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Post by debsxx2006xx on Jul 6, 2006 6:20:50 GMT 10
Season 7 Shh… you don’t have to talk. I’m on my way to see Luka it’s freezing out here so I pull my coat tighter around my body as I get throw the door I pass the lobby and see a couple kissing I really hope Luka is ok I mean he hasn’t spoke to me since our date I’m really worried. I get into the lift pressing the number 5 it lights up the lady at the front desk told me which floor and room he’s in. As I get onto the landing I’m looking for room 1214 I think about turning back and going home but I see the door on my right and just knock I guess I can’t go back now. “Who is it?”He sounds like crap “It’s me” he opens the door enough to fit his head throw giving me a faint smile trying to reassure me “Can I come in please” he opens the door fully to let me past him. “Sure.”He shuts the door and walks towards the bed sitting down he try’s to explain his behaviour these last few days. “Abby.”I don’t need him to explain I just need to know he is ok “You don’t have to talk” I walk into his legs as he puffs his lips out he looks up at me only to puts his head down pulling my coat he rest’s his head on my shoulder I rub his face making him look at me as he starts to mimic my rub by rubbing my check softly moving my hair behind my ear his touch sends shivers down my spine he pulls me into a deep kiss as I help him take my coat off. As I hear it hitting the floor I grab his arms deepening the kiss I run my hands throw his soft silky hair as I try to lean into him more. He must feel the same because starts to fall back onto the bed pulling me with him while still kissing me we hit the bed with force that makes us slip and he catches my lip with his tooth “ouch” I said it a little louder then I meant to because he stops. “Oh my I’m so sorry let me look.”I sit up crossing my legs on his bed “I’m fine really” he doesn’t believe me lifting my head up to the light so he can see. “Your bleeding stay still will you trust me I’m a doctor you know.”I laugh as he pats my lip with a wet cloth “are you really ok Luka I mean we haven’t spoken since are date and it wasn’t the best date I know but did I do something wrong?” he puts the cloth down making me look at him. “You are perfect Abby I’m sorry for the way I have been performing”Ha his English is good but not that good “Acting for the way you have been acting” I smile and he leans into kiss me again. After awhile our kissing turns very hot and sweaty were striping each other’s clothes off as he lays me down to get on top of me I feel wet on my back I push him up he looks hurt that I stopped him from attacking my neck with kisses “I’m on the cloth it’s wet” he smiles at me and winks I bite down on my lip as the pleasure he is giving me is making the room spin I could like this sort of attention more often.
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Post by megan on Jul 6, 2006 6:34:49 GMT 10
nice..
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Post by Noora on Jul 6, 2006 23:06:38 GMT 10
Great! Update!
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Post by debsxx2006xx on Jul 7, 2006 1:15:16 GMT 10
Hi GUYS HOPE YOU LIKE THE NEW FIC I'M READY TO UPDATE BUT I'M JUST WARNING YA IT'S A BIT HOT AND SEXY SO IF YOUR HURT BY THAT I WOULDN'T READ IT. ;D
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Post by Maryna on Jul 7, 2006 1:26:19 GMT 10
jump the warnings, just update it!!
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Post by debsxx2006xx on Jul 7, 2006 2:27:59 GMT 10
Season 7
One can’t help
“Do you want to come in for coffee"
We have just got back to Abby’s apartment we have spent the whole night laughing and joking in a bar playing pool just like our first date but without the ending as we climb the stairs to her floor I can’t help but notice she never takes her eyes away from her keys in her hand “I do have to be up early” I see her nod her head chewing on her lip. “That’s okay.” Oh man how can I turn her down I mean I have known her a few months and she has my wrapped around her little finger already “I guess maybe one coffee wouldn’t hurt anyone would it?” We stand at her door staring at each other for what feels like forever, but wasn’t even a minute hearing her slip the key in the lock wakes me up without turning it she turns towards me looking deep into my soul. “Luka…” She finally says something so I a step toward her bending my head to her because I’m so much more taller then her it would be rude to make her stretch I lower my head slowly letting my lips cover hers. I move my hands to cup her face rubbing her check softly as she moves her hands to rest on my shirt. We break apart but only for air I swallow hard as she moves towards me this time I hold her tightly around her waist as I feel her open her mouth to let me sneak my tongue inside to explore. “Are you sure?” I hear her ask “Its not like we haven’t done this before” and it’s not I mean the other night it was good I mean hot sweaty god she’s sexy her naked body rubbing against mine wow thinking of this is getting me hard. She turns around to unlock the door I press myself up towards her back kissing her neck just to let her know I’m waiting. “Come on Luka at least let me get the door open.” The door opens letting the lamp in her lounge shine through the door I push her into the room and she lands on the couch “Are you okay” she doesn’t answer but I know I didn’t hurt her back she pulls me down catching me off guard, she quickly recovers and were kissing frantically now. I bring my hands up to her face sliding them down her neck to her shoulders I slip her jumper off leaving her with a cute vest. I can feel her working on my tie and shirt trying to unbutton it as fast as possible and she does because I’m lying on top of her only with my pants on. My next move is very brave I mean I don’t want to force her so to be sure I look at her jeans then back up resting my hand on her stomach I see her nod so I undo her jeans and she lifts her bottom up to help me pull them down her leg easier as I do I lift each foot into the air kissing it softly as I take her jeans off throwing them across the room I turn around to see her pulling her vest off “God, you’re so beautiful.” She blushes slightly and closes her eyes I guess she doesn’t take complements well I bend down kissing her tenderly on her shoulders I hear all the air in her lungs escape as I caress her breast touching one at a time giving both of them the same attention I rolling the ball of her nipples between my fingers bending down to kiss her hard nipples I feel her whimpered beneath me I look up to see her tossing her head around she is enjoying this as much as me. “Luka… please.” I hear her whisper just loud enough to make me look up I grin at myself because she still has her eyes closed in a world of her own. As I reposition myself pulling her to the floor I sit between her legs hooking my fingers around her underwear I pull them down in one quick sweep lifting her bottom up one check in each hand only to feel Abby hold her own weight on her legs moving herself towards me. I slowly let my tongue cover her length spreading her lips apart seeking her clitoris the small nub that gives a woman so much pleasure I guess it something to do with us men as well taking it in my mouth a suck hard making her cry out in pleasure which only turns me on more. I skim my hand across her stomach before moving it down I slid one finger inside her then take it out only to slid it back in further hearing her moan I take it out so I can slip another inside as well. I push my fingers back inside getting myself into a rhythm I can feel her moving to it as well I bring my mouth back towards her clitoris sucking hard and faster then before I can feel her muscles tighten around as I still slide my fingers in and out. “LUKA!” Hearing her call out in pleasure I pull my coated fingers out and lower her back to the floor kissing my way to her lips I see her finally open her eyes and look towards me her eyes are filled with emotion more emotion then I ever thought someone could carry in they eyes I lean down to her mouth kissing her cheek, forehead I’m betting she can taste herself on my lips. “Wow that was amazing.” She sounds out of breath but happy “Yeah I kind of figured that you might off” I see her giggle before pulling me closer for another kiss I’m surprised she’s so aroused still I feel her wriggle across the floor picking my shirt up we discarded across the room awhile I go I see her go into the bedroom giving me a sexy wink she throws the shirt back at me “What about my coffee?” I stand up so I can she her she’s standing in her bedroom door naked swinging her leg she hooks it around the doorframe. “Who needs coffee?” She has never been more right I jump up from the floor as she runs into her room as I go in a see her jumping on her bed her naked body turning me on I shut the door as I make my way towards her who needs coffee.
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Post by luby2534 on Jul 7, 2006 2:48:50 GMT 10
WOW. That was really hot...
Please update !!
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Post by debsxx2006xx on Jul 7, 2006 3:35:47 GMT 10
Season 7
Pain from the past.
I feel great I mean I’m on my way to work and I feel better then I have ever felt the sun is shining the birds are in the sky the weather is beautiful today and I’m happy wow I really am happy Luka and I have been together a few months now and everything is perfect I mean the sex is fantastic although we don’t seem to talk as much as other couples do but were getting better at it I mean it takes time right. “Hey beautiful” Oh man I turn around and see the only person that could spoil a day like this Richard “What do you want?” he grabs my arm pulling me away from the crowds of people trying to get to work were I should be “Get off me your hurting me and man god you smell like dead dog and don’t take this the wrong way but you look like crap Richard” he tightens his grip on my arm. “Shut up Abby I don’t need this right now ok princess?" I try to pull away from him but it only pisses him off more “Don’t call me that, your hurting me get your damn hands off me now, I’m going to scream I swear to god” I pull away from his grip finally getting him off me I rub my wrist where he had a hold of me. “Listen princess I’m sorry ok I’m so sorry.” If I didn’t know him better I would think he was drunk “sorry for what for not paying for my schooling or sorry for sleeping with every slut in the city while we were married which it is Richard?” I’m getting angry now and I can feel tears welling up in my eyes “you don’t have the right to be sorry you lost that when you lost me got it” I try to walk away but he grabs me face making me look at him. “I said I’m sorry damn it why can’t you listen we should try again I want you back I want us to try harder I love you and I will pay for you to go back to med school just give me a chance just one more please princess.” Is he joking I wouldn’t give him a second chance even if someone paid me a million bucks “Are you kidding Richard I hate you I hate everything about you do you not get that I mean why do you think I divorced you? Did you think I woke up bored one day and thought I would spice our sex life up, I hate you for what you did to me hell you slept with slag’s dirty whores in our bed I can’t even stand looking at you anymore you disgust me” that really must of pissed him off because all I feel is his hand slam into my face and man did it hurt. “Look what you made me do now princess come here let me see.” I back away from him “Get your damn hands off me you hit me once before remember Richard I promised myself you would never do it again and you wont” I turn around and walk to work hearing him call after me just makes me walk even faster. “I love you I’m sorry I’m so sorry come back princess please.”
As I walk through the front doors I see Luka at the desk tears running down my face he drops the charts and flies over to me. “What happened?” I sniffle and wipe my tears away as he leads me over to a bed lifting me up he brushes my hair away from my eye. “Who did this? Abby, please talk to me are you hurt anywhere else?” I know he cares but he wouldn’t understand he knows I was married but he doesn’t know much more then that, I guess we need to try talking more “Richard he grabbed me coming off the EL he wants to get back together and when I said know he got mad and hit me” I sniffle and wipe my tears away. “Oh come here.” Pulling me into his warm embrace I sink into him he really knows how to make me feel safe nobody can hurt me as long as I’m with him. “He won’t touch you again I promise and if he tries I’ll have to take him out back and let him know who I am to you.” His sweetness makes me smile “And who are you to me” I smile biting my lip. “I’m the man that loves you of course.” Oh wow “I erm wow….” He places his finger over my lips. “It’s ok you don’t have to answer just believe, nobody will hurt you as long as I love you not even him.” I sink back into his arms I can feel him kissing my forehead I feel the safest person in the world right now and I mean the day can’t get any worse the sun is still shining.
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Post by hollygirl on Jul 7, 2006 4:11:52 GMT 10
Great update! I really like this fic so far!
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Post by *Natalie* on Jul 7, 2006 6:47:20 GMT 10
That was great! Cnt wait for more
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Post by lubyfanalways on Jul 7, 2006 8:20:56 GMT 10
Amazing! I love this story so far. I hope that you are able to update it soon because I would love to read more. I hope that you won't break up Abby and Luka, like the show did. I look forward to seeing if Richard makes anymore appearances and if Luka will have to take him out back. That would be great to read. Great story.
Luka and Abby fan always
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Post by Little Amy on Jul 7, 2006 14:40:23 GMT 10
great update!
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Post by luby2534 on Jul 7, 2006 15:09:23 GMT 10
Excellent update.
Please continue. Your fanfics are great !!
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Post by debsxx2006xx on Jul 7, 2006 20:11:30 GMT 10
So guys this is my third fic go me. I'm going to tell you abit about this so you all understand the name 7 becomes 12. Well it starts in season 7 Abby and Luka together the break up is going to be different but all the things in the middle still happen I.E Carter, SAM, Congo so on. Then it's going to start up in season 12 but a little different Sam and Luka split up in season 11 when she was leaving with Alex and Abby never dates Jake. Update are going to be put up all day so keep looking
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Post by strizzy on Jul 7, 2006 21:03:55 GMT 10
Good idea
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