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Post by charlieluby on Aug 30, 2006 20:44:13 GMT 10
2 become 1
Background Information:
Abby and Luka got together when they both first joined County General hospital. The relationship had a lot of baggage and with the strain of it all they had a fight and both gave up on their relationship. A few weeks later Abby discovered she was pregnant and they both decided to keep the baby. However, they decided to stay friends whilst Abby was pregnant and maybe discuss the possibility of being more than just friends when the baby was born. Nine months later Abby gave birth to a beautiful baby girl, which they named Isabella, often shortened to Izzy. The early years were hectic as they always are and the conversation of being friends or more never came up, not that they didn’t both think of bringing it up from time to time. No, Abby and Luka had both gotten very close to discussing the possibility of ‘us’ but both had gotten too nervous and backed out. Izzy lives with Abby and Luka lives only a few buildings away. He often takes out and visits her every weekend but wishes that he could spend more time with her. But with them both juggling work and looking after Izzy it was hard for them to spend time together as a family. Much to all of there dismay, especially Izzy’s.
Should i post the first chapter? Tell me what you think.
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Post by jadestar on Aug 30, 2006 20:54:00 GMT 10
oh yeah, that sounds interesting to me - so keep going!
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Post by Luby14 on Aug 30, 2006 21:05:12 GMT 10
Yes, You should! and very soon!!
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Post by Maryna on Aug 31, 2006 0:52:01 GMT 10
yes! can't wait to read it!
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Post by steffi1986 on Aug 31, 2006 1:00:13 GMT 10
yeah post it, I can't wait to read it
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Post by charlieluby on Aug 31, 2006 5:49:10 GMT 10
Chapter One:
“Izzy hurry up darling Daddy will be here soon!” I shout across the hall into Izzy’s bedroom. I apply the finishing touches to my hair in an attempt to look half as good as I know very well Luka will look. The doorbell goes and I check myself one more time before running down the stairs and opening the door. “Hey Abby. You look great as usual,” he says and kisses my cheek. I smile. That is my favourite bit of the whole week. The smell of his aftershave, the roughnesses of his skin…stop daydreaming Abby! “Hey Luka. Izzy is just putting on her new dress. We went shopping yesterday. She wants to look perfect for you. She’s been up there for half an hour. IZZY!” I say and shout up to her. “Half an hour! She’s only seven!” he says chuckling. He is still standing close and the aroma of him is making me dizzy. Speaking of dizzy here comes Iz! She does a twirl. She does look beautiful. She has dark hair, which falls into ringlets just below her shoulders. She really is gorgeous. She runs over to Luka and he picks her up spinning her around. “Whooo!” she giggles. Her smile lights up the room and my heart skips a beat. “Don’t you look beautiful? You’re just like your mummy,”he says kissing her nose. Oh there goes another beat. This guy should come with a health warning. I blush profoundly. He winks at me and Izzy watches intently with a furrowed brow.
“Guess where Daddy is taking you today?” he says and pulls her closer towards him. I can’t help but smile. It’s a real photo moment. “I dunno. Where daddy?” she says giggling. “Well it has monkeys aaand bears and…” he starts. She screams. “The zoo!” she screams and he chuckles. “But there’s just one thing…” he says and leans in to whisper in her ear. She looks like she is concentrating hard and I smile. He is so great with her. The best father a girl could ask for. She suddenly giggles and Luka nods. She hugs him and jumps down from his arms. She runs over to me and gets on her knees holding her hands together. “PLEEEEASE can you come with us to the zoo. I really want you to and so does Daddy. PLEASE!” she says and I smile. We never go out as a family. “Don’t forget the eyes,”Luka says and she looks like she has remembered something. She looks at me and starts to make puppy eyes at me. As if she needs to convince me. I pause and bend down and she bats her eyes at me. “Of course I will!” I whisper in her ear giggling. Luka whoops and cheers like a kid to humour Izzy. I laugh loudly. Suddenly he comes running towards us and picks Izzy up. “No daddy. No!” she screams and I no what’s coming. “Izzy sandwich!” he shouts. He sandwiches Izzy between us and we plaster her with kisses hugging her tightly. She is so little and I can feel Luka’s arms round my back. We smile at each other. “Let me go!” says a muffled voice from between us. She begins to wriggle. I pull away and he swings her onto his shoulders. And we’re off!
Please let me know what you think.xx
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Post by *Natalie* on Aug 31, 2006 7:25:21 GMT 10
Great start! Hope you carry on
natalie x
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Post by Lubyfanatic316 on Aug 31, 2006 8:39:26 GMT 10
Great start!
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Post by ninabrasil (Marina) on Aug 31, 2006 12:23:41 GMT 10
Really great story!! Update again soon!!
Nina xx
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Post by rorygilmore on Aug 31, 2006 12:35:33 GMT 10
Chapter One:
“Izzy sandwich!” he shouts. He sandwiches Izzy between us and we plaster her with kisses hugging her tightly. She is so little and I can feel Luka’s arms round my back. We smile at each other. “Let me go!” says a muffled voice from between us. She begins to wriggle. I pull away and he swings her onto his shoulders.
LOVE IT!!!! Love the 'Izzy sandwich' made me laugh so much and it was so sweet!!!! I like the way you're writting, making Abby tell us the story, it's so nice! UpDaTe SoOn!!!!
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Post by jadestar on Aug 31, 2006 17:14:38 GMT 10
Chapter One:
This guy should come with a health warning. I blush profoundly. I totally agree on that so UPDATE asap!
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Post by Maryna on Aug 31, 2006 17:16:18 GMT 10
great great star! keep going!!!
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Post by charlieluby on Aug 31, 2006 20:40:21 GMT 10
Chapter Two:
Izzy is enjoying this day so much I can tell and I think being at the zoo is only part of her enjoyment. We never go out as a family and I honestly didn’t expect to enjoy today as much as I am. Right now Izzy is in between us, holding one of my hands and one of Luka’s. We walk towards the monkeys, her favourite, and she lets go of our hands and runs ahead. Suddenly she stops and turns around looking quizzically at us. She runs up to us. She takes my hand and grabs Lukas and puts them together making us hold hands. She giggles and runs ahead. I look down at our hands and blush turning away. I don’t want him to see me blushing. He squeezes my hand and I turn round at look up at him. “She must have see other parents holding hands,” he says smiling. True. I nod not knowing what to say. “Yeah she must have. I’m happy if she is,” I say. Was that to brave? He brings our hands up towards him and kisses my hand nodding. I look up at him afraid. All of a sudden a huge thunder cloud rolls of the top of the heavens open and us. Luka must be on the same wavelength as me. He lets go of my hand and bolts towards Izzy shoving him on his shoulders. We look around and spot a café/shop and storm in. Oh my god I can’t imagine what I look like. I point to the toilets and head in. I stand in front of the mirror. Mascara everywhere. I wipe my face and re-apply my make-up. Make-up? Why am I bothering? Its only Luka. And that’s half the problem. I sigh as my heart flutters when I think about him. I walk out the bathroom and am met with a very excited little girl. “Mummy! Look what Daddy bought me. I said he didn’t have to but he insistered,” she says blowing a kiss to Luka. I smile. “I think you mean insisted,” I say and she mouths ‘whatever’! I can’t believe Luka would spoil her like this, well actually I can but he really shouldn’t. I look over at Luka with my cross-eyes and he just winks at me making me smile. I can’t stay mad at him for long. He is so happy I can tell. He just glows when he is. In fact we’re all glowing. Izzy pulls out a toy monkey from behind her back. “Woooow! Aren’t you lucky! Did you say thank you to daddy?” I ask pretending to admire the odd-looking thing masquerading as a monkey. She nods. “THREE times! Thank you daddy! Now four!” she says and she’s off on one, “Thank you. Five…”she says as we head for the door! “We get it Izzy!” Luka says sighing. The rain is still hammering down as ever. He grabs Izzy and unzips his coat pulling her under it. They look so sweet. He passes an umbrella to me. Our fingers touch and that spark that we had seven years ago is still there. I can feel it. I wonder if he feels it too…
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Post by charlieluby on Aug 31, 2006 20:41:34 GMT 10
I am going to the theatre today so i will try and update tonight. If not i'll update asap tommorow! hope you like it so far! xxx
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Post by Maryna on Aug 31, 2006 21:13:37 GMT 10
i love it!!! hope you have a great time!!!
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