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Post by lubylover on May 3, 2008 23:48:37 GMT 10
Awww....Work things out Luka!!!!!!
Update!!!!
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Post by jacobsmommy on May 4, 2008 1:31:09 GMT 10
Great chapters Please update soon
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Post by britneyluby on May 4, 2008 18:38:04 GMT 10
UPDATE!
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Post by debsxx2006xx on May 4, 2008 22:32:57 GMT 10
Part 15
Luka
1 week later
I'm home alone again I have been for the last week Abby and Kate moved into a hotel that saturday I seen them on the Monday when we took swobs for the DNA test but i've not heard anything since. Katie was confused she didn't know what was going on and thought we were sick I wanted to tell her I want her to know but Abby made the point that now isn't the right time as much as I want her to know I can't be selfish she has had her world ripped apart and I can't add to that. "Hi Luka." I turn around and see Abby standing in the lounge she must have used the key I gave her but I didn't hear her come in "Hi" I say a little shocked at seeing her. "This came." I walk from the kitchen to near where she is standing "what is it?" I ask rather stupidly as I get closer I see a white envelope in her hand. "Your test results." She smiles slightly and nods her head "oh right" wow that was quick I wasn't expecting them so soon "have you opened them?" I ask. "No I know what it says." So do I but I was just trying to be clever really, I hold my hand out but she walks as far as the side table leaving it standing against the lamp she turns and heads back to the door "Abby?" she stops but dosn't turn around "Are you ok? is Katie ok?" I miss her so much even thought i'm mad, angry, hurt, even heart broken but I still care I always have. "Were good she's with Neela." I nod my head and watch her leave but when she gets to the door she stands still and holds the knob she doesn't move and I'm left waiting. "I...I know what I did was wrong but you have to know it wasn't about hurting you or not wanting to be with you, I loved you and that night but ... I was so scared if he knew the truth if he knew what we did he always said if I left him he'd kill me then Katie." She turns around to face me and I can see tear marks rolling down her cheeks my heart starts to melt "Abby I want to run over to you, wrap my arms around you tell you it's all going to be ok but... I can't, I can't forgive you Abby she's my daughter" she nods wiping her tears away she opens the door. "Good Bye Luka." I look at the envelope then her "Abby" I call making my way towards the door "he told me, he told me he knew and he made you pay every night" she doesn't know I know he raped her she just thinks I know about the violence. "What?" She ask's a little shell shocked "When I went to your's he told me...he even offered to loan you out" I see her body shake her hand goes to her mouth coving it. "You...why didn't you say anything?" I stop near the stairs resting against the wall I slide down "I felt sick when he told me, he laughed like you were some object of his" she closes the door and copies me sliding down the door she rests against it banging her head gently she shakes her head no. "Oh god he knew I stayed and he knew." She starts crying again this time harder making me sit up I crawl over to her pulling her foot I pull her into my arms her body shakes against mine as she crys. "I lied to you... I kept her away and he knew."
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Post by luby2534 on May 4, 2008 23:21:38 GMT 10
Finally i have managed to find time to catch up !! ;D
Great fanfic....keep up the good work !!
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Post by britneyluby on May 5, 2008 1:07:36 GMT 10
update!
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marie
Countess of Luby
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Post by marie on May 5, 2008 1:47:14 GMT 10
oh ! update soon !!!
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Post by lubylover on May 5, 2008 5:43:03 GMT 10
Oh wow! I love it! Update!
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Post by debsxx2006xx on May 6, 2008 3:27:04 GMT 10
Hi guys
I just want 2 say thank u 4 all ur lovely comments and i'm glad i'm back I forgot how much I liked this.
I will b updating soon I promise i've just had 1 of them days where both my girls just want attention and me 2 play with them well dinner is done and now i'm going 2 pretty much sit on my ass and do a few chapters.
Thanks x :)x >:(x
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Post by debsxx2006xx on May 6, 2008 6:01:45 GMT 10
Part 16
Abby
We have been sitting on the floor in each others arms for almost two hours the pair of us crying tears mixing together "You hate me don't you?" I manage to muster. "Hate is a strong word Abby I feel hurt i've missed out on so much." I tilt my head up and look at him "I can't say sorry enough Luka and I know it was wrong but I was just just so scared if he knew he would do something crazy" I look down at my hands and shrug my shoulders "Whatever you want to happen if you never want to speak to me again i'll do it anything" I smile slightly. "I just want to know Katie, I want her to know the truth." I nod my head I feel horrible inside not only have I kept Katie from her real dad i've lost my best friend "Ok soon I promise i'll tell her everything" he stands up pulling me with him he holds the door knob. "I just need some time Abby I need to get my head around this." I nod again watching him open the door I slide past him "Thanks" I say passing him I better get back to Katie I left her with Neela ages ago. "Abby?" I turn around and see him rushing out onto the street he grabs both my hands in his and takes a deep breath. "Everything i've ever said i've meant it all and even after this I can't stop loving you but I do need time and I can't promise everything is going to be ok but your Abby my Abby and i've lived without you hiding from you for to long." He leans forwards and gently kisses my cheek holding his face close to mine our noses still touching "I love you, always have" I finally tell him.
Luka.
I walk back into my house shutting the front door with my foot I hold me head in my hands huffing loudly "god Luka" I tell myself. Pushing off the door I see the enevlope on the side table lookign at me, do I need to read it? I ask myself walking over but before I can answer I've picked it up and running my finger down it breaking the seal.
DNA Results for:
Luka Kovac
Katie Lee Lockhart
The results show a positive DNA match...
I roll the paper into a ball and throw it across the room getting it in the trash can my legs give way and I fall to the floor tears fall from my face to my jeans as I watch the wet mark get bigger I can't work out if it's tears of joy or sadness.
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Post by marie on May 6, 2008 9:00:16 GMT 10
it's cool !!
but he really has to "forgive" her and then they'll live in LoveLand !!!
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Post by lubylover on May 6, 2008 11:06:35 GMT 10
Aww... yes Luka needs to forgive her and they need to be a happy family and have another
Great update. Can't wait for more!!!
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Post by britneyluby on May 6, 2008 14:02:37 GMT 10
update UPDATE
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Post by debsxx2006xx on May 6, 2008 19:07:20 GMT 10
Part 17
Abby.
"Hey are you sure you don't want to stay and have something to eat?" I smile at Neela she has enough problems going on right now with her own love life I can't put mine on her too "No really it's ok" I smile trying to put a brave face on it. "Katie said your not speaking to Luka? you had some sort of fight Abby I wish you would tell me what's really going on sweetie?" I know she does I really do and I know she is just been sweet but I can't tell her not yet anyway not before I explain it to katie I mean Luka still needs to get his head around it "we just had a silly fight we were getting under his feet" I lie "Male and female friends shouldn't live together to much bathroom time" she laughs I think she's buying it. "ok, only if your sure." I nod still showing my big grin "Kate come on honey it's time to go" I call out holding her coat open, I flick it letting Katie know it's ok to come over and get her coat and she won't hear anything she shouldn't. "I'm rwally hungry mommy?" She tells me while putting her coat on "I know sweetie i'm sorry didn't think i'd be so long" I rub her hair messing her curls up which she hates "but hey how about we have pizza and ice cream?" she bangs her feet jumping up and down she grins. "Chocolate ice cream mommy? Richard never let her eat that kind of crap I mean I get all the healthy eating for kids but I don't see anything wrong with a treat now and then "yeah baby a big pot of chocolate ice cream and sweets on top and guess what it's just for you and me" I kiss my fingers and place it on her nose "Bye Neela and thanks again for having Kate" she watches us leave before shutting her door. "Can I watch cartoons as well mommy?" We walk down the street to the car i'm holding her hand tightly I know it's only a few feet away from Neela place but Richard is still out here somewhere "Come on sweetie in and seat belt on" I say looking around before shutting her door.
After a pizza and huge bowl of ice cream Katie and I are curled up on my bed watching cartoons it's scooby doo day and Katie is making sure she doesn't miss one. "I miss Luka mummy." I look down and see her looking up at me all sad looking "I know you do baby, mummy does too"I tell her leaning down kissing her mess of hair. "Will we see him soon?" I do that fake grin again smiling to make everyone think i'm ok "Yeah honey really soon i'll sort it out with Luka I promise" one way or another she'll see him just maybe not I. "Good."
"Bang Bang...Bang Bang."
Richard
I beat my hand into her door so hard bits of paint come away on my fist "open this f**king door" the silly cow gets what she wants from me uses me and then screws me over "I said open this bastard door bitch" I know she's in side I can she the shadows moving around. "Go away Richard." Ha the silly bitch made a big mistake "Big mistake bitch" I shout banging the door harder this time booting it between punches "You have two choices bitch"I say stopping so she can hear her choices "you either open this door and get what you deserve? or I f**king break it down and use your head to close it again?" I boot the door showing her I mean business.
"Bang Bang...Bang Bang."
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Post by lubylover on May 6, 2008 20:57:36 GMT 10
AGGGHHHH!!!! Abby call Luka now!
Great update
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