but Abby should tell Luka about Dennis...
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Post by sofia on Oct 24, 2006 6:21:06 GMT 10
Aww Jaana, I love you! That was so wonderful update!
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Post by Lubyfanatic316 on Oct 24, 2006 6:31:03 GMT 10
Great Update!
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Post by Noora on Oct 25, 2006 0:56:36 GMT 10
You said that you didn't like this chapter, I think that's a lie! This was so sweet, friendship between them is phenomenal. Friends just wanna have fun. Hihii. ^^
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Post by jaana on Oct 25, 2006 4:00:17 GMT 10
"Could you please hurry up, Dennis, or mommy will be late." Abby exclaimed and knocked on the door. "Wait mommy, i'm not ready yet." Abby sighed. She didn't know what he was doing there, probably something bad. Dennis was locked the door and Abby couldn't do nothing. "What are you doing there?" "Nothing." Dennis said and she knew he was smiling. She leaned into the wall and looked impatienty at the ceiling. She was getting angry and she didn't like it. She hated to come down on him, it feels really terrible, ecpecially when Dennis is so kind boy, well, the most of time he is. Abby knocked on the door again and left to listen. She heard a faint voice and then it stopped. Abby glanced at her wrist watch and sighed again. She was going at Luka's place today and wanted to be there in time. Susan should come soon to watch after Dennis while she would be at Luka's. Abby started to lose her patience. "Dennis!" Dennis opened the door and looked at her satisfiedly. "What did you do here?" Abby said walking into the room and stopped when she saw all the toys that Dennis usually tossed on the floor and left them strewing before Abby come and clean them up. But now they all were tidily in their own place and a whole floor wasn't messy. Abby looked surpised at him and kleened down. "Did you do this all by yourself?" "Uh huh, you always yell at me, i thought you would be happy." Dennis said proudly. Abby smiled at him, she knew he was pround, it wasn't easy from little boy to do this all. "You really made me happy, thank you, kiddo." Abby kissed his forehead and ruffled his curls. Dennis smiled and looked around, that little thing made him happy and Abby wondered again, how kids can always be simple and modest, Abby wanted so much to protect him of all bad things. "Pancakes now?" "Oh, now i know why you did this." Abby laughed and picked him up. "You just wanted pancakes, you crafty." "No, i really wanna eat." Dennis explained wrapping his small arms around Abby's neck. "Well, i'm sorry but i can't do them now. Ask auntie Susan to make them when she comes." "You leave?" "Yeah. Mommy has a meeting with Dr. Kovac. He's my friend." "He's nice?" "Yeah, he's really nice." Abby said smiling to him and tried to change a subject. "He's your new boyfriend?" "No! God Dennis, stop asking questions like that." Abby didn't know how he could always be so quick of his mouth. "I'm sorry." There was a knock on the door and Abby laid him down. She hurried to answer the door. It was Susan and Abby let her in. "Hi, i'm sorry i'm late." "It's okay." "So, you and Kovac are going to do, well, you know what." Susan winked. "No Susan, we're just friends. Why don't you can't understand that?" "But-" "Don't even start. I don't want to heard nothing about me and Luka." "Okay, okay. I'll stop." "Good. But now i must go, he's waiting for me already. Say to Dennis bye from me and if something happens, you know where you can find me." "Sure i know." Susan said again winking. Abby slapped her friend's hand, sneered and closed the door behind her. It was an evening and the darkness made her a little nervous, like always. She didn't know how the evening with Luka will go but she hoped the best.
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Post by carsley on Oct 25, 2006 4:06:15 GMT 10
I WANT PANNACCKES TO!! AWESOME, JAAANA!! UPDATE SOOOOOON!!! <333
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Post by ERFanRach on Oct 25, 2006 4:18:52 GMT 10
Great Update!!
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Post by jadestar on Oct 25, 2006 11:23:03 GMT 10
sweet update!!! hope Abby and Luka enjoy their evening together
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Post by Noora on Oct 26, 2006 0:55:20 GMT 10
Aww I love Susan in this fic. She's awesome. Lovely update! Dennis was really cute. Argh I want some pancakes too now!
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Post by jaana on Oct 26, 2006 4:32:25 GMT 10
"Can i come in?" "Of course you can, that's why i invited you to come here." Luka grinned and shifted a little. "Thanks." Abby nodded and entered Luka's apartment. At first sigh she thought Luka's apartment was like every man's who lives alone; manlike. She didn't pay attention to mess but walked the steps down and looked around. There was a little messy, yes, but the mess just made the apartment cosy. She turned around to see Luka and nodded acceptably. "Here's nice." "I'm glad you like it, i didn't find time to clean this place up." Luka explained walking into the kitchen. He lifted his unfinished supper and put them into the kitchen sink. It was strange to see Luka in his apartment, doing his usual duty. Abby saw a different Luka, he wasn't on edge anymore, he was relaxed now. Abby preened her hair and sat on the sofa. Luka glanced at her and smiled. Abby gave him a small smile and then turned her head away. It was strange to sit and do nothing as well. Luka walked over her and sat next to her. Abby got distant instantly. "Relax Abby." "What?" "Relax a little, i'm not going to eat you or something." Luka laughed. "Oh, i'm sorry." Abby sneered and rubbed her forehead. "I'm just a little uncomfortable, Luka." "Me too but i'm not showing it like you do." Luka winked and placed his hand on Abby's thigh. Like friends do. She repeated that in her mind and felt herself even more uncomfortable when Luka touched her. Though she wanted that but it was still unusual. "Oh, you're right. I shouldn't show it." Abby said and tried to relax a little and not pay attention to her leg. "Um, Luka, i think i should tell you something." "I hope it's nothing serious?" Luka joked. "No, it's not. Just, well, can we talk about it later?" Abby said. She funked again, she couldn't understand why she always do it, when she plucked up the courage, she always did the same, funked. It wasn't fair to Luka, and not to Dennis too. "Sure. Want some pizza now?" "That's a good idea." Abby nodded smiling, she will tell it but not now. "Well, i have to go now. Thanks for the great evening, i had fun." Abby said putting her coat on. She wrapped a scarf around her neck and Luka just looked at her. He's doing it all the time now when she's with him. He was in love with her and was ready to admit it. He was so in love with her that he realised that he had put himself into the dead end. It was stupid to act like friends, he was sure that Abby felt the same way. Her motions and looks exposed it. For example today, he put his hand on Abby's thigh and felt Abby quivering. It was enough to show he was right, she really felt the same way as he did. "It was my pleasure." Luka smiled and opened the door. He didn't want to evict her, of course not, but he thought it would be easier if he won't do something stupid before it's too late. Abby looked at the cold night and changed weight to the other leg. They didn't say a word, silence was enough to them. "Um, i really have to go now." Abby said looking at Luka. "Yeah, i'm sorry that i hang you back." "It's nothing. Well, bye, see ya tomorrow." Abby said and swung her hand. Luka took place between the door and watched how Abby walked through the door of fence. Abby looked so sweet, so incredible sweet. Luka hurried after her and reached her. Abby heard a quick steps behind her and turned. Luka was before her and his gaze walked over her body. Her hair and eyes and everything made him going crazy. He put his hand up and Abby looked at him wondering what he will say, her eyes waited for his answer. Luka stroked her cheek and she trembled a little but didn't pull back. "Good night." Luka said softly before leaning in and planting a gentle kiss on her lips. --------------
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Post by strizzy on Oct 26, 2006 5:54:29 GMT 10
Nice start
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Post by sofia on Oct 26, 2006 6:00:05 GMT 10
Awesome! Update soooon!
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Post by Lubyfanatic316 on Oct 26, 2006 6:24:05 GMT 10
Great Update!
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Post by *Natalie* on Oct 26, 2006 7:04:34 GMT 10
Hey just read everything and this is great! Hope theres more to come natalie x
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