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Post by <3 LubyII <3 on Jun 17, 2006 23:42:09 GMT 10
Nice update!
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Post by Lubyfanatic316 on Jun 18, 2006 0:30:26 GMT 10
Great update!
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Post by luby2534 on Jun 18, 2006 3:26:18 GMT 10
Don't leave us hanging like this !!!!
Update please
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Post by kirstin on Jun 18, 2006 6:36:10 GMT 10
Ok, the final part! I just want to thank everyone for their feedback; it has been so lovely and it has encouraged me to write more! I'm thinking about sequels to The Secrets We Hide, so watch this space.
For the final time *cries* Please enjoy... Epilogue
Luka walked into the living room of the large new apartment Abby and he had bought. He took off his heavy winter jacket and set it on the hook by the front door.
“Hey!” he called.
“In the kitchen,” Abby replied. Luka made his way to the kitchen and felt a smile slipping across his face and the tension in his back easing.
“Guess what?” Abby said, as Luka planted a large kiss on her forehead.
“What?” Luka asked, grinning in anticipation of the reply and feeling instantly cheered by Abby’s quirky mood.
“Lilijana said her first words today!” Luka walked towards the crib and picked up his gorgeous little baby who’s face lit up at the prospect of a special cuddle from her Daddy.
“Abby, come on, she’s six months old!” Luka said, laughing, “What did she say?”
“She said ‘oohah’,” Abby replied, smiling at the sight of the two most important people in her life.
“That’s not a word!” Luka said, laughing again. He bounced the baby up and down and she cooed in delight. “Mommy’s being silly again!” he told her, as he raised her over his head. She stuffed a tiny fist into her mouth.
“It’s not?” Abby said, a little disappointedly, “I kinda thought it might have been something in Croatian, since you’re always babbling away to her.”
Luka smiled, and pulled his wife into a tight hug, with the Lilijana in the middle. It didn’t matter that she hadn’t spoken any words; the sheer fact that she was there spoke volumes. He looked into his little daughters eyes; the exact replica of her mother’s large chocolate brown ones and just spoke two words. No secrets, no lies.
“Thank you.”
. . . . . [/color]
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Post by luby2534 on Jun 18, 2006 6:42:44 GMT 10
Excellent Fanfic !!! Can't wait for your next one
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Post by megan on Jun 18, 2006 9:06:57 GMT 10
amazing..thanks or sharing!
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Post by Lubyfanatic316 on Jun 18, 2006 12:10:04 GMT 10
Lovely update!
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Post by anna982 on Jun 18, 2006 15:56:08 GMT 10
[glow=red,2,300]Very sweet[/glow]
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lubyforever
Junior Luby
True love that will last forever!
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Post by lubyforever on Jun 18, 2006 17:49:24 GMT 10
I really enjoyed this fic!!! You should make a sequel to it soon!!
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Post by <3 LubyII <3 on Jun 18, 2006 22:37:01 GMT 10
Loved the story! Can't wait for your next one.
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Post by Noora on Jun 21, 2006 23:05:39 GMT 10
OH-MY-GOD. I just catched up with the updates (I wasn't able to do it earlier) and.. I'm speechless. Amazing fic, very well written, it had many interesting crisis.. WOW. I love this. The end was funny. "Something in Croatian.." Haha.
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Post by lubyfan on Jun 23, 2006 1:50:40 GMT 10
Excellent fanfic
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