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Post by erfan228 on Feb 10, 2008 10:53:19 GMT 10
Great update!! Can't wait for more!!
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Post by lubylover on Feb 10, 2008 15:08:58 GMT 10
Aww I love it, I can't wait for more!
Update soon!
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Post by *Natalie* on Feb 11, 2008 3:24:54 GMT 10
Nice update xxx
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Post by apoint14 on Feb 11, 2008 9:02:10 GMT 10
so this update is a little shorter... but its finally part 1 of the plan!!! yay. i hope everyone remembers luby's history They left at seven and Abby followed Luka to his car. She slowly climbed into the passenger seat as he started the car. Of course he would drive. She after all had no idea where they were going, though she hadn’t asked yet. As he started to pull away, she couldn’t resist any longer. “Luka, where are we going anyway?” “Now Abby, you know I’m not going to tell you.” He smirked as he responded, knowing that she only asked because she was supposed to. “Fine, don’t tell me” she conceded. He felt a little down that she didn’t ask him a few more times, but that she had asked at all meant she must have been at least a little curious, and dare he think, excited? They continued the drive and he slipped in a CD to break the silence. Little did she know it was all a part of his plan. Her name was Lola, she was a showgirl With yellow feathers in her hair and a dress cut down to there She would merengue and do the cha-cha And while she tried to be a star, Tony always tended bar Across a crowded floor, they worked from 8 till 4 They were young and they had each other Who could ask for more? She couldn’t believe it. That song, from when everything was perfect. The suspense and fun, the flirting and games. Instantaneously, she was back to that night. And as she looked over at her husband, he was grinning ear to ear, merely looking at her. He was just as he was that night, just as handsome, irresistible. A wave of emotion washed over, almost like.. no. It couldn’t be. It felt almost as if she was.. falling in love all over again. But quick as the reminiscence came over her, she was snapped back to reality, the weight of the unforgettable past lingering. He saw it, for that one moment. He knew, even though it was only a moment, his Abby was still there. Under the grief and guilt, the woman he fell in love with had not gone. Maybe this might work after all, he thought. It just might work. song is Copacobana by Barry Manilow
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Post by lubylover on Feb 11, 2008 12:30:07 GMT 10
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Post by marioh on Feb 11, 2008 15:20:38 GMT 10
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Post by *Natalie* on Feb 12, 2008 4:58:52 GMT 10
Nice update Hope that spark comes back xxx
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Post by apoint14 on Feb 12, 2008 9:56:47 GMT 10
yayyy! part two of the plan! thanks to everyone for the comments/feedback. i know its another short one... but im trying to make this suspenseful! (plus i want the last post to be on valentines day, so cliche, haha) ENJOY!
He pulled up to the restaurant, and she looked almost disappointed. He had expected this though, as not many women would appreciate being taken to a restaurant/bar for a romantic Valentine’s dinner. Also as he expected, she didn’t remember it. All the better for his surprise.
He pulled into the valet lot and escorted his wife inside. She was still looking apprehensive but he was trying harder than ever to contain his excitement. He held the door open as she proceeded inside, not knowing what to expect. Just through the door, she stopped dead. The entire bar was empty, all the tables clear save one. Draped in a white cloth with candles and a small bouquet of… she gasped. They were white lilies. She didn’t ever remember telling him white lilies were her favorite flower, yet there lay half a dozen of the most beautiful flowers in the world. She glanced around and it took a second before it hit her. She almost started to cry as she realized exactly where she was.
“This is where…” she started before he interrupted her.
“Yes,” He said simply. He took her coat and his own and handed them to the waiter. Then he directed her towards the table and pulled out her chair, inviting her to sit down. She remained frozen for a minute, taking in everything.
“But, how did you…”
“Let’s just say, I know some people.” He looked at her with a pleased expression. Everything was working out perfectly. Taking her to the place where they had had their first date was obviously a good idea. He smiled gently, again beckoning her to the awaiting chair. She sat down and he took his seat, glancing around and nodding to something behind her. She turned around quickly and saw the foosball table, the one she beat him on all those years ago. Again she thought she might cry as she was overcome with emotion. He was trying to make her remember, show her how much she meant to him. She turned around, now fashioning the same smile as Luka and he look confused.
“I’ll play ya,” she said, now smirking at him. His face broke again into the wide smile she had fallen in love with and he jumped up from the table and quickly accompanied her to the game.
It only took two games for Luka to realize that he had not improved at all in his game. But it didn’t matter, she was laughing. Laughing. He couldn’t believe it. How he missed her laugh, so carefree and full of joy. At that point, he was convinced that his plan was going to work. He saw that deep down she really wanted this just as much as he did.
“Wow, maybe you should have practiced,” she joked as they made their way back to the table. Their dinner had been brought out without them even ordering. He sure planned this well, Abby thought to herself. I do love him. I just don’t think I can let myself, not yet.
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Post by LUBBY4LIFE on Feb 12, 2008 10:11:30 GMT 10
sooo good!
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Post by lubylover on Feb 12, 2008 10:14:57 GMT 10
Aww that was amazing...
Abby better let herself love him again. He's showing her he don't care what she did, he just wants her!
I can't wait for an update
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Post by marioh on Feb 12, 2008 15:46:42 GMT 10
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Post by *Natalie* on Feb 13, 2008 5:28:14 GMT 10
Nice update xxx
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Post by toni on Feb 13, 2008 7:44:09 GMT 10
ohhh my.... that is soooo GOOD ;D I love your FanFic!!!!!!
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Post by apoint14 on Feb 13, 2008 14:19:09 GMT 10
ahh omg!! i have had the worst problems with my computer today!! all my proxys got blocked today, thank you school laptop!!! so anyway, after much headache... i have an update!!! lets see if anyone can guess where luby is going next.. They ate their meal slowly, neither in a hurry. The candlelight flickered, highlighting Luka’s strong eyes and jaw. It was then, for the first time in months, that she longed for his touch. She hadn’t realized how much she missed his hands in her hair, his lips on hers. She stopped herself from reaching out to him, she couldn’t shake the guilt. The thoughts of how she had hurt him. She desperately didn’t want to do that again. He was too good for that. He only glanced up every so often, figuring he would leave her to her thoughts. He knew that she was confused, scared, reluctant. She would be fighting within herself, whether to allow herself to feel all this again. After all their history, Luka knew that he couldn’t rush her. Couldn’t push her. Abby was stubborn and only did the things she wanted. Of this he knew all too well, but he was praying that she would see him there, waiting for her. They finished their meal in silence, and she half expected him to drive towards the apartment as they left the restaurant. Instead he went in the other direction. “And where are we going now?” she asked. He could now hear the curiosity and anticipation in her voice. He had her attention. “You’ll see,” he responded with another grin. They drove for quite some time, and she swore they passed the same building twice. But their drive continued in silence, each pondering their own thoughts. Luka knew she was still holding back, unforgiving of herself, and not quite ready to let him in. He on the other hand was hoping that his last surprise would make her see… he simply wouldn’t let her give up on them that quickly. Slowly he pulled over, taking a spot right in front of a park. She looked around, trying to recognize exactly where they had stopped. The darkness only confused her and she couldn’t place exactly where they were. Yet knowing her husband, she felt it was somewhere they had been before. He stepped into the cold night air and hurried to her side to open her door. She stepped out graciously, making sure to walk close to him, and pausing for only a moment. She knew he felt the tension, and she enjoyed toying with him. They walked next to each other for some time, not talking really, but merely enjoying each others’ company. They made their way toward the lake, admiring the frozen sheets of ice that had formed in the last few months. He reached for her hand, and felt a rush of emotion when she didn’t pull away. She let him be by her, actually enjoying it. The feelings of contamination were slowly slipping away. Could she actually forgive herself? Was it possible that after everything, all her mistakes, she could put it aside just as he had?
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Post by marioh on Feb 14, 2008 0:33:38 GMT 10
To the bench where she said she wanted to keep the baby?? Great update, I'm waiting for the next one
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