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Post by daniella on Dec 26, 2006 15:54:41 GMT 10
Update... hope you like it...
It's PG - 13
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part 6: doing something
Luka knew he needed to do something. He wasn't a person that let other people do something for him. He sighed and got up.
' What are you doing man ? ' asked a passenger. The others looked at him, as the kidnappers.
' Hey... sit down... ' said the man with the bomb.
' I'll just want to know if there is someone who needs help... 'said Luka, raising his hands. ' I'm a doctor... '
The men looked at each other.
' No... everything is fine... 'said the other one.
Luka nodded.
'Now, sit down... 'continued the man.
He turned and went to sit down in his seat again. Now that he established contact, he would try to call Abby, so she could call 911. Disfarced, he pick up the plane phone and put in his lap. After, he took his wallet and a credit card and passed the in the panel in front of him. He looked at the men again for a few seconds while putting the numbers of Abby's cell phone.
' Hello ? she said after a few seconds.
' Abby ? ' he whispered on the phone.
' Luka ? Is that you ? ' she asked.
' Yeah... ' he said. ' Listen carefuly... I need you to call emergency and tell them that we were kidnaped... '
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Post by rorygilmore on Dec 26, 2006 16:20:38 GMT 10
*gulps* Oh my G*D! Hope everything turns out fine!
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Post by daniella on Dec 26, 2006 22:47:10 GMT 10
Glad to see that I can hold your atention for a few chapters, girls... Dani
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Post by daniella on Dec 26, 2006 23:45:28 GMT 10
PG - 13...
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part 7: Worried in Chicago
Abby was in a cafe, sitting on an outside table, when Luka called.
' Hello ? she said after a few seconds.
' Abby ? ' he whispered on the phone.
' Luka ? Is that you ? ' she asked.
' Yeah... ' he said. ' Listen carefuly... I need you to call emergency and tell them that we were kidnaped... '
'What ? 'she asked, worry all over her.
She stopped talking, she stopped drinking, she stopped everything at that moment.
' Abby, it's true... ' Luka said on the other line. She than heard the other passangers talking and shouts from another man. ' Call 911... '
Abby didn't need to hear it twice. She went inside the cafe and looked for the manager.
' I need you call 911... ' she said to him.
' What ? ' the manager said.
' Please, make the call... ' she said, worried. 'Hang on Luka... '
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Post by steffi1986 on Dec 27, 2006 0:46:46 GMT 10
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Post by daniella on Dec 27, 2006 2:33:59 GMT 10
I'll update tonight... now I have to convince my mother to go out soon or stay at home...
Dani
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Post by lubyfreaky on Dec 27, 2006 3:31:33 GMT 10
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Post by ERFanRach on Dec 27, 2006 10:51:23 GMT 10
Great Update!!!!
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Post by daniella on Dec 27, 2006 19:22:41 GMT 10
Update... a little different tough... PG - 13
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part 8: worried in the plane - Luka POV
' Hang on Luka... ' she says.
I sighed and look at the men. To surprise, he's on my side.
I look at him, with the phone in my ear. Busted...
He then hits me with something and I drop the phone, one because he says so and two because of the pain I felt.
Forgive- me Abby... I thought when I heard her calling my name on the other side... then I disconnect.
' No more tricks.. ' the kidnapper says, looking at the others passengers, then at me..
'Are you alright, dear ? ' asked a old woman, sitting on the besides me, on the other side of the aisle.
I nod, but don't say anything. Just keep looking at the bad guys. The one that hit me is still looking at me.
'You're bleeding... 'says the woman again
I put my hand on my the side head, near my eye and feel some blood. Picking up a napkin, I put it on my wound...
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Post by lubyfreaky on Dec 27, 2006 19:59:42 GMT 10
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Post by steffi1986 on Dec 28, 2006 7:39:52 GMT 10
OMG poor Luka, hope he'll get out of the plane very soon and not hurt so please update soon
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Post by daniella on Dec 28, 2006 22:08:19 GMT 10
sorry to keep you guys waiting... I'm a little busy with my other story... will update soon...
Dani
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Post by jadestar on Jan 2, 2007 12:37:37 GMT 10
OMG great. exciting story!!! hang on Luka
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Post by daniella on Jan 2, 2007 13:26:04 GMT 10
Sorry to the delate of this story... I'll promise that I'll udate it til Friday...
Dani
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Post by jacobsmommy on Jan 2, 2007 21:25:45 GMT 10
Come on Luka, hang in there.
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