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Post by suzanne on Dec 8, 2008 10:31:47 GMT 10
So this is set when the er gang are younger, just because I wanted to do something different. I have a more serious fic in the works but it’s not ready to be posted yet!! Probably slightly occ aswell!! Here’s the first chapter!! Reviews are appreciated good or bad!! Life long friends Luka Kovac and Abigail Wyzcenski spend their last summer together in sunny California before going their separate ways for school reasons. Meeting siblings Crystal and John Carter... who try to break them up before they realize how much more they are to each other than just friends... Chapter 1 As I stood there in the plane hanger waiting for the 11:00 flight to California from Chicago I wondered where my best friend Luka was. He was late as usual. I stood there with my bags looking around for him when I look at my watch I noticed it was five minutes to 11:00. So I picked up my bags and walked to the private plane my father sent. When I heard someone yelling my name. "Abigail! Abby... wait!" It was Luka running as fast as he could. "Luka Kovac you're late." I said putting my bags down and placing my hands on my hips. "I know... but my mother wouldn't let me out of the car." he said trying to catch his breath. "You're here now... lets get going." I said picking my bags up again. We walked onto the plane and it was beautiful. It had cream coloured leather seats, a TV in every head rest, and it was all for us. I placed my bags in the over head compartment and took my seat up front by the cockpit. Luka finally put his bags away after struggling for what seemed like forever and sat down beside me. He smiled at me and I smiled back. Luka had a great smile along with beautiful dark hair, big beautiful eyes, smooth naturally tanned skin, and the body of a god. I didn't know what was happening to me but lately I've been having strange feelings for Luka. It was like I wanted to be more than just friends. I didn't know if he felt the same about me, but it didn't matter because after this trip we'd probably never see each other again. This is our last summer together and I wanted to make it the best one before we go of to college in the fall. So I thought we'd spend a month at my families beach house in California with a few other friends who bailed on us at the last minute. So instead of 6 people it was just me and Luka. The way it's been for most of our lives.
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Post by Taylor on Dec 8, 2008 10:46:49 GMT 10
aww great start...so cute!!! nice to read a younger fan fic!
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Post by baboune51 on Dec 8, 2008 22:53:00 GMT 10
great start ! they 're just freinds !
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Post by lkaljk (Ebba) on Dec 9, 2008 1:22:54 GMT 10
Yeah It's a greate start! Can't wait to read more
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Post by suzanne on Dec 9, 2008 3:57:18 GMT 10
Thanks guys!! Chapter 2 As the plane began to take off I grabbed Luka's hand. I was terrified of flying. Thirty minutes into the flight and our plane hit a little turbulence. I let out a small yelp at every bump. "Don't worry I'm here." Luka said smiling and wrapping his arm around me. Oh how I loved when he smiled. "I'm really gonna miss you when this summer is over." I said as my eyes became all teary. "We'll keep in touch." he said putting his other arm around me. I shook my head. "No we won't... we won't have time... I'll be on the other side of the world anyway." I said wiping my eyes. "We'll make time... a friendship like ours could never be broken by one little ocean." he said. I smiled knowing that could never happen and just enjoy the summer. We landed in California with ease. I was happy to get off the plane and on safe land. I looked around for the car my father was suppose to have waiting for us when we landed. There was no car in sight. I’m getting ready to call my father when car came pulling up beside us. The man placed our bags in the trunk and drove us to where we needed to go to pick up our rental car. As we drove Luka looked out the window of the car like a kid in a candy store. He had never been to California let alone LA. I had been to LA a lot of times in my childhood before my parents divorce. It was like nothing had changed in the five years I've been gone and it was great. After picking up our rental car I drove us to the beach house. Even though it had been years I still remembered how to get there. It was like I never left. I pulled up into the driveway and parked the car. We grabbed our bags and walked into the house. "Here we are." I said putting down my bags and turning on the lights. "Wow... this is great." Luka said with his eyes nearly popping out his head in excitement. "Make yourself at home... I'm gonna go put my stuff away." "Me too... where's my room by the way?" "Up here... come on." I said walking up the steps. "This is your room." I said opening the door. "Look at that view." he said walking over to the balcony doors. "I'll be in the room next door if you need me... okay." I walked out his room and over to mine.
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Post by Taylor on Dec 9, 2008 6:18:32 GMT 10
:)i like the begining how they are just friends, it is something i can relate to!!!
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Post by suzanne on Dec 10, 2008 8:48:42 GMT 10
:)i like the begining how they are just friends, it is something i can relate to!!! I think alot of people can relate to it, I know I can aswell!! Chapter 3 As I walked in the room all my childhood memories came rushing back. Both good and bad. I started to unpack my suitcase when Luka came running in and tackling me onto the bed. He did this every time we went on a trip anywhere with anybody. It would be one of the things I'll miss about him. "Luka... I can't breathe." I said with my face smashed in his chest. "Oh... sorry." he said letting go of me. As I sat up I noticed he was no longer wearing a shirt. "What happened to your shirt?" I asked totally en-gulfed in his beautiful abdomen. "It's hot in here... so I took it off." "Oh yeah... I forgot I have to turn the AC on." I said jumping off my bed and running downstairs. I came back into my room to find all my things unpacked. Luka was sitting on my bed smiling. "What are you smiling about?" I asked walking over to him. "Nothing." I then noticed his hands behind his back. "What's behind your back?" I asked trying to look. "Nothing." he said his smile getting wilder, when he saw that I knew something was up. "If it's nothing let me see your hands." I reached for his hands and he pulled me down on top of him. With one hand around my waist he held me down and with the other he pulled out what he was hiding. "Here... this is for you." he said pulling out a locket. "Oh my gosh... Luka... it's beautiful." I said taking it from his hand and opening it. In it was a picture of us. "So I won't be far from you when you go to Paris." We laid there staring into each others eyes. The air between us was so intense. I didn't know what was happening. I started to go in for a kiss and so did he. When my phone began to ring. I climbed off Luka and answered my phone. "Hello... oh hey mom... yeah everything is great... don't worry we'll be fine... love you too bye." I hung up the phone and walked over to my dresser. "I should finish unpacking." Luka said getting off my bed. "Yeah.. oh thanks for the locket." I said walking over and giving him an awkward hug.
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Post by Taylor on Dec 10, 2008 10:32:38 GMT 10
awww....so close! wonder what will happen next.....ha ha
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Post by baboune51 on Dec 10, 2008 20:14:12 GMT 10
wow they get closer , I Like that !
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Post by suzanne on Dec 11, 2008 9:14:32 GMT 10
Chapter 4 I decided to take a nice long shower before going to meet my Dad at his restaurant. I changed into a nice fashionable black dress and black ballet shoes. I brushed my brown hair, grabbed my bag, and walked downstairs. I waited five minutes for Luka to come down. When he finally did, he looked great. He was wearing the silk shirt I gave him for his birthday. He looked so good in red. He matched the red shirt with a pair of black slacks and black dress shoes. Together we looked great. As we pulled up to my father's restaurant called 'Infinity' which I never could understand. I saw my father and his new girlfriend Love. What kind of name is Love... stripper... that's all I'm saying. They were standing at the door. As we walked over I grabbed Luka's arm. I don't know why I did that, but I didn't want Love hitting on Luka while me and my dad weren't around. "Dad!" I yelled running and hugging my father. "Hey angel... Luka." "Mr. Wyzcenski." They shook hands. "You remember Love." my dad said. "Hey Abigail... good to see you again." she said pulling me into a hug. With my face in her fake double D breast. As I emerged from her grasp I saw Luka staring at her fake boobs that felt hard as a rock. "Who's your friend?" she asked looking Luka up and down. "Luka this is Love... Love this is my friend Luka." I said grabbing his arm again. "You two make a really cute couple." "Oh we're not together." I said. "Really." she said. After spending an hour with my dad eating free food Luka and I finally head back to the beach house. On the drive home we talked about how skanky Love looked. We laughed and it was like that afternoon had never even happened. As soon as we got home I went upstairs to change into more comfortable clothes. I put on a tank and loose shorts with socks. I pulled my hair into a messy bun and went back downstairs. It didn't take Luka but five minutes to change. He was in the kitchen fixing himself a sandwich when I walked in.
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Post by Taylor on Dec 11, 2008 9:44:21 GMT 10
hmmm......wonder whats comin next....excited to read more lol
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Post by suzanne on Dec 13, 2008 3:09:53 GMT 10
Chapter 5 I had my father stock the fridge with food before we got there. That way we wouldn't have to worry about shopping. Luka turned and looked at me his jaw dropped. I couldn't figure out what why until I looked down and saw my nipples making my shirt stick out. "Is it cold in here?" he asked with a smile. "Shut up... I can't help it." I said smiling back. I then went upstairs and grabbed my hoody and put it on over the tank. "Better?" I asked coming back down. "Now how would you covering up make it better... did you forget I'm a guy." he said smiling. "Right... and all guys are pervs." I said smiling. "Yeah and we all want one thing." Luka then came after me. So there we were. Running around the house. Laughing and screaming acting like a couple of kids. I was going to miss it. I was getting tired, so I finally let him catch me and tackle me to the sofa. "So now that you've caught me what are you going to do?" And without warning Luka kissed me. Though it was a light peck on the lips it was still a kiss. "Lets look at a movie." he said climbing off of me. "The only DVD player and TV are in my room." I said without thinking. "What do you want to watch first... 'The Messengers' or 'Vacancy'?" he asked. I stood in the kitchen confused. Why did Luka kiss me and why was he acting like it didn't happen? I didn't ask him why. I was afraid it might make things awkward between us and the trip would be ruined. So instead I kept my mouth shut and watched the movies as if nothing happened
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Post by Chephren on Dec 13, 2008 3:16:39 GMT 10
Oohouh... here's the kiss... Wonder what will happen during the movie, in Abby's room...
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Post by Taylor on Dec 13, 2008 11:41:33 GMT 10
ya what will happen.....cute chapter tho lol
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Post by baboune51 on Dec 13, 2008 20:43:55 GMT 10
wow , first kiss
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