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Post by strizzy on Sept 3, 2006 0:54:33 GMT 10
Great update! KIDS!!!!!
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Post by charlieluby on Sept 3, 2006 3:42:06 GMT 10
Thanks for all the feedback i love to read comments! xx
Chapter Four:
“Go pee Izzy,” I call into her room trotting downstairs in my nightie to make a nice fresh pot of coffee. Mmm. The doorbell rings and without giving it a second thought I open it sleepily, still in my coffee daydream. “Luka!” I gasp looking down at myself. I’m not even wearing a bra, my nightie is old and covered in Izzy’s baby puke, I haven’t brushed my hair and I have precisely no make-up on. F**k a duck! “Sorry, it’s a bit early isn’t it!” he says smiling looking at my watch. I wrap my arms around my chest and fiddle with my hair. I look so bad and after last night…ahh, don’t even go their Abby you spent enough of last night stressing about that. “Abby stop that. I have woken up to you before you know. You look gorgeous in the mornings,” he says and I open the door. He’s such a liar. I open the door wide and let him in. “Iz, someone’s here to see you,” I shout up the stairs. The place almost starts to shake as she comes thundering down the stairs. “Daddy! What are you doing here?” she says tugging at his sleeve and pulling him to the sofa. “Well I have something to tell you and mummy,” he says. Oh god. He’s moving, he has a girlfriend, he’s getting married, he’s… “Well when we were first dating I was saving up to buy this place by the seaside and I finally got enough money to buy it,” he says passing me a piece of paper. Oh my god. It’s breathtaking. Three bedrooms! What a place. He’s so lucky. “This is amazing Luka. Are you going away a few days or something is that why you came to show us?” I ask confused. He shakes his head. “No, I want you and Izzy to use it. You know for weekends away and stuff when you’re not working. I had a key cut,” he says passing it to me. “Luka you can’t be serious, I mean…” I start. This is ridiculous. The house is just gorgeous he can’t just want to let us share it with him. “Abby you deserve it. I started to save with you in mind anyway. I mean I thought we could go away together and stuff but I mean you and Izzy deserve breaks away. It’s a great place. Jus been refurbished. Modern. Why don’t you go down this weekend and check it out. I know your not working,” he says. “Ok but at least let me pay for some of it or something…” he shakes his head. “Abby you gave me Izzy. You and Izzy are my world,” he says and we both look at her. She’s flicking through the house brochure smiling. She’s so good. I get up and open my arms. He smiles and stands up hugging me. Luka is so much bigger than me and I feel so relaxed and safe in his arms. I close my eyes. Suddenly Izzy gets up and pushes us. We fall backwards onto the sofa. I land on top of him in an interesting position. Izzy giggles. Good girl? I blush and climb off him. “Ok I better go Abby. I’d love to stay but work shouts!” he says and kisses Izzy making his way to the door. “Luka,” I say and he turns round, “I think you mean work calls. And thanks so much,” I say and he winks at me and closes the door.
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Post by ninabrasil (Marina) on Sept 3, 2006 4:00:49 GMT 10
Great update!! And Luka is really sweet Update again soon! Nina xx
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Post by hollygirl on Sept 3, 2006 4:03:03 GMT 10
hehe work shouts...I love Luka...great update! another soon!
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Post by strizzy on Sept 3, 2006 4:47:42 GMT 10
Great update!
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LiLM
Countess of Luby
i LoVe YOu!
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Post by LiLM on Sept 3, 2006 4:59:54 GMT 10
oh Luka he can be so damn cute sometimes i love this fan fic so updated soon!!!!!
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Post by *Natalie* on Sept 3, 2006 7:17:40 GMT 10
Great update! How cute are Abby and Luka ?
natalie x
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Post by Melimelo on Sept 3, 2006 15:26:10 GMT 10
Sooooooooo cute
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Post by Lubyfanatic316 on Sept 3, 2006 21:32:15 GMT 10
Great Update!
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Post by <3 LubyII <3 on Sept 3, 2006 21:46:59 GMT 10
Great update.
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chaos1982
Marquise of Luby
I want so much to open your eyes `cause I need you to look into mine
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Post by chaos1982 on Sept 3, 2006 22:04:52 GMT 10
[glow=red,2,300][/glow]great update!
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Post by jadestar on Sept 3, 2006 22:57:26 GMT 10
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Post by Maryna on Sept 4, 2006 1:05:16 GMT 10
brill update!again soon!
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Post by rorygilmore on Sept 4, 2006 16:39:30 GMT 10
“Abby you gave me Izzy. You and Izzy are my world,” he says and we both look at her. She’s flicking through the house brochure smiling. AWWW that was so sweet!!! So nice!!! I'm in love with this Luka Update Soon!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Can't wait to read about them, in the new house!
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Post by charlieluby on Sept 4, 2006 21:07:48 GMT 10
Chapter Five:
After a long hour of packing and a short journey we arrive at the house. There is a long sweeping driveway and we pull up. I don’t know about Izzy but I feel like a movie star or something. The house is so beautiful but I just wish Luka were here with us to enjoy it. I unlock the door and we come into a small porch where we hang up our coats and dump our bags. Then through there is a kitchen. It has a large table with chairs around it. At the back of the kitchen there are sweeping stairs but we ignore them and take the door to the left. There is a large cosy living room with a gorgeous fireplace with logs to burn. Izzy makes a running jump at the sofa and hurls herself at it smiling. Now for the upstairs. There are four doors and I take the first one. Holy crap. This must be Luka’s room. It smells like him and some of his stuff lies on the bed. I resist the urge to go over and pick it up. To touch the stuff he’s touched. There is an en-suite bathroom to the side with a large shower but I am puzzled to find that there is a large pair of double doors to the side of his room. Maybe a wardrobe. Izzy is looking at me and I know what she is thinking. What is it? She runs over and does the honours of pushing the doors open. Oh no! How will I be able to resist. It leads to another room. My room. Adjoining rooms. I hope now that Luka never stays at the same time as us. How will I ever be able to resist him in the next room with just a door separating us? My room is beautiful and tidy. There is a note on the dressing table. I read it: Dear Abby and my beautiful daughter,
I hope you love the house just as much as I love you! Enjoy your visit.
Love Luka Xx
Ok deep breaths Abby. Izzy picks up the paper and kisses it. She is just so sweet. Don’t read into the ‘I love you’ bit. It’s just an expression. Just an expression… I check out the bathroom- double shower, bath (whoo hoo!) toilet and sink. Izzy runs off to look at her room and I begin to unpack.
It’s been about an hour and I haven’t heard a peep from Izzy. She must really love her room. “Izzy? Dizzy Izzy? How is your room? Izzy?” I call. There is no reply. Oh no. Not hide and seek. She is just to good at this game. “Ok I’ll play hide and seek.” I laugh and run into the bathroom. Nope she’s not there. She’s such a pickle this one. I creep into her bedroom. Holy shit. No, this isn’t happening. Blood everywhere. My little girl. I rush to her side. She lies unconscious on the floor. There is a streak of blood from the windowsill to where she lies. She must have fallen from looking out of the window. I check her pulse. It’s barely there. “Izzy wake up darling.” I can’t think straight. I’m a nurse. Come on Abby. Do something. I run to my bedroom and grab my phone. “Ambulance please. Hurry!” I sob down the phone gently stroking her face.
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